Genshin Impact: People Are in Fontaine, and They Take in the Twins at the Beginning

Answer me, supreme author! ! !

The design of the protagonist is very personal. He changes from male to female, but does not lose the charm and personality of the male. He also has the personality, habits, etc. Of the female. There are not many shortcomings or poisonous points. It can be said to be a more recommended fan derivative work🌚🌚🌚

Big cheers for the author! Although there are only eleven chapters, I really like your writing style. I hope you can stick to it. It would be better if you can keep updating. I see that most of them are updated in the afternoon or even early in the morning. Although I also want to update as soon as possible, I hope you have a good rest first and don't stay up late. If you are exhausted because you have to update the article, you will feel a little guilty. You should have a good rest, your health is the most important thing [laughs]

It's good-looking, the characters are vivid and the plot is exciting. The author doesn't ask for 5 chapters a day, as long as it doesn't become a missing person or has no updates.

It's so nice. I haven't commented before. It seems it's too late to comment now.

If you can trick the God of Rock into the water (hehe Zhongli hehe [laughing evilly]), I will give you all the 7 huge sums of money I saved in Tomato. The first thing I will do when I get the mobile phone during the school holidays is to give you reminders to get good reviews. Netizens can prove it, and you can write slowly as long as you have it if you are not in a hurry. One of the best among the books. I don't really like brainless love, but I like the feeling of gentlemen's friendship being as light as water. It's very comfortable and warm. As long as I don't have to deal with it, I will continue to accompany this book. The author's writing is very good. Come on, come on ＾0＾~[Like a post] (I have given a five-star and extended review)

This book is really good to read, and as a male time traveler, there are very few dirty words, and it reads smoothly. Unlike most books, the character of the time traveler seems very... Um... Inconsistent in Teyvat. It is also one of the best books I have ever read, but I just don't understand why the rating is so low... I wouldn't be surprised at 9.5.

It's very interesting, but I still have some opinions about having children [crazy] There's no malice, I just really don't want the heroine to have children or get married or anything like that. I want a girl to post it [crazy] [crazy] 555555 [crying]

I started reading it when I was in sixth grade. To be honest, I didn't even bother reading the title and introduction at that time. But there weren't any good books, so I had no choice but to read it. But... There are many people who don't approve of you, but you are the most up-to-date. This book has been published for the fourth time now. Jiang Yu is a very good character. From an ordinary person to playing the role of the water god and then the tree king, he/she makes me extremely tired almost every chapter. He/she made me realize that this is what we call human beings. As far as I know, Cherry Tomatoes are no longer what they used to be. The review mechanism of Cherry Tomatoes is not to reward whoever writes well. It is predetermined in advance: You wrote this book, okay, you discussed it with me, there is a place for you here, and you wrote this book without consulting me? There is no cooperation between us, why should I let you in my territory? To be honest, this book written by the author can be regarded as one of the worst books I have ever read. Although the characters it depicts are not as good as those in those good books, it allows us to see the growth of small characters. If the author chooses the right time, the rules of cherry tomatoes are not so evil. This is definitely a good book in the related book circle!

Ps: I'm just writing a fanfic, it may not be well written, so if you don't like it, you don't have to read it. On the warm grass, a white-haired girl lay quietly on the ground and fell asleep. "Zi" There was an electronic sound in the sky, and the next second, a crack appeared in the sky. The crack continued to expand, and a humanoid creature came out of it. The humanoid creature was completely black, with dozens of strange balls beside it. The humanoid creature glanced in Jiang Yu's direction and pointed at Jiang Yu. A ball that looked like a humanoid creature flew out of Jiang Yu's body, and it was none other than Jiang Yu's system. "G36LT type, when this host is not asleep, retransmit it to "Tevat" to complete the mission of defeating the "Keeper of Heavenly Law". " "Received the order from the Lord God——Start to return to Teyvat" After that, the humanoid creature put Jiang Yu's system into Jiang Yu's body again. "Re-entering the continent of Teyvat——" "!!!" "Alert! Alert! Affected by the World Tree - the timeline is being reorganized -" The creature named Lord God glanced at it and sent out a burst of energy from his hand into Jiang Yu's body. "Zi——Status:??" "Start the original timeline: Fontaine——" The writing may not be good, please don't comment.

