Cultivation************

The creativity in the book is quite new. Although the plot of the novel is a bit old and some classic poisonous points still exist, from Tomato's point of view, this is a pretty good novel (I have read dozens of comments, please forgive me if you have different opinions) If the five stars I gave at the beginning were my expectations for this book, then the two stars are my disappointment for this book. The subject matter is quite good, but some things are poorly written. The routine of crazy slaps in the face in the human world is too frequent. Unfortunately, the word count prevents this small book from reaching a certain height.

The harem has many different types of heroines and the strategy is quite interesting. The shortcomings are that the names are often mistyped and lightning protection is not very careful. Occasionally the heroine is physically touched by the villain. Also, the protagonist has no secret. I hope the back is more mysterious.

I feel that the progress can be faster. After all, a foundation builder can run so fast and it feels invincible. When you reach the Golden Core, you are basically invincible on earth, right? So it doesn't matter if the progress is faster. The entire planet doesn't know how to develop it. It's best to go faster.

It's really beautiful. Please give the author a good job. Five stars, please update as soon as possible, these dozens of photos are not enough

Overall, it's quite good to watch. At least it makes me want to watch it. The main plot of traveling between two worlds is very good, and the copying and plundering of physical and spiritual roots are also interesting. The most rare thing is that the author's attitude is simply touching. This kind of author can't bear to give him a review below five stars [Love]

It's so exciting, there's nothing serious about it. It is recommended to read this article without thinking

The structure here is clear, and the story described makes me want to read it again. The shortcoming of this book is that the process of genocide described in the book is a bit bloody, and it should be explained in writing. It is recommended to write more stories about dual cultivation to increase the excitement. Another point is that this book is updated too slowly. The author will improve it. Thank you! Hurry up and update

Just read it as a cool article, don't worry too much.

The content is wonderful, but short and weak. The author tells me your home address and will send you some local specialties from my hometown [Note]

The early part was good, but the eunuch time in the middle and later stages was too long. The author himself forgot some of the previous character stories and repeated the scenes. Now I guess this round of eunuchs will not end until 2026 next year. What a pity [awkward laugh]

This is so cool. If you like harems, come and check it out. However, the world of cultivating immortals actually appeared in \one minute\second\time and so on. It was too dramatic. If it takes a stick of incense or a cup of tea, it would be almost done.

Very nice! Quick update! Come on! Effort! Awesome! ! Update soon! Normally I can write millions of words, so hurry up and update!

Good writing. Keep it up. It's very to my liking. Never ink. Fairy World Vivinono. The Earth Punches Out. Funny and refreshing. Hurry up.

It's not bad. I can't practice cultivation anymore. I still have to go to school. I'm usually submissive. I occasionally act like a little villain to pretend to be a cup of tea.

After reading Chapter 10, you can be sure that the author has good writing style. Just like good tea, you will know whether the tea is good as soon as you brew it and take the first sip. I hope the author will write better and better in the future, just like good tea, the more you brew it, the better it tastes.

I must support it. After reading Tomato for so long, this is the first time I have the desire to comment. This book is still very powerful.

It's someone who has entered the world of immortality, not other articles like this, which are nothing but holy shit, but this is really cruel, cold-blooded and decisive, and the more you look at it, the better it gets.

Very good-looking, with personality, goals, and a bit of a bad streak. I like it. I support it.

So cool, so cool. Absolutely cool article. The author must finish writing.

This book is very readable and the plot is fascinating.

Wonderful, domineering, and invincible. It's really a cool article. Every chapter is short and concise. The yin and yang is a great success. I read countless women. It lasted three days and three nights without rest. Looking forward to the follow-up and faster updates.

It's so cool, everyone should come and see it [smile][smile][smile]

God-level cool article, it's over in a hurry, the author, please give it a try! [Blowing kiss]

The content is exciting and rich, and the colorful elements make the article better.

It's very beautiful, especially his self-created realm. Oh my god, it's so authoritative. It's comparable to the person who created the original realm of human, immortal and earthly immortals. I'm not bragging. Let's just move to the end and see his hair. I'm blinded by titanium alloy. I'm stunned.

It's so beautiful, I feel like I'm back 10 years ago, 10 years younger, watch it for me [crying][crying][crying]

My skills have increased recently, it feels good to see this [like]

For a man, this book is very good.

A bit overbearing, but I like it, but it has a few flaws!

Okay, I like this kind of cool article. The rating is too low. It shouldn't be.