[Fan Fiction of My Daughter Left the Nest and Returned an S-Rank Adventurer + Japanese Light Novel Style + Single Heroine (Appears Later) + Dual Protagonists + Some Changes to the Original Setting and Characterization]
The early part of this book mainly follows the original story, with some revisions. Original content will gradually become more prominent later on.
The middle and later parts won't consist entirely of original content. Instead, they will build on the original story, expanding its setting and world through new material to present a different story and development.
Golen Mishuyue once formed an adventurers' guild with his companions, one renowned across every continent.
Together, they basked in showers of acclaim, wealth, and power. Adventurers of their era were all eclipsed by their radiance.
They were famous “heroes” often mentioned in the streets and alleys, and people called them by many names.
Their devoted followers called them “the hope of humanity in its darkest hour,” while those they had helped and protected called them “the local guardian deities.”
Some even believed they deserved to be called “humanity's last line of defense,” while those who resented them called them “the greatest violent organization in the world.”
As one of them, Golen Mishuyue was also given titles such as “The Unbreakable Shield,” “The Wall of Sighs,” and “Lament.”
As the years passed, our protagonist Golen Mishuyue had long since retired and returned to his hometown.
Now, he was growing restless because he hadn't received a letter from his adopted daughter in a long time.
“I wonder when Elena will come back...”
To be honest, I like this book very much - its subject matter, the relationship between the characters or other things are very suitable to my taste. Although there are some problems in the writing and narrative, I still insist on reading it every day. Regarding the problem, my feeling is that the narrative is too scattered when there are multiple lines - the perspectives of the daughter, the protagonist, and Demelos jump back and forth, which resulted in a lot of writing, but the plot progressed very slowly. I personally don't mind this way of writing, but for most people, it probably won't be able to wait any longer. Finally, I wish the author good luck with his new book.
It's very healing and heartwarming. It makes me want to have a daughter.
The writing is very nice and seems to be in a daily style, but where is the original work?
It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it 😏