Seizing All the Heavens

It has been serialized for more than two months, and I insist on updating more than 6,000 words every day, and finally exceeded 500,000 words. Give yourself a thumbs up. I never imagined how good the results would be, but only about ten people read it every day, and there was only one comment, which made me feel a little frustrated. I hope that readers who have read the book can leave some suggestions. It is normal to feel that it does not look good. If there are any problems, you can point out any problems. After all, Laoman is writing a book for the first time and needs to hear these opinions. Lao Man put his heart and soul into this book. Everything the protagonist does is in line with his own character setting and will try not to make people feel abrupt. His state of mind is also slowly changing with his own experiences and the influence around him. It is so illogical for a modern person who knows nothing about cultivation to kill everyone when he first arrives in another world and push away pretty girls when he sees them. It requires a process, so it may appear to be slower. The other characters are also designed with great care. Whether they are the heroines or the villains who have appeared, everything they do is in line with their own settings. They influence the protagonist and are also influenced by the protagonist. Since it is my first time to write a book, my writing skills are limited and I cannot express what I want to say in just a few sentences, so it seems a bit nagging. The fighting scenes may not have much sparkle and were not well controlled. I am very clear about my own shortcomings. If there are any other problems, I sincerely hope that readers can give me some pointers. The last thing I want to say is that as long as there are still people reading, Lao Man will continue to write. Even if there are only a dozen people, think of it as a private order for a few loyal readers [Salute]

The author, please give me a lot of encouragement for more updates. It's very interesting. As long as you don't die, you will update to the death. Although there may be a little less people watching, I think there should be more. It will definitely become popular [laughter] But the shortcomings are obvious. They are not attractive because they gain too many abilities at once. The introductions are too many and difficult to remember and feel boring. The descriptions of the sect departments are too one-time and too many to remember.

This book is good sincerely