HP When Snape Picked up the Autistic Brian

I really want to cry, when will they have a sweet love? I can't tell now whether Xiver has a protagonist in his heart. Help [I'm about to cry]

This book is really good. Although most people complain that "Snape's love for Brian cannot be seen" and "it feels like Brian's wishful thinking", I can see that his love is hidden in his actions and words, hidden in his bad-toned but caring words to Brian, hidden in his behavior of allowing Brian to stay in his personal space. At the same time, he was also touched by Brian's behavior after moving in but not daring to make any random moves without his consent [Adoration] Anyway, I love it, although it is indeed a bit OOC. But cheers for the author! ↖(^ω^)↗It's really beautiful!

Okay, I read it from beginning to end with a frown, but that's not to say it's bad. On the contrary, I think from the perspective of a sadistic novel, it's a first-rate sadistic novel. The teacher is very good at cutting people with a blunt knife, plainly sad, and the writing is very delicate. When I read the last sentence, it was written directly without an outline, I was even more surprised. This article was a bit confusing for me. Many places were not connected and I couldn't understand it. Some of the characters were too different from what I imagined. However, I didn't take it seriously because the male protagonist's family is a prophecy family. They are basically crazy. From the perspective of the male protagonist who comes from such a family, of course his perspective is a bit incomprehensible. Yes, it's crazy. In addition, his family is very mysterious, he himself is also quite mysterious, and his life experience is caught in a time loop, so his story is more likely to be confusing. So I actually always thought that the teacher made this article so contradictory on purpose. I didn't expect that there is no outline [face covering], but this also means that the teacher's writing skills are online. If there is an outline, this article will be even more powerful. The trio of Voldemort, Abu and Brian have a close relationship as brothers and friends. The male protagonist is of a higher seniority. Most of the characters in the original work are children to him. The trio also dotes on several children, which is very cute. Even Lucius was just a child in front of Voldemort and Brian. It was so funny that Voldemort just threw a toy to Lucius and let him play with it. Before Abu's death, he voluntarily became his Death Eater servant in order to prevent Voldemort from feeling insecure. Voldemort seemed not to care much about him as a servant, and Abu seemed to fear him as his master. In fact, they were still friends, and Abu still cared about him. After Abu's death, Voldemort's words to Brian and his own psychological activities were always inseparable from Abu [crying]. He said that there was nothing interesting about a dead servant and a tombstone. In fact, it was better to go see it. I just don't think Snape and Brian have a strong sense of cliché, but because the teacher didn't have an outline, he wrote down everything he thought of, so he didn't pay attention to Snape's emotional changes in a long part. It's normal for his emotions to be stiff [crying] But if the teacher insists on saying that this is a sweet article. . All I can say is that the writing is so bad [crying] It's so cruel π_π has no sweetness at all Of course, the sorting of children of several generations and the selection of godfathers are still a little bit different. Harry entered Ravenclaw and so on, which is a bit unimaginable. I still prefer his trio [crying] And Tom ends up dead. . . After all, he has some unparalleled ambitions. As long as his ambitions are still there, Dumbledore will not be able to tolerate him, even if he is a very good family member from the male protagonist's perspective. But he is endangering the world. It's acceptable to be abused But why did you erase the male protagonist's memory of Voldemort? [Crying] It tortures me to death There is also the family line between Brian's father and Brian. I originally thought that his father was full of malice when he appeared, and he was a powerful figure with another generation of black and white demons. However, because there was no outline, he was just a madman after the truth came out. A poor madman who lost his wife and child and went completely crazy. After seeing his son again, he refused to admit that the male protagonist is his son. His setting is a bit different from what I expected, which is a pity. It seems like there are a lot of problems after saying so much, but this article is really worth reading, but it is not a light-hearted writing style, nor is it very hehe. Many people have a sad ending. Still the same sentence, top-notch sadistic writing, sweet writing that can't be tolerated [Like] All in all, I give it a high score In addition, I don't think it's a bad ending, just a bit rushed. There may be a few extras to explain the endings of other characters and how they will be better after the war. What happens to the male protagonist and Snape after he is forced to lose his memory is not said. Some are too blank. But it's still within the blank range and can't be said to be bad. I think

The characters written by the author have clear personality traits, the environment and atmosphere are great, and the connections are natural. And I like Brian very much. I fell in love with this character as soon as I saw it. He has an inexplicable sense of fate that attracts me. I like him very much [blowing kiss]

Nice! When will the love between Black and Severus come to fruition (it feels like it's all about knives and no sugar). I want to see the confession. I can't figure out who Severus loves, it seems like he still loves his ex-girlfriend after breaking up (?) Black and Riddle have a bit of a quarrel (?) (My parents are healthy. The above is just random thoughts. I may offend you. I like this book very much. I don't mean to criticize it.)

