After Digging Out the Golden Elixir and Leaving, the Sickly Senior Sister Regretted It

It feels like I'm watching a girl's video, both the male and female protagonists have their heads down.

The writing is not bad. If there is no extra story, it is actually a double story with a female protagonist and a male protagonist. The male protagonist's senior sister has a child, so the male protagonist's senior sister seems to be easier to forgive. The heroine Luo Qingge's character design is perfect and there are basically no flaws. In the end, the author still hopes that the senior sister will have a good ending, so he added the extra story.

Very NB Korra Four. It's been a long time since I've been satisfied with a yandere work. I only give four stars because I'm afraid the author will be proud. Update soon [angry]

Just break it off, don't be ambiguous if you don't love me. I like the plot of digging for the golden elixir at the end, but I don't like the romance part at the beginning. The writing is good, but there is too little.

The emotions are written quite delicately. There are a lot of poisonous points in the early stage, the male protagonist is very feminine, and the things he does are quite troubling, which makes the readers uncomfortable. There were a lot of improvements later on, but the male protagonist was a little disappointed. Of course, it was related to the destruction of the male protagonist's cultivation. This is the setting. The disease part is okay, it has a classic plot, which is pretty good. The bitter master Qingge was very unlucky to meet such a senior sister. Qingge's image is pretty good. I feel like it should be the ending after more than 150 chapters. I don't particularly like the ending. I still hope that the senior sister will make a mistake and suffer all the consequences. Generally speaking, since the male protagonist woke up, he has not licked his senior sister again, which is already an advantage.

When the senior sister realized that she liked Qianping, it was already too late, and the remedies she made deepened the male protagonist's dislike of the senior sister. The portrayal of the male protagonist is very good, at least he understands his own heart. When you see the morbid state of the senior sister when she was imprisoned, and the avoidance when the two met later, it will make people feel that this may be the process of life. Past mistakes cannot be forgotten, and they are strangers when they meet.

I finished watching it in one go. Although it was not particularly emotionally shocking and the plot was a bit bland, I still felt very comfortable watching it. It's not as frustrating or painful to read as those turtle novels, and it's not as perverted and inhumane as those revenge novels. The ending is pretty good, which is especially popular for people like this, so I give the author a big five stars [laughs]

You say that the male protagonist licks too much. But have you ever thought about why the male protagonist licks? Doesn't it mean that the male protagonist likes the female protagonist too much and wants to give her better? Yes, maybe in today's era, this is very annoying. But in this novel, the female protagonist doesn't have any feelings for the male protagonist. She just pursues the truth and does not realize the feelings in her heart. How can she talk about licking a dog? (Although I haven't finished it yet, I've seen it at 3/1, but I saw a lot of people saying that the male protagonist is too licking, and I feel that I can't accept it. Maybe I think it's okay to write, after all, everyone has different ideas.) I can understand the author's early writing of the male protagonist's temperament, and I can bring it in very well. And the most important thing is that there is no system. I Am True Love. The author can also give it a try. Instead of system writing, the system is simply controlling the protagonist. If there is nothing to do, I will give you a buzz, and then give you tasks and so on. Without a system, I feel like I can't survive. In fact, many novels do not have a system. I think they are very interesting, but there is a system that is disgusting. Anyway, I personally hate system books. I used to like reading them, but I seem to have read a few system books. It's so disgusting. The male protagonist is like a useless person. Without the system, he is nothing. Remove the system, and then I feel that the books are very good. I can't accept the system anyway.

I hope it's a single heroine, but it's not possible with two heroines. Why should Qingge lose? [I'm almost crying] [Crying]

It looks good, but for some reason I don't love the male protagonist anymore.

This Mu Yanyu really brought it upon herself. She abused the male protagonist too harshly in the past, but she regretted it later. The male protagonist no longer loved her. Even if she was forced to love her, she would end up with bruises all over her body. Later, she added a rebirth in the extra story, which can be considered as making up for the regret.

