From Feeding the People to Wearing a Yellow Robe

Write faster. You are the first in this kind of subject matter. You can really do it. You can write better than the next person, but it's just too little. It's really a pity.

It's very good. I thought it was not good after reading the reviews, but it's actually pretty good. Advantages: 1. The subject matter is not originally new, but the angle is. 2. I think the introduction of the second time traveler is also very interesting, with clear priorities. There are many novels about time-travelers. In this fictional historical novel, the main character has a time-traveler as his subordinate. It is also very interesting. 3. The writing style is not immature, the reader is fluent and interesting. Disadvantages: 1. As the little characters slowly rise, the early rhythm and excitement will be slower and less. 2. The combat power system is not considered well. There have been 0 deaths here in several wars, which is a bit unrealistic. After all, it is a close fight, and no matter how great the advantage is, there will be casualties. 3. The setting of some conflict points is still not considered well, but it is still reasonable for an fictional historical text. In summary, for those who like fictional historical texts, this book is still worth reading.

Okay, this reverse order writing method really works! The emperor's stories written by others are either inappropriate in the grinding process or have a proper ending. This reverse order writing method not only satisfies curiosity but also sets the stage for the story very well!

This book quenches my thirst. After all, there is a video on Douyin asking, what would happen if the laborers who built the Great Wall in ancient times ate white porridge and mustard? It arouses people's curiosity, but it's very uncomfortable when they go out to search and can't find it! Fortunately, this book is available! The writing is pretty good, stay tuned!

It's pretty good, with a writing technique similar to a memoir, and the beginning is quite attractive. Although there is a system, without the system, it would be impossible for everyone to have rice porridge and pickles under the conditions at that time, so it is still quite attractive.

Thanks for the invitation. I have seen the latest updated chapters. To be honest, I personally prefer novels with this theme. This novel by the author is very different from other time travel and rebirth novels. It is also very novel and creative. The plot is relatively smooth, without water, jumps, or rapid development. Whether he is writing before or after the yellow robe is added to the body, I hope the author can stabilize his mind and actively code. The necessary plot details must be included. Overall, this novel is still worth reading.

He joined the army at the age of fifteen and returned home at the age of eighty. I met a fellow countryman and there was that one at home. From a distance, it is Jun's house, with numerous pine and cypress tombs. The rabbit enters from the dog's sinus, and the pheasant flies from the beam. The valley is born in the atrium, and the sunflower is born in the well. The grain is pounded for rice, and the sunflower is picked for soup. The soup and rice are cooked for a while, but who knows? When I went out and looked eastward, my clothes were stained with tears. The cows are buzzing, the fields are sure, and the dry patches are knocking the cows' hooves. I have planted grains of grain in the official warehouse, and in the past sixty years there have been many soldiers, and the sun and the moon have brought food and grain to the carts. One day, the officers and soldiers collected the sea clothes and drove the cattle to eat beef. When they returned, you got two horns of the cattle. Recast the hoe and plow to make a pound, and the aunt's wife will carry it to the official position. If the official is not enough, it will be sold to the house. I hope that the officials will be victorious and their enemies will be overthrown soon, the peasants will have their children, cows and calves if they die, and if the officials are not dispatched, the army will have insufficient food.

The subject matter is novel, the plot is interesting and non-toxic, and the five-star praise supports it [like] "You are really hurting me [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]"

Wonderful and humorous, reading this book is like drinking nectar, such as: a severe drought is met by nectar, and the wedding room is filled with flowers and candles. Your great talent, I admire you like a surging river, endless and out of control. [Think]

It's pretty good, but the number of words is too short. It is difficult to raise books and fear that they will become useless.

The idea is very good, and the foreshadowing has been well laid out in an environment like Tomato. The only drawback is that some words were not checked and were typed incorrectly. Compared with other articles, there is no deliberate obstruction of the male protagonist, various unexplained routines, and the topic of cultivating immortals after writing. It is a standard and refreshing article [Like] The reason for four stars is that the inspiration has obviously declined after the emergence of double time travel, and the war scenes that should have been extensively described are too short, and the flashback at the beginning is a bit unclear. So, overall, I am willing to give 85 out of 100.

I read the book yesterday, cooked the rice porridge at noon today, and bought the pickled mustard on the way home in the afternoon [Thinking] It's really delicious.

It's okay as a refreshing novel, and the writing style is not wordy, the plot development is not boring, some common sense details are insufficient, and the protagonist is given a 985 identity but the knowledge is not enough to establish the character (an old man in a famine year can live to more than sixty years old, which is completely inconsistent with the population life span under ancient conditions. Even if the old man is born with longevity, according to the ancient people's marriage age, it is impossible to have only one grandson in his sixties, and the age is not right; The family conditions for boiling water for cooking are also outrageous; two large bags of rice are provided to an old and a young group of old and weak, without considering whether they have the ability to keep food. After all, the physical appearance, spirit and spirit of people who have been able to eat for a long time are definitely different from ordinary hungry people; when giving porridge to the people, not only thick porridge is given, but the amount is not limited. The body that has endured hunger for many years cannot eat in large quantities, so it should be slowly transitioned from gruel... Common sense about these details makes the article full of loopholes, and it would be more reasonable if the modern products rewarded by the system could be briefly explained so that they can automatically blend into the background of the times. Yunnan Baiyao was said to be packed in porcelain bottles, but mustard was not explained, and the description still looked like modern packaging. This kind of setting is actually not complicated. It only requires a few simple sentences to make the writing more complete. In short, overall it's okay, the plot is short and fast, and the brains are easy to eat.

