Prison School: Stirring Up Trouble in Tokyo

The system stretched my hips, I was afraid of death, and I didn't want to get a Wolverine, Deadpool, or demi-human healing ability. I was timid. When I saw the girl, I thought about this and that. I like to say a few sentences in Chinese and Japanese every now and then, no matter how I look at them, I feel embarrassed. Most people who write novels about Japanese comics like to do as the locals do and have a name for their little lives. They either have their souls transported to the Japanese comics and become a part of them, or they choose the name Zhang Wei? It's better to call him Zhang Dapao, Zhang Yida sounds better, or he is so indecisive, let's just call him Hyoudou Issei. Yuki Ri can fight well, but he can only watch him for the rest of his life. JB can be interrupted countless times for various things against other people's sisters.

After reading about half of the novel, the author decided to write a harem manga, so he should try not to write about supporting characters falling in love. The main character should be clearly distinguished. If you write about a supporting character who is worse than the protagonist in every aspect and flirts with a beautiful woman, and there are a lot of scenes 🍉, you have to figure out who the protagonist is. In harem novels, the male supporting character is either single, or he has a girlfriend like the Monkey King. After all, if you read variety shows, the author may not necessarily like a certain heroine, but you must also consider the readers. If the author really likes the couple, my suggestion is to downplay their presence. Nearly a third of your comics are male characters flirting with girls, which really steals too much of the scene.

When will I take over as vice president? I'm so anxious 🙂

To be honest, it's okay, but the heroine looks very awkward and she hasn't been featured for so long. Is the heroine still lesbian? Could it be that the author is a woman? There are also very few lottery effects on the protagonist, and there is an ancestor? Absolutely.

The first part is okay, but the second part is really poisonous. What kind of lesbianism is really poisonous, and then the role of the male protagonist is almost gone. Can you stop the water? I hope that the lesbianism can be removed in the later part. It is really poisonous. If you want to engage in lesbianism, don't accept it in the first place. It is really poisonous. Also, it feels like the goodwill is wasted. Tao Zi and his girlfriend suddenly feel like they have become someone else. Although they are women, they still feel a bit ex, otherwise this is too poisonous. I hope the author can change it later 🤮.

The character creation is so bad. I don't even know what to say about the protagonist. Some of the confusing behaviors are quite embarrassing. The author doesn't distinguish between him and her, and often writes her as him. As for the plot, I have no expectations. The plots of most novels are equally bad. This one is barely readable.

Regarding things like your writing about lesbianism, you can't control the rewards given out. Pigfoot even accepted that his harem was a lesbian, and he was still green and planned to let the protagonist find a few more women to let her play with. This matter would not make the two stars feel sorry.

What's going on in the following chapters? [Hold face][Hold face] I'm not here to watch the various psychological dramas of the supporting characters. What about the protagonist? Most of them are system rewards for various functions. In the past, the female protagonist focused on caring about the male protagonist, but now it focuses on lesbians. The protagonist's role has been touched twice. No matter how fully written the lesbian part is, it feels like the protagonist is no longer in the heart.

Generally speaking, there are too many scenes with the five-man gang in the prison, more than the main characters, and the things these five-man gang do are disgusting. Can we leave out those few more people? And he and she felt uncomfortable looking at each other.

Oh, you are so green, author, I thought they were lying. Who would want to read what you wrote like this? Many people don't like harem. How many people are still willing to read this show? Basically, all the comments are scolding except dragging. If the outline is not changed, this lesbian will not be changed. Your book can be finished