Turn Around*************

The author's writing is very good. The heroine's love that lasts for decades is very touching and reminds me of Mo Xiaoju. It's okay not to write a confession for the time being. After all, the ambiguous period before establishing a relationship is actually the most enjoyable. It is recommended to design some plots where the heroine is jealous, which will be more interesting.

In fact, I think it's quite good. The writing style is very delicate and helps the emotional fluctuations. The emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists are more realistic and more everyday. However, the surrounding environment can be described better, so that the content will be richer. [Sinister smile]

This book is really good and the logic is quite clear. I just hope it won't collapse later. Author, are you really not going to make up the 2 chapters @Carmenkamn that were not updated on October 1st? [Smile] To be honest, I have seen good writing, good logic, and good plot, but there are not many that can achieve two or more things. I can count them on one hand. As long as this book stays like this, it can get a high score, but you have to exclude the kind of malicious low score. I have a book on my bookshelf that is similar to this type. What I like most about this book are the first few chapters, and the author also listened to his advice and knew how to correct some things. At present, except for the bad things at the beginning, there are no problems with this book. You can read it with confidence [Like]

Others are reborn in the third year of high school, but you are reborn in the first year of high school. Isn't it too early? I have read too many rebirth books, and I am tired of the various routines of the protagonist pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger, and being slapped in the face, so I focus more on the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. So for me, the interaction between Xiaochi Ling and Xiao Shitou is not muddled, but rather poignant. Xiaochi Ling is a short-haired elf who is very comfortable and decent. It's not the kind of nurturing template where the weak and beautiful need to be rescued, nor is it the kind of arrogant and barbaric template. Koike Ling is strong and self-respecting but always able to interact with the man she loves in a timely and gentle manner. She is beautiful and energetic but can naturally maintain a suitable sense of boundaries with the people around her. She is simple but not stupid, and is kind but not a virgin. The explosive force value only appears when it should be used, and everything is just right. The feeling she gives you is exactly what you want, and what she understands is exactly what you want to be understood. A short-haired elf who has eyes for you but can walk side by side with you. There can be such an existence in the world. I think this is the persistence of Xiao Shitou's desperate running. I would like to see you in the south, and see you in the light. Xiao Chi Ling should be my favorite heroine on Tomato, and she is the code word for the fairy girlfriend, but inexplicably I feel that Xiao Chi Ling is very down-to-earth, which is exactly the opposite of Su Yu Xi, whom I liked seven years ago. After all, Xiao Xi is a true god-like existence (laughs). It was really a pity that the update was discontinued due to poor grades and too many malicious negative reviews for a period of time. Now that it has been steadily continued, I feel that fate is unpredictable, and maybe life is really like a piece of chocolate. It's just that all people and things have an end. I only have a very simple wish. I hope Xiaochi Ling gets what he wants and has a smooth life. After all, such a cute and beautiful green plum next door deserves a perfect ending.

What happens to your ex-girlfriend after the breakup?

The heroine is well portrayed and the whole story is very comfortable to read.

It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, my eyes lit up. Although I haven't read many chapters yet, I already found it very interesting. The author's writing style is very good, and the content and subject matter are also very novel. Five stars [send heart] Come on

It's very well written. Come on, it will become popular.

To be honest, although I have only read ten chapters, I have a lot to say. I am a sophomore in high school. What the author describes in the article is basically the same as our school. This always reminds me of my school when reading. The author's writing is good, but I personally feel It's not a good idea to go back to the first year of high school. You can go back to the second semester of the second year of high school or the third year of high school. If it's the first year of high school, it's too long and the details will make people bored. Too concise and superficial will make the book lacking and give people a sense of emptiness. I haven't found the rest yet. It's good, good, save! Excellent~

This book is very good and worth recommending. Tiezi should update it quickly, otherwise I will send you a razor blade [Hold][Hold]

I think the author's writing is very good. This is the first time I read this type of novel. To be honest, the author's writing style is very good, but I feel that the subsequent plot is a bit delayed. The author can advance the main plot progress when the male and female protagonists are ambiguous. I hope the author will get better and better [Love] [Love] [Love]

I stayed up late for 17 hours to finish reading 244 chapters. It's very interesting. The psychology and appearance of the characters are described very delicately. The fluctuations between two people when they are together are very consistent with common sense in life. However, I still admire Shi Ying's strong sense. I like it very much and give my full support [Love] [Love] [Love]

The three views are very upright, but I started writing it when I was in the first year of high school, and the pace is still slow, which makes me worried about the subsequent plot, but the writing is okay, so keep up the good work.

Well written! ……Hey-hey

Come on, the author [makes a face]

The author can write better

It's the best so far. I hope the author will update it soon.

The writing is really good. I wrote some scenes with Li Feiyan in the front, but basically disappeared in the back. Most of them are the heroine's scenes. This one is really good. After reading 60 chapters, there are no other love scenes except the male and female protagonists. I really fell in love with this one [Chigua]

Pretty good, so far.

It's really beautiful and the writing is also very good. I love it.

His grandma, because of this novel of yours, I almost fell asleep, and I haven't updated it yet. It's already almost 12 o'clock. Can you update it earlier?

The plot is good, good luck to the author!

It's pretty good. Let's get together soon.

It's pretty good. Just be sweet and that's it. [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's so sweet, I'm so sweet as a guy [crying] [crying]

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's not beautiful enough, it's not beautiful enough

This book is really good. I hope the author can continue to persevere and not end it. [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] It's not enough to read at all. The author will update more [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It's so good-looking, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

Ahhhh, I love it so much, it's so sweet, I like it so much

Yes, the relationship progresses step by step, and the male protagonist is principled and not brainless.