I'm Here to Save You, Little Wolf

How to put it this way, this article is generally good, but the interludes in the middle, that is, the description of Chen Feng's past are too abrupt, and the constant jumps in time and space will create a bad impression. Sometimes it is not necessary to immediately "satisfy the reader's curiosity" to know what happened to him. You can adjust it slightly and put it in a different place to get twice the result with half the effort. Secondly, it can be seen that the author tried his best to depict such a tragic character as Chen Feng, but too deliberate description will lead to a kind of "fatigue", which is too monotonous and boring, and inevitably makes him a little "impatient". You can use more profiles and details to describe this character, which not only deepens the character but also deepens the connotation of the article. The third reason is that the dialogue between the characters is too straightforward. I mentioned it in the commentary and won't repeat it again. In short, the author took a step that I dare not take and chose to create such a tragic character. This is what I have always wanted to do. It can be said that the author is a "pioneer" for me. I follow you, and everything I publish is not only an evaluation of you, but also an examination of me. So my words are not malicious, I hope you will get better and better, and you can see our common progress. Four stars presented.

I personally think the author's writing is really good. Chen Feng in the book is very similar to a good friend of mine. It's really well written, I like it very much

The best book I've ever read

To be honest, the character creation is also quite successful... Although it is a bit cynical and can even be said to be unjust, it is this kind of writing that makes people feel sincere (and children like to read this kind of thing (?)... The author, please come on, don't give up and keep going! There are still many beautiful things waiting for you in this world... How can you see the possibilities of the future if you don't keep running... (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

Not bad. Good-looking. I want to see it again.

It's really good to watch. If you are a gay person who is not so sensitive, you will definitely become sensitive after reading it.

Can you read my novel?

I think it looks good

Every author deserves to be recommended

Not much to say, but to say more is "Excellent", which makes me sensitive [crying] (Excellent: very good)

The writing is very good, the author should write more, it looks good, the author should work hard [Adoration]

The author should make more clips about Dian Chenfeng and use less knives. I want to see the author write sweet [smile][smile][smile]

The knife is sweet and beautiful [Blowing Kiss]

There are quite a lot of emotional lines

The little white wolf is so pitiful. The author must have experienced this. Hug Chen Feng.

It looks good, so I give it five stars.

I still don't feel like it's pricking. I cached it for offline reading... How much did the author change it?