Sweet Temptation! Reborn as My Brother's Beloved

It's okay. I finished reading it in one go. If the author can read this message, he can clarify the confusion. In Chapter 8, did Pei Ze's grandmother die before or after the heroine's identity was revealed? In Chapter 8 your description is inconsistent.

I skipped to the ending halfway through. I gave four stars to the author, who must be a newbie. Keep up the good work. There are some small details. When I mentioned what happened to the male protagonist, he was always referred to as his brother instead of his name. At the end, the male and female protagonists were already in love, and it was written that the male protagonist grabbed his sister and so on [awkward laugh]

The whole article is quite good, there are some minor bugs but the flaws are not outweighed. In terms of character design, I really like it. There is a degree of relaxation, especially the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, which really makes me feel the tension.

Okay, okay, fake siblings, real siblings, be bolder, give me more, I like to watch (⑉°з°)-♡

The way the heroine handles the people around her after her rebirth is consistent with the heroine's own personality and not obtrusive. I like this very much! Who can not love the gentle, delicate and self-reliant little heroine [Blowing Kiss]

The story is a good one, but the level is average. I didn't feel anything about the love plot you wrote. In the early stage, the brother's appearance rate was less than one-third. The heroine said that she didn't like it anymore and she could live with her ex. She and her brother had just met and they could live together. Come on!

It's so beautiful [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

Good-looking, good-looking [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's great. Why are there so few comments? Thank you to the author.

The character design touched my heart. It looks so good.