Quick Travel: After Turning Black, He Became the White Moonlight of the World

Overall, it's pretty good, except for the man who appears in every story, which makes people feel stuck in their throats. Why did you choose this role? Because that man has a strong background in every story, he is strong, beautiful, and affectionate, and he will help the heroine every time without any regrets. So it makes people feel that the heroine can succeed not only because the heroine is strong, but also because there is such a man who loves her. No matter whether the heroine is strong or not, that man will help the heroine. Therefore, I feel that the heroine is not perfect because of her strength. Maybe I am too harsh. I hope that even if The heroine gets help from others because the heroine is capable and is appreciated by others, not because there is such a person who likes the heroine, follows her in every life, and pays for the heroine without regrets. He takes away part of the halo from the heroine, alas (╥ω╥`)

In the second world, the plot of Machiavellian plots is particularly well written! I'm going to have a brain! Moreover, the heroine Baobao doesn't speak much harshly, has a grand world view, and also has some warmth. Ah ah ah, anyway, it's really great!

It's really good-looking. The heroine is not obsessed with love, she has her own pursuits and her own path. Be confident, brave, have great love in your heart, and be compassionate to all living beings. Decisive and wise, one person can control the situation of the world. The love of the male protagonist is his unswerving following. He respects the female protagonist and advances and retreats in a measured way. He loves the female protagonist but will not block her path. His love is like drizzle and breeze, gentle and has the ability to moisturize all things. He has always silently supported the heroine. He is not so much the heroine's admirer as the heroine's good partner.

It looks good. I like the character design of the heroine. The heroine in the world of cultivation can use various talismans in the small world. She is really powerful. There is a male protagonist but there is no description of love. The regent is rejected. The author understands be aesthetics and I really like to read it. I like the way the heroine responds to the other person's behavior, the heroine is so cool.

Emm, there is no CP but there is a "CP" that is not together and has a deep intersection. The heroine actually relies on this "CP" in the beginning. Female rivalry is very serious... The heroine doesn't compete with others, but other girls compete with the heroine like crazy. It's like losing their minds. But the author's writing style and the final return to the original world are very good. The reason why the great sect was destroyed was that Junior Sister Love Brain fell in love with the Demon Lord... Sigh The character design of the protagonist is quite good.

Okay, I really like this kind of fast penetration with super strong golden fingers in each plane. There are really not many emotional scenes, but I just enjoy watching it, because the female protagonist is career-oriented throughout the whole process, brave and resourceful, and rewards and punishments are clear. At this time, having a male protagonist is already the icing on the cake. This kind of spirit that does not ask for anything in return, just wants the people you love to work hard for their goals and shine. , It is worth learning from the male protagonists in the female protagonist channel (yes). It can be clearly seen that the author is a very firm female advocate. Anyway, I enjoy it, and the length of each plane is just right for me. The heroine does not delay in doing things at all, the damn villain dies very cleanly, and the ending of the good guys is getting better and better, without any fish slipping through the net. I cried when I saw the dimension of kidnapping. The story was described so well. I am a woman and I really understand it, and it hurts even more because of it. Fortunately, the ending is good. Fortunately, the ending is good. Worth watching for fans of female porn! As for the emotional line, benevolent people have different opinions and wisdom depends on what you like. Anyway, I really like the loyal dog type of the heroine who always follows, is loyal, and loves her carefully! ! ! It smells good! So delicious! I eat! The heroine is awesome! ! !

The big book is still very exciting, the heroine is still sober in the world, understands tactics and has scheming, the proper heroine asked, is there a male protagonist? [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

I really like this big book. The plot is not draggy, the writing is good, and the heroine is strong. This book doesn't have the kind of plot where a strong woman and a strong man are stronger. The heroine is scheming and will always set up big traps and finally close the net. The supporting characters in it are also well portrayed...

It has a beginning and an end. The story is very logical. The writing is good and the plot is wonderful. The heroine has a great love. She will not be obsessed with love and love, but also has friendship and family... She is smart and wise. The chapters of the story are just right and it looks great.

A pretty good quick travel story. After the big devil in the demon world forced Bai Yueguang to death, he wanted to resurrect her and find a pure soul to sacrifice. The heroine's junior sister fell in love with the devil and betrayed the sect. The entire sect was destroyed. Only the heroine's soul exploded and escaped. After re-training, she went to various small worlds to fulfill her wish and recover the soul fragments. Finally, he joined forces with Bai Yueguang, who was forced to die, to kill the big devil and restore the glory of the sect. The heroine is really kind and will always help and enlighten the weak. There is no CP in the full text. After being rescued, Little Iris successfully transformed into a human being and worked hard to achieve greatness in cultivation to find the heroine. She followed the footsteps of the heroine in every small world and silently guarded her. Finally, she spent all her cultivation to help her. After the heroine succeeded in revenge, she found Iris and gave him part of her immortal power. He retrained and became a human being and finally joined the heroine's sect.

I think this is the correct life of fast travel. I particularly like this kind of no-CP. It is not considered no-CP. He does not put his personal feelings on the people he attacks, and then they also have their own lives.

Oh my god, it's so well written! ! ! The character creation is so good. Su Yuan is really my favorite character in the fast-travel novels I have ever read! Powerful, sane and free! [Sending my heart] At the same time, the character of Little Iris is really emotional! ! So touching! Although regretful, this is actually the best ending! [Almost crying] After watching it, I feel both satisfied and empty. I want to watch it again! ! Too short! [Working on draft]

There are very few novels that can be read with the brain in mind. The heroine is calm, wise and mentally strong, and the ending is also very positive... But the tragic experience, justice is difficult and slow to come (still with the various blessings in the article), after reading it, I felt heavy in my heart and felt depressed! It is always easy to do evil, but it is always so difficult to do justice. Even if you get justice in the end, what about the hurt you have suffered? What about the dead? It will never be annihilated, nor can it be resurrected... I have seen this for the time being. How can I stay awake in the