The author must be happy in real life. Painful things are the training of people. The sharp edge of a sword comes from sharpening, and the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold. The author must have everything go as he wishes in real life and have great luck! ! ! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, we're opening a new book, don't forget us [salute][salute][salute]

There is nothing wrong with this book except that the writing is a bit bad. It's just that I like watching lesbians [face covering]

A very good book, the plot is reasonable, the plot is vivid, and the sense of substitution is strong

The emotions are in place, the writing is excellent, the structure is clear, the content is clever, original and the logic is perfect. In particular, the shaping of the character's personality is similar to the character shaping technique in "A Dream of Red Mansions". The only fly in the ointment is that the progress of the chapters is like smoke climbing up the sun, and it is not enough to satisfy the eyes, which is really sad.

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It's super good, but the author's updates are too slow. You have to keep up. I didn't read it for long, but you can try this later. Jiang Yu opened a small shop in Xumi City and saved Dolly's sister who died because she had no money for medical treatment.

The writing is really considered to be the best among the many fanfics on Tomato. The plot is very creative and does not seem ridiculous. The progress speed is quite moderate and it is relatively comfortable to read. Come on. By the way, one more thing, the author, can you update it for your children as soon as possible?

How can I put it this way? I think this book is one of the best among Genshin Impact fanfics. The emotional lines are not messy and the plot is not broken yet. Generally speaking, it is a very good quality work. The protagonist has a good personality and the plot is more daily life. However, the plot progress is a bit slow. In fact, small things can be skipped as long as they are skipped. However, it also shows that the author is very careful. I think this book will be good at this pace. I really like the characters of this novel, but the main plot just needs to be advanced quickly.

The author writes well. I have a small request here. If I want to write about travelers, can I write about male travelers? I see other fans writing about female travelers, and I'm almost tired of reading them.

It's very nice, but you have to pay attention to some comment sections that are a bit like that, a bit... H, now that I'm watching this, don't tell me that Jiang Yu is awesome! ! ! The front part of this one is full of sweetness, and the updated one is full of knives. The back part is full of knives in the sinner's dance steps.

I think it's good (≧∇≦*) and I really like watching it [Blowing Kiss] It fits the characteristics of the characters very well [Sending Hearts] The extra story is also quite interesting, but don't be too aggressive [Laughing] I like the daily life of the three little ones and the protagonist the most. I don't know if there will be a scene later [Smirking], or maybe it's Sora. I hope the author can consider it [Blowing Kiss]

While maintaining the original work, it also has its own thoughts and creativity, which is a rare masterpiece.

2024.2.24 21:40 It's pretty good, but it turned out that the book was reviewed :( Rotten Tomatoes 2024.4.24 16:05 I now find that such a good book has been suppressed... Rotten Tomatoes! ! !

There are some parts that I can't understand. But the plot always gives me an unexpected experience. I feel that it would be a pity if this book was discontinued. I don't know what other people think of this book, but I like it very much.

It's very interesting, but I have some regrets. I'm looking forward to the author's next book.

It's really good-looking, but it's also really slow to update. It takes about two or three days to write a story about male-to-female transformation, mainly about saving the water god and the grass god. Anyway, it's quite nice, but it would be great if the author could improve the update speed.

Cool ~ and the quality of the work is also very good

I really like reading it. Come on, the author is awesome.

I quit halfway through the five-star review. I quit after chasing it all night. The reason why I quit was not because the writing was bad, but because the writing was very good and it fulfilled some other fantasies. I quit when I saw the interaction with Fu. I really don't want to see Fu go through such an experience again.

How should I put it? There are a few wonderful characters among Genshin Impact writers. They are not stereotyped or have a sense of death. Although there are some emotional stories, they are not annoying at all. The main reason is that the content makes people feel funny, interesting and attractive. It is a good article. I hope the author will continue to work hard. If you dare to cut it, I will hack your computer and send you a razor blade.