How can I put it... I feel that the period when Brian was chasing Severus was a bit confusing, that is... If you like someone who has a crush on you, even if you reject him, some feelings will be revealed inadvertently, especially the psychological description, which will be more complicated. The confession of love, to be honest, made me feel a bit stiff and the change was a bit big👀 But overall, it was still very good, and there were things I liked very much, especially the part about friendship. I also like the background of the character Brian very much. The story behind the family is revealed at the end. This sense of mystery is really good (//∇//). The writing is also very smooth. I just hope the author pays more attention to the psychological description. This is really a plus.

Too little. What exactly does Sev think about Brian? , Be anxious

This is my first time to write a book review. I think it is a great book... The Riddle in it is my favorite Riddle I have ever seen. He is flesh and blood, bad, but sometimes a little cute. He is indulgent towards Klein and hides some of his own bad qualities. He changed his methods several times because of him. But in the end Riddle died because bad is still bad. How can I put it this way... A bad person may not necessarily be terrible in every aspect, but when you are immersed in it and forget about it, you will realize at the end that he is a hopeless and complete villain no matter what. Alas, I really like Riddle in this article, including the fact that the person he misses the most is Abu... Flesh and blood, with full personality and charm. Okay, let me say it one last time, Riddle, who really loves this article😭

After reading it, it was very interesting. In the early stage, Brian was too good to Severus, so much so that many people felt that it was better to let Brian fly solo. However, maybe the author wrote it too secretly, or failed to write the feeling of transformation, which led most people to feel that Brian had been giving without receiving corresponding rewards. Later, Voldemort's matchmaking allowed the two of them to make rapid progress, and then the warm scenes described before the decisive battle were really healing. The relationship between Brian and Tom was enviable, so I think it would be better if Brian did not lose his memory. At least there would be a close friend who would remember him and visit him from time to time. It felt a little confusing in the early stage, but it got better in the later stage. Most of the pitfalls were filled, and it became sweet. Nice!

Author, are you afraid that you have read too many sadistic articles? Could this be a sweet article? When I look at it, I want Brian to switch to CP [crazy]

"Their stories are too short, so short that I can just write them down. Their lives are too long, too long to tell." They are all good, and so is the author, but - we are not suitable. After reading it, I have cried enough, I am a little tired, that's it. Also, congratulations on the completion. Spread flowers on the completion ~ the new book goes well [sending heartfelt wishes]

Hmm... It's a bit strange😳. Brian was a bit autistic in the early stage. How could such a timid person be so bold about love? He shouldn't give up so quickly on the book that is most important to him. I feel that Brian's psychological transition is missing and it is a bit too abrupt. But overall, it's still good (≧∇≦*), I especially like [blowing kiss] [sending heart]

It's very interesting, but I feel that only intuitive people worry about gains and losses. I really can't stand Snape treating him like that. I originally thought it was sweet, but the author caught me off guard, but because it was so well written, I couldn't help but read on... So the author can really torture Snape, otherwise my protagonist would be too pitiful. Please, the author please do a better job and update it! ! ! ! ! Fighting! ! ! ! ! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Love to watch! Overall, I personally quite like this book [Chigua]. Brian's love is too humble, and the professor is too cruel. When I write it in big letters, I probably won't get it back (it feels a bit too strong [laughing and crying]) Then in the book, I feel that Brian and Voldemort have a stronger sense of camaraderie [laughing and crying] and the ending is also relatively rushed [I learned it]

Although I haven't read it for long, I've read more than 20 chapters. What should I say? Personally, I have no objections to this book or its author, and I also like the protagonist and the character very much. But what makes me uncomfortable is the emotional line, which is so frustrating. But in general, the author's writing style and characterization are quite good. I give it a five-star rating^ω^ (The above only represents my personal opinion. If it offends me, I apologize. PS: If you are a reader who likes sweet little couples, it is best not to read it) Oh, my God, I really can't stand it anymore. Sorry, bye.

