Siheyuan: Starting from Escaping from Famine and Going Against the Will of Heaven

When I saw chapters 12---13, I was confused. The protagonist's name suddenly changed.

Is it Zhang Yue or Jiang Liang?

I didn't want to read it after reading Chapter 12, and I didn't want to read it even after the names were changed. I'm afraid I don't know where it was copied, and the name is wrong, Zhang Yue or Jiang Liang. I can only give you 3⭐

I won't mention the main character's name. I'm a book reader, so I have no idea what the random sentences in the text mean. There are a lot of random sentences, and there are also some inexplicable numbers. What the hell are they? The more I listened, the more uncomfortable I became.

In the first few chapters, he was still called Zhang Yue, but later he changed his name directly to Jiang Liang.

The writing is a bit messy. At the beginning, the protagonist's surname is Zhang Mingyue, but after ten chapters it inexplicably changes to Jiang Liang. Author, are you playing?

How should I put it? It feels like a child is writing a composition [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Come on, come on, come on

After Chapter 12, the main character's name changed, and why did it feel like it was similar to another book?

No matter what you write, even the name of a pig's trotter is the same for a while, and then the name changes in the next chapter. It looks so bad.

The words at the back start to get messy, it's all about guessing.

Without any warning, the protagonist's name suddenly changed. Where did you find these books? Piece it all together.

The writing is a bit messy

There are too many typos and many places are completely incomprehensible.

I didn't know which one to use for the main character's name, or I copied it from there. I just saw the restaurant opening and I wasn't interested in reading anymore.

Except for the opening chapter, it all became a love composition. Not a single sentence was clear, and it gave me a headache.

The writing routine is okay, but there are too many typos, and the names are often wrong, which makes it uncomfortable to read. Change it

There are too many wrong sentences. Didn't you graduate from elementary school?

That protagonist

My head hurts from looking at it

A mess.

The protagonist first asked Zhang Yue to watch for a short while and then he turned into Jiang Liang. Where did the author copy this? It's simply poisonous

Very good, very exciting

After more than 20 chapters, it became a narrative, which was not interesting to read!

It's inconsistent, inexplicable, and the protagonist's name can be changed midway

The main character's name was changed randomly, Zhang Yue was changed to Jiang Liang, it was written randomly. Why don't you check it when writing a book? The main character is written in a mess, it's a rubbish book.

It was copied, I guess, and there are also contents from Dream of Red Mansions and several Siheyuan books interspersed in it. It's also amazing.

The protagonist's name suddenly changed, even his father changed his surname, and the plot was very confusing.

You have to copy your homework carefully. It's inconsistent even if you don't change your names. This is too casual...

Stop writing and go into the factory to drive screws.