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Well, this is one of the better ones among all the transformation novels I have read. Especially the ones written before going to the Howling Abyss are very good. But after entering the Howling Abyss, it is very strange. The ordinary dungeon protagonist becomes extraordinary, and then the Howling Abyss is a super big pit, and the protagonist does not even have a soldier guarding the city gate. It's not easy to fight, but suddenly the combat power description is raised to the world and true god level. The ghost's shadow destroys a world in an instant, and this world is about ten galaxies in size. The protagonist's mental endurance is okay, but it is not invincible. Time travel starts again, and the decisive killing is not seen too much. There are so many people in the deep pit who know that this is an invincible god, but they are still thinking of ways to escape instead of decisively choosing to exit the dungeon. They don't exit the dungeon until they are controlled, and then they can't exit. Behind them are ghosts and mechanical gods, and then they casually solve the crisis and dig a hole. The span of combat power before and after is too big, and there is not even a hole. It's a transitional plot. I don't know why the abyss clone appeared, and then it was killed and projected again. I don't know what Tiandao is doing. This is still a level 20 dungeon, the kind that a lot of people played every day before the time travel. The protagonist's first time playing and encountering it ended up being a blessing in disguise. I don't know if all this counts in the three? Lucky value, but the span of going back and forth and the non-stop voice-over do affect the perception a bit. I'm curious about how to fill this hole later. Overall, the perception is OK. I can skip the troublesome attribute introduction and the like. If you listen to the book, you may feel a little numb because you can't jump to listen at any time. I hope that the writing will be better in the future and I will also support the author [I learned it]

This novel is so beautiful, not only the novel, but also the cosplay pictures created by the author, hey [adoration][adoration]

It is worth appreciating. The protagonist's only hidden character at the beginning is an NPC. The plot is compact. The author shows extraordinary artistic talent through words and is able to convey profound thoughts and information within a limited space. The novel is not only a carrier of the story, but also a reflection of the author's inner world.

To be honest, it was very enjoyable to watch. There was no NPC behavior in this plot. I hope it is non-CP. After all, the nature of this kind of writing has changed with CP.

Hmm... This is my first time reviewing a book... Transformation essay! I don't see any obvious shortcomings now! It's just comfortable to read... I don't recommend it to book lovers who insist on pursuing rationality... Just read the book to make yourself happy [laughs] Let me make it clear... I am not giving five stars just for COS... Alas! What a pity, it was cut in half [rolls eyes]

It's a book with a very good foundation, and I've been following it. It has over a hundred chapters now, because I've read too many good books that ended badly. They are all anxious to write a new book or have no income, so they don't write it. I really hope that this book will have a good ending. I have great expectations for this book. Come on, don't end it badly, otherwise the review will be changed to one star. There is nothing I can do. I heard from the author that the score of this book will not be changed if it enters the dark room. It is a pity that it is a good book.

It would be better if you add more posts with girls and write more about reality. Otherwise, just upgrading is a bit monotonous, but it is also very beautiful.

It's pretty good-looking and quite to my liking (definitely not for the cosplay🌚)

This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanging +. Noxian Guillotine. This wave of M4 is sure to kill with six times of strafing. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108-fold monkey in Huaguoshan, "Xiao Huo is so stiff, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It expresses Zhuge Liang's indignation at Hou Zhi knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting.

Qing Qinghan is a great beauty and writes good books. She usually cosplays Genshin Impact and the hero of Glory of Kings😘😘😘

Well, it's a bit hard to describe, but from my personal point of view, it's really super, super good-looking, the characters are well-drawn, and I really like the plot and so on, especially the explosion of Japanese and American servers later on.

How can I put it this way? He is an old author who has written four books. This book has the highest rating among them. For the sake of positive updates, I will give it five stars. This book currently has more than nine points, but there are still many problems. The plot starts out a bit cliche, and it is another series about being stabbed in the back by my girlfriend. There is a lot of room for improvement in the writing bar. If there are typos, it is just a minor problem. But if the idioms are used incorrectly and are not corrected, it will not be easy to explain and it can easily mislead people.

When I saw the title on the homepage, I couldn't help but click on it. I found that the author's descriptions were quite delicate. Sometimes he would complain about himself. He is a humorous person. I hope the author can make a living [laughing]

I have read more than 30 chapters so far, and I feel that it is okay now. I would like to ask, when will the game come to reality, or will the protagonist become a female in reality in advance? How many chapters will it take? Just ask, I've been waiting for that moment [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] When will reality come?

Good reviews (o^^o). It's a brainless and refreshing article, it's just enjoyable. Although some of the logic doesn't make sense, it doesn't have too many poisonous points. It was just towards the end that the writing felt a bit messy. It was written both in reality and in the game, but it felt like it ended a bit hastily. Overall it's pretty good

The content is lively and interesting, the protagonist has a rich and full personality, the subject matter is novel, and the characterization is colorful. Therefore, there are still some minor flaws in the author's settings, but overall there are no major problems. The author's writing style is very good. I hope the author can work hard to update more. As for the heroine, it will be Li Yanran. I hope that the story between the two of them can be described later, and it can also be written as a wedding for the two of them.

I have read a lot of books, and this one is very unique to me. I loved it so much [shy] I hope the author can enrich the plot between the characters (especially the interaction between the heroine Ning Yan and Miss Ye, who knows [admiration]) I love the author to death [love]

It's really special and very good-looking. I'm almost done with it, so I'll give it four stars for the time being, because although this book is finished, I still see some minor problems. I'll see how it ends.

The protagonist's setting is relatively full, and the rhythm in the early and middle stages is moderate, which makes people obviously feel more relaxed and the plot is more colorful. In the later stages, the progress is a bit fast, and there are many characters, which makes it difficult to distinguish. It would be better if the rhythm in the later stages is slower.

The thought of Li Yanran meeting Jun Ningyan makes her excited. Family members, hurry up and place your order. What are you still hesitating about? Trust me, it will look good😚

This is a novel that attracts me very much. I hope Qing Qinghan will work hard💪 and work hard to write! Hee hee, I can't afford to give gifts, so I can only give free gifts, woo hoo, but this does not affect my love for this novel. Come on! You are the best!

From the current point of view, this book has a wonderful plot and good character descriptions. However, I still feel that the chapters are a little bit short. I hope the author will work hard to write a good article and write more. It is a bit unreadable.

Although it is unfinished, the overall feeling is still good, support! Keep up the good book!

The content is interesting, the plot is exciting, and the article is recommended +++

Overall, this book is good. It is not as gushing as some online game novels such as Water of the Yellow River. This is an advantage worth pointing out. However, the ending pace is a bit fast, and I feel like I don't know what to write. It doesn't matter, it's okay anyway, it's not brain-breaking.

Very beautiful, with vivid character descriptions.

This book is very interesting, and the content written by the author is quite in line with my taste [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] It's very beautiful and I like the author's writing style. I like to read several books written by the author The author himself is also very good-looking [eating melon]

I just realized now that the bad stories I read were all written by Qing Qinghan [smile], but the writing and plot are still top-notch.

The plot is not draggy, the writing is okay, the game plot is quite good, and it is a enjoyable novel. Lightning protection point: I came for Lily and can leave. It feels like the emotional lines of the two heroines are just messed up. There are also few emotional lines Summary: The game plot and setting are good. Bad feelings.

I really like the book written by the author. I hope the author will work hard.