After Dressing up as a Scumbag, I Just Want to Have Sex with My Beautiful Wife

I originally wanted to give it four stars, but after thinking about it, I decided to give it five stars. I hope the writing can get better and better. After all, writing a book is not easy. Although I feel that this book still has many shortcomings, I think it would be good if I could write it. After thinking about it for n minutes, I still want to complain about it. First of all, the first point is that Weizhou and the male protagonist's younger brother are not females. Why are they called young masters? The second point is that Weizhou was punished. You somehow got to the male protagonist's side, and then you wrote a few sentences and was insulted. It made you very confused. After I saw the punishment, I thought there would be no more problems and I would get off the plane. Inexplicably, I wrote a few more sentences and then ended up in an alley. I didn't understand why it was set up like this. The third point is that the beginning is not as good as instilling memories. I feel that there is a problem with the writing of the beginning. It passes through inexplicably, and then the change is a bit too big. If you just say amnesia, it means that the memory is lost until marriage. According to the original setting of the original owner, he would not be so kind to the heroine. This makes the status seem to be reversed. The fourth point is that the status between these insects is not very obvious. The male protagonist is obviously a male insect from a big family, and he is not as good as the insect from a lower-level family who deceived the heroine's best friend and turned into a scumbag. Let me give you an analogy. In ancient times, would a fifth-rank official dare to touch the family members of a first-rank official? Well, forget it, I don't want to say too much. In short, I feel that this book has a lot of minor flaws. I didn't want to say it at first, but I still said it. Well, in fact, I just hope that the author can write books at a higher and higher level. This book does not seem to be very popular at the moment, with few comments. Of course, if the author or other book friends have different opinions, you can also say it.

That is to say, there are a lot of wrong sentences. It is generally better for the author to proofread it after writing it. Also, can the character of the protagonist be a little stronger? At least it would be better not to let the supporting characters morally kidnap. [Sending my heart] There is also the author's discussion of Shou and Shou's friends and Gong's younger brother. Brother, can you not meet wretched people every time you go out? You can also thank them for their career development and so on [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] The above opinions are for reference only, I hope you don't mind [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [love]

The cool breeze in summer brings out the meaning of writing, and all the grace and beauty are his

The relationship between the couple is quite sweet. But it may be due to different personal preferences. I don't really like the plot of casual cannon fodder who just misses the couple and wants to have sex with them. And after reading more than forty chapters, I always feel that the husband and wife are too kind in some things. Overall, Da Da's writing is very good. I hope Da Da's work can attract more readers who like this book.

Great author! Update it, please. I like this book so much

It's so well written, please give the author a boost and update quickly [Blowing kiss][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Screen licking][Screen licking][Screen licking]

I really cried TT, why has it been removed from the shelves? I still want to watch it again.

Looks good, come on

It looks good, come on, the author is great

Can the author write off all those annoying guys [crying][crying][crying]

I have a friend... Well, that's me. I want you to update [crying][crying]

Good luck to the author, the writing is beautiful, the plot is tight and the characters have a good relationship [blowing kiss]

The plot is interesting and looks good

Beautiful👌, so pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Damn, I'm hungry, I'm hungry. [Put your lips]

Why was it removed? Why? I'm going to make a fuss and haven't recovered yet. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Is there anywhere else I can watch it?

Now the writing is very good, whether it is the plot or the psychology of the characters, it must be five stars [please update] [send heartfelt]

Why is it being removed from the shelves? It's not easy to find a novel that suits my heart [crying]

Very interesting, thank you to the author