Be a Big Boss in the Previous Civilization

It's a very good book. I think there are many advantages to choosing a background of civilization before the collapse of the Three Kingdoms. For example, a modern background can better bring into the story and trigger emotional resonance. For example, under the inevitable fate of destruction, human beings do not succumb to fate and strive to create a way for themselves. The number of characters is also easier to control, so that there will not be too many maps and too many characters. This is very important for the shaping of the characters. In this book, the protagonist grows up in the midst of loss, and his unyielding spirit is somewhat reminiscent of Russian literature. However, the humorous daily descriptions make this book not too serious to read. The author's narrative rhythm is also relatively gentle, making it more comfortable to read. The book also contains some of the author's own thoughts, and the author has his own unique narrative style, which distinguishes him from other works. The author writes very carefully, and I can clearly feel the author's growth in writing. I personally think that the author's progress has been obvious after writing the last book. Keep up the good work (ง •̀_•́)ง, I'm still looking forward to the follow-up story of Modern Civilization. Speaking of which, what's going on with the author's update? It doesn't seem to be very stable [laughing]

It's rare to find a decent protagonist. Except for the fact that his adopted daughter (Mebius) fell in love with him, which caused a hurdle in his heart, and the love line has never developed, there is nothing wrong with it. The plot is also great.

It's great to see, but the most important thing is—— It was so much fun! And there is———— Believe it? You really believe me and I have comments! ! ! Ah ha ha ha ha! ! !

The creativity in the book is very good. Lei's character creation is very similar to that of a father. Under his protection, everyone survives. The plot concept is also very good. The only flaw is that you are really slow to update. As a mature author, how can you update once every few days? Three updates a day should be normal. Come on, please update more.

It's so pretty, I'm like ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎ It's so fucking sweet, but can you please post more, it's not enough to watch.

Come on! Good-for-nothing old man! Hurry up and write "Kouya", it's not enough to read, there are only two chapters in one day, at this speed, you will have to crawl to Florida to finish "Kouya"!

Come on, blue-haired big brother! ! , Don't stop reading both books.

This is the most readable pre-civilization book I have read. It is full of humor and true feelings. Everyone can make a deep impression on me. Although there are some OOCs, it is very normal for us to create OOCs, not to mention that these OOCs portray the characters better. In short, it is highly recommended [like][like][take a closer look]

Personally, I think the writing is better than most of the Honkai Impact novels on Tomato. The character descriptions are also good, and the protagonist Lei's sense of vicissitudes of life is brought out. Unfortunately, Honkai Impact novels are still too niche. I think the rating is definitely low.

It's a good book, Lei's writing is incomparable, and the author's writing style is also very good, but the update is too slow, especially in modern civilization, where updating a chapter in two or three days is the norm, but it is also very beautiful, so I highly recommend it [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The plot is currently stable, there are no knives, the protagonist is very young, updates are frequent and early, and the characters have outstanding personalities.

I have always thought that the author is writing novels in prose. He should have read a lot of poetry and prose. The vocabulary is not gorgeous, but it matches well. He seems to like writing modern poetry very much. It has a plot and writing, and it is a good fanfic. If you play Honkai Impact 3 but have not read this fanfic, it will be a big regret.

This book is really good-looking. I dye it when it's time to dye it, and it's good when it's time to be good. The characters are very vivid. Many of the characters made me feel the kind of feeling created by the famous Tomato writer. Although the writing is a bit sloppy, I think the author will definitely grow in the future.

This is really good-looking. Some of the author's writings have an epic feel. Taken together, sometimes I am deeply involved in reading, and I really feel moved, sad, and happy in my heart. (I don't rule out that I am an emotional person). I personally feel that the writing is quite good. The supervisor commented: It is good-looking and can be followed.

I just saw the latest chapter. It's a good book. In fact, if the author hadn't looked at it and discovered that I had read his last book, and that the previous book was very interesting, I would have probably been deceived by the introduction. [Cover face] Anyway, it looks good! Say important things three times! Nice! Nice! Nice! [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]

The best written pre-civilization I have ever seen, not to mention the single heroine Snake, the emotional line is also very delicate and sweet, come on! But the author hasn't updated it in 5 days, so he won't...

Watching "Pre-Civilization" you can see Lei who shoulders all the responsibility to protect everyone, watching "Cultivation Manual" you can see the gentle, considerate and tolerant Chen Che, watching "Mr. Yang" you can see... (I haven't read it yet, so I don't know (๑＞ڡ＜)☆) ps: They are all unique and worth reading (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking knife... Ah, no, it's so sweet and so painful.

It's really good to read, but I feel like the author is too slow in updating it, every two days. The donkeys in the production team don't rest like you.

Grandma, why? Why is it written so well? This is truly the most beautifully written Honkai Impact fanfic I have ever seen. Of course, it may be that I am ignorant and want to refute my point of leaving the title of the book.

Sweet! So sweet! Really fatal! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry] An author who likes to bully readers keeps competing with us for first place [crying]

Very nice! ! ! Explosive push! ! ! [Asking for more explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Like][Like][Like]

It is updated quickly, the theme is sublimated, and it does not blindly follow the main line. The insertion of the characters is not inconsistent. There are knives but also positive energy. It has a good atmosphere of empathy. The responsibilities of soldiers, iron blood, and humor are very suitable for my appetite. However, why is the score so low? It is highly recommended at least 9.6 Points.

Very good, the content is interesting and not procrastinating. Why is the score so low!

Don't ask, it's very interesting to ask, but updates are too slow. I suggest the author to update 21 times a week.

I can only say that this is my favorite Beng San article so far. There are too few authors, but it is really good.

It's very beautiful and the author's writing is very good. The protagonist is like a giant leading everyone forward.

The writing is delicate and the characters are well-drawn. It's beautiful and I love to read it.

The writing is very good, the characters are really realistic, everyone is alive, and every life exists.

It's very interesting. It's the second best among the three Honkai Impact novels I've seen. The writing style is very comfortable, unlike other high-scoring novels that are very confusing.