It looks good, but it feels a bit pity. Mu Qingge also feels it is a pity. I still prefer yandere stories with a single heroine. It feels weird to watch the two heroines. I feel like no matter which one I choose, I feel like I'm letting the other down. The ending of this family fun didn't feel detailed enough, and it was quite uncomfortable to watch. But overall I still like this book very much [Thoughts]

I read the first book by the author. I was impressed by the author's writing skills as a student. He has very good writing skills and is very delicate. He has the unique emotional and delicate writing style of a female author, and there is no so-called tauren plot. It is very pure love. The pace may become a bit fast later on, but the flaws are not hidden. I will read the next author's book. I hope the author will keep writing. Good works must support rewards.

It's good to watch. The plot develops really fast, so it's very enjoyable to watch. It must be five stars.

After reading it, overall the writing is very good and the character creation is no problem! To put it bluntly, the problem with this book is this: when the author describes something (metaphor), he likes to repeatedly compare something (fixed) to something (fixed). For example: the figure is like a ghost The picture is like a movie... The content of the story is okay, but the writing style needs to be improved. I am also a long-time fan of the author, and the performance is stable this time! Key point: Why is this book so short [angry][angry][angry]

How should I put it? In fact, I think the whole novel is well written, but when I read the novel in Tomato, I just want to have fun, and the ending is mostly happy. Edd, but this ending seems to be a family fun, in fact, because the author did not explain whether the world where Senior Sister Mu and Qian Ping live together peacefully is the main world at the beginning, which leads me to think that if it is a parallel world, then all this can be regarded as the wishful thinking of Senior Sister Mu, and the others are not the original people. In the main world, Senior Sister Mu has died long ago, and Mu Pingran, who has lost his mother, is still practicing alone. This is happy for someone like me who started out as a happy person. It's really hard to accept for people who are addicted to the end, so I give it four stars.

This is a female channel wrapped in the shell of a male channel [face covering][face covering][face covering]

It's okay. Anyway, it only took me two hours. After reading it all [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] I can probably understand all the articles. It's the first dual-heroine article I've read. It's not bad. Anyway, I like the ending of the first one. The second family reunion is too human-like.

Can Luo Qingge be promoted? If not, let me know in advance. Otherwise, I won't be able to give a bad review when I see it later. By the way, if Luo can't rise to the top, I will give a bad review [crying] [crying]

It's bad in every way, but I agree with one point. There are many similar novels, but in the end, most of the children born by the witch are good and live alone with their mothers. They don't know who their father is. They have never felt their father's love in their lives. They don't have bad parents. They are just orphans. He was entrusted to someone he trusted by his own mother.

Throughout the book, from 'The boy who was rescued' to 'You are still my little boy'. Because the injured boy refused to be redeemed by the yandere, I became interested and started reading. Logically speaking, this kind of cool novel is not worth studying. I am heartbroken, and there is always melancholy brewing in my heart. I am melancholy, desolate, and lonely, as if I am holding the moon in my hands. I always feel a little regretful, and regret that my original ideas are not worthy of the journey. The displacement and the ending. It is a pity that the structure cannot support the plot and ingenuity, and it is a pity that the author failed to persist. The whole book revolves around the conflict between the senior sister and the junior brother, creating an image of a cold, ruthless, selfish, and unscrupulous demon. It has been foreshadowed since he led the junior brother to the immortal path, and the senior sister has an unexplainable affection for him. It was originally supposed to be a happy ending for the family, but it caused irreversible turmoil because the senior sister refused to look directly into her heart. It is not obvious at a glance. The real ending of the senior sister is inevitable. It is not difficult to see that the senior sister happily accepted the gift that represented the junior brother's heart, but also gave it to others without cherishing it or even threw it away. The origin of her value quantified, alienated, and materialized her junior brother's love, and because her junior brother discovered the truth, she asked for golden elixirs to force her to compromise. From the time she violated her junior brother's wishes, she had lost the possibility of being a heroine. Later, she kidnapped her junior brother many times, imprisoned her, forced her to have sex, became a demon, and abolished her junior brother's cultivation twice, making her infertile. Throughout her life, she has been gifted since childhood, her master favored her, her junior sister was better than her, and she also had a little boy who belonged to her. Even though she made many mistakes, her master still protected her, favored her, and watched her return as she was lost. However, she made mistakes again and again and fell into the abyss. God gave her many opportunities with her junior brother. The entanglement with her junior brother was as crazy and paranoid as Heathcliff, but fate still favored her and still gave her a chance and that little boy. But the junior brother was an ordinary child, his family was destroyed, and he was cultivated by evil. At the age when his love was just beginning, he devoted his sincerity to being an unfaithful man, dug out the golden elixir, and finally found true love and cultivated it. However, he was brutally ruined, imprisoned, forced, and infertile. The suffering master of Qing Ge was turned into a green grassland, and the mortal heart was tempered and he suffered again and died! Resurrection, looking for the mirror of the past, accepting sacrifices. The author's ending is too hasty, and the cause of the past life and the consequences of this life are not clear. According to senior sister's character, it is inevitable that the ending will not include Mu Yanyu, and it is also inevitable that the changed future will not include Luo Qingge. Just like the beginning of the story, I wrote about a yandere for the sake of writing about a yandere. She lost her virginity and couldn't make up for it. Mu Yanyu lost her qualifications as a heroine. The extra episode forced a family reunion, which was also inconsistent with the character. I felt sorry for the character of Mu Yanyu. She did not create a yandere, but a clear demon cultivator: killing people, seizing treasures, and refining souls. It gave people the impression of being bullied, rather than a love that is sick to the bone.