I think it's pretty cool. They all have unlimited supplies and have traveled through time. What's more true? I think the low score is all because of the second time traveler. In fact, I think it's pretty good. Both of them are striving for a common goal, and they have the same goal and have something to talk about. To be honest, the protagonist is facing so many things and problems, and it's really nice to have a fellow countryman who shares a common secret. And the character of this time traveler is quite likable. You must know that if two time travelers appear on a female channel and both have gold fingers, they will definitely fight to the death. Reading novels is relaxing, and your brain can be stored for a while. Anyway, I like it personally. [Laughs] Isn't this better than the stallion harem? Isn't it better than Wu Wu Shuang Wenxiang? And each character is very vividly drawn!

It's a good book, but the author is too slow to update it. I want to save up and read it every time but I can't help it. [Cover face]

It's okay to write, please update soon But I think it may be because of the title of the book that fewer people read it. Why did the rating get so low?

Came from sand sculpture animation. This theme is really new and good. The character design is a little more fake than the sand sculpture animation, but it's not a big problem. I really hope Tomato's imaginative writings can be of this quality.

So far it's okay, it gives people a bright feeling, the subject matter is very new, the protagonist is also very silly, and the IQ is online (just a stranger, don't criticize if you don't like it)

Clear logic, quick thinking, highly recommended

Generally speaking, it is very enjoyable to read this article. It also says that there will be another time traveler in Chapter 127: 1. Double time traveler is a bold writing method 2. The author has handled the dual-traveler system quite well here. The systems are complementary to each other. The protagonist is materials, and the other is current force. And another system can increase the system space for the protagonist. 3. The protagonist graduated from 985 and the other is a relatively ordinary person. 4. Many people here say that it is not good for two systematic people to confess to each other. They say that there is only one throne. Here we can only say that benevolence sees benevolence and the wise see wisdom. Finally, if you like this kind of subject matter, you can feel free to read it. It is a relatively non-brainy and refreshing novel. The storyline advances quickly and the logic is definitely not that tight. But it doesn't affect the pleasure. I personally think it's quite in line with my taste.

It's good-looking. Although there are some minor issues that are controversial (such as the mustard bag issue), overall it's very good and funny. It incorporates a lot of jokes and also describes the poor life of ancient people very delicately. It's very good.

The end of "Spreading Flowers", I have a lot of emotions after being with you for so long The image of Zhou Yi is so well written. The other supporting characters Wang Dachui and Wu Laoliu who have been with him for a long time are all very well created. In terms of story content, the content of the story from the early stage to putting on the yellow robe can be rated 9 points. The ancient environment and the realistic materials of the plug-in system create a sense of absurdity, which really makes you want to read on. It is fascinating. But after taking the throne and launching the rocket, it became more and more weird. Maybe there was nothing to write about, but it just didn't look good. Until the parts of the world that were unified in the future (fighting Tsarist Russia, India, etc.), There were almost no scenes of Zhouyi. The writing got worse and worse later on. Maybe 7 points need to be lowered, but I still love to watch it. It's good that it's finished now. The story is just finished here. Even if it turns into a three-body, it's quite weird [laughing and crying]. I hope the next work will be polished [love]

Yes, it's a good book. The reason why there are so few people now is because the number of words is small and the time is a little short. After a while, if the number of words is more and the time is longer, the results will come out. Come on! Author

Five-star reviews start! If there are no major poisonous points, I won't modify it. Chapter 125: Double penetration, not my type, so I quit.

Although the writing is very good, I was attracted by the title, thinking that it was a brief summary of what happened before Jia Huangpao, but it turned out [laughing and crying] that it was too long and I didn't know when I could write about Jia Huangpao. I lost all interest in it immediately, but overall I still wrote it.

Most of the plot is well written. There is just one flaw: there has been no heir for more than ten years. This was unthinkable in ancient regimes. The protagonist can live without a woman, but he cannot live without an heir.

Happy New Year! I wish you good luck in the New Year, a bright future, good luck, good fortune, happiness for your family, rapid success, blessings like the East China Sea, longevity as long as the Southern Mountains, happiness, success in career, and sweet dreams.

Yes, it looks much better than others of the same type.

Overall, it's a good book, but the biggest problem is still talking about it. Many people think that the poisonous point of this book is Wang Dachui, but this is not the case. The biggest problem is that the shift from infrastructure writing to Machiavellian writing makes Golden Finger useless (or ineffective), so that the new plot can only be maintained by neta's real history. This is the biggest problem. Wang Dachui is just unpleasant at best, which is not a big problem.

The story is like a slowly unfolding picture, like a flower blooming from a bud. This kind of slow-burning story is really a story that makes people relax. .