Beiliang******

This book feels like it was written after the one next door that killed the enemy and became stronger. That one was an adopted son and this one is a relative. Treat family ties as a weight. You have to understand that Xu Fengnian never wanted to be the king of Beiliang from the beginning. Once you realize your ambition and ability, everyone should support you. Xu Xiao will let Xu Fengnian live the life he wants, so that the eldest sister does not have to marry far away from Jiangnan, and the second sister does not need to go to the academy. Long Xiang probably has to go to Longhu Mountain, and maybe he doesn't need to go.

How should I put it? The author is a god at restoring TV plots. He even restored the fight scenes, all with special effects and slow motion [laughing and crying]

Every time I see the protagonist being treated less well than Xu Fengnian, I feel annoyed.

Damn it, I finally have a snow fanfic that I can read [face covering] It looks okay, but I remember he knows Dugu Nine Swords, why not use Dugu Nine Swords? Do you have to cut them one by one with a knife? Even Linghu Chong can kill dozens of people with one sword. If he uses it, he should have no problem injuring hundreds of enemies with one sword, right?

The old lady's foot-binding was smelly and long, too boring, too bland.

So-so. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The protagonist is a bit long-winded

I don't even know what you are writing [vomit]

It's so beautifully written, I support it.

Many places were not handled well.

Okay, it's getting better and better.

The writing can be pretty good

It's so messy and it's so fucking hard to watch.

If you are trying to make things up, you should at least be logical.

Just like that, the writing is completely different.

The author is short and weak, one chapter a day

Is this system dead? I didn't even finish the task.

How did it get into the plot when it was well written? This is very boring. I have read all the original works. It makes no sense at all with the main plot. The character design is very problematic. As a decision-maker, you should be in charge of the overall situation. Executors implement it. To lay out the plot, the protagonist also needs to take action personally and what the people under his command do. The author should refer to Xu Xiao instead of Xu Fengnian.

The front and back don't match. A realm changes over and over again

It's okay, but there shouldn't be the original character Xu Qilin.

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

The writing is about the same, but there is too much nonsense! ! !

After a good early stage, I ended up wandering around in the world. I'm so stupid. Look at what the system is called.

It's not the same as the introduction. Rebellion is not like rebellion. Machiavellian tactics are not like tactics. Jianghu Chaotang is written in a messy way. It's really not possible to write in one direction. It's better to write systematically and feel better than this.

Very deliberately,

Too plain and too messy

This system is really unnecessary.

A mess

... That's it, it's okay, it's better looking than those rubbish fics

A pretty good book!