I read it 3 times, and I feel that this is the yandere novel that best suits my taste. After reading yandere novels for three years, this book still lingers in my heart. However, the poisonous point in the early stage is more serious, and I blame my inner demon for everything. However, the later writing is level, and the final ending is also good. All in all, I think the rhythm of the plot is better. Secondly, the yandere feeling is relatively pure.

I have been following the author since his first book. After looking at the development of the plot, the author is still performing steadily. I don't know what will happen to my senior sister in the future [laughing]

Anyway, I like the ending of Parallel Time and Space. If you don't like it, don't scold me. Post your own book review

Why is the score so low? I think the writing is pretty good. Yes, it's this kind of yandere who has such a strong mouth! ! !

It's so cool to finally have a little dark room [lick screen][lick screen][lick screen]

(Gibberish for personal records) In terms of scoring. At this time, I saw that the overall score was 7.6. I personally gave it a 10. It's a thousand people and a thousand hams. I won't make too many judgments. I think it's worth it. Plot aspect. Whether it's the younger sister's jealousy or the senior sister's possessiveness, there's nothing out of the ordinary, it's all within a reasonable range, and I don't see anything that's unreasonable, and there's no problem with the logic. I'm afraid the readers forced me to write the final episode. The most regrettable part of the plot is probably the way the senior sister's children feel about the senior sister, one of the few things that made me uncomfortable. The part where the senior sister cleans up her innocence at the end is not very well written. Compared to the previous plot, it seems that your kid was delayed by other things and had no idea, so I speedrun it. I gave it 8.1 Out of 10 points, and I rounded it up to 10 points. Hmph (Tsundere) To the author. Chapter 93: You know the part about going crazy, you know it very well. Have you ever encountered a really arrogant person? Or is it just you?

In fact, the plot is okay, but the description of the character's behavior is a bit broken, and the male protagonist is a bit licky. You can still watch it, but if you can't stand the knife, or you can't accept the fact that the female protagonist and the male protagonist hurt each other in the front, but in the back, the female protagonist and the second female protagonist live together with the male protagonist's brothers in the extra story, cautiously enter the trap.

First of all, 5 stars are given to the author (if he is really a student, but I believe that the current Internet can breed more student authors, which is a good thing). Although it is still a bit broad-minded, the concept and general direction of the work are still very creative. Write a story about a sick (crazy) girl who mistook "emotion" for "inner demon (in fact, I think it is also a kind of inner demon)", with a different "crazy flavor". Come on! Hope to see better works from the author!

Although the male protagonist seems a bit useless, he is not a virgin, his determination is firm, the plot is coherent, and the character stands up from beginning to end without falling apart. It is also a good book