Yeah, yeah, I feel like Lao Fu, Abu and Ryan are both more annoying than Ryan and Sifu. The author probably forgot to write about Sifu's emotional changes. It's a very nice book. The author's writing style is smooth and fresh. It's worth reading. Our Professor Cavendier is such an authoritative person. It's Abu who can't calm down. However, the extra chapter successfully gave the best ending. Lao Fu who really likes this book

This book as a whole is sad, except for the sweetness at the back. Then I came to read this book because the last book on Private Tutoring had a lily on the cover. I thought it would be just as sweet. It's really hard to criticize. The interaction between the protagonist Gong Wu Ge and Si Jiao in the previous book was so sweet.

It's uncomfortable. Although OOC is very powerful, I am still willing to watch what happens to them in this other time and space. It took me one night to read it, and I really wanted to cry (actually I have cried so many times). I really don't want Brian to forget Tom. I really hope that after Tom's death there will be a true friend to visit him, just like Abu (I love Abu the most, I cry every time I watch it) In fact, the article is still a bit immature, but the emotion was so overwhelming that I fell into a big pit like a little deer without looking back. It's good-looking, really good-looking. If you don't watch it, you'll regret it for the rest of your life. If you watch it, you'll regret it for one day. [Cry][cry]

It's very interesting, but it's a bit sadistic. I never liked being chased before and thought it was aggrieved, but I felt very comfortable reading this one. I really like Brian's character! Totally on my cross!

What can I say, overall it's not bad. The protagonist and Severus have a bit of a fight in the early stage, but it's quite sweet later on. The ending is a bit sloppy, I wonder what became of Severus and the others. Being frustrated is the end of Tom (Voldemort). It would be better if some extra stories about them were added, but this is considered a semi-open ending (I personally don't like this). But overall the article is pretty good [ send my heartfelt thanks ]

Except for the rushed ending and the somewhat unresolved relationship between Brian, Ari and his father, the overall experience was good. The relationship between Si Jiao and Brian is very sweet after they get together. The characters may be a bit fierce, but Si Jiao and Tom are very good, especially Tom, who is rational and humane. It is really interesting. Except for the simple ending of Time Dafa without watching the last point, it is a perfect ending. Everyone survives.

Like it very much! ! ! Tom is my favorite! ! ! I didn't lose my mind, and even managed to get the couple together [laughing]. It was very cute, although there wasn't much description of the ending (although I said goodbye, it was very short, almost in one stroke, without going into details, it didn't make me get too deep, and it didn't make me feel particularly uncomfortable) The secrets that are gradually revealed later are also very good, with few chapters, which suits me [I learned it] I just feel that the protagonist's later relationship with the Sri Lankan teacher was a bit... Um... Let me think of an adjective... Xiaoniaoyiren? But it's not a big problem. The ending may be a little unclear and I didn't get hit by the knife (or maybe I'm immune [staring]), but I still feel sorry for the babies [almost crying] In short, not bad

Help, it's really beautiful and the quality is so high

It's really good to watch, the plot and plot are very good, but the ending is terrible. Although such a good person died, in the end only Brian (the protagonist) is left, and all his friends are dead. I regret Abu's death, and in this book, Voldemort was a good man, he was not that heinous, but he still died. There is only one left among the three, how can you be willing to leave him alone? You are so kind, it is really difficult to reconcile. There is also Ngebu, who broke away from his family in order not to lose his ideology, but was persecuted by the family. He lost his wife and son. He lived like crazy in the world, but he did nothing wrong, but lost the person he loved [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's pretty good to watch, but I feel like Brian was always giving silently in the early stages, which was a bit sadistic [I almost cried]

This book is not bad! The male protagonist has CP, friendship and love, laughter with tears, fan fiction. Some of the settings are novel, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The male protagonist is confused and cute, well-behaved and kind, clever, gentle and protective, and powerful. Great, keep up the good work^O^~ It's a pity that it's unfinished.

After reading it, I felt a bit mixed. I felt that it was not as well written as Wu Ge Ka Wen's article, and it felt a bit sadistic.

How to say it? Anyway, the rest of the story is very in line with my feelings. It's very sweet, and it's okay to advance the relationship. After all, we can't let Severus like Brian very much from the beginning. He still has Lily in his heart.

It's really good-looking, but I don't think it's a sweet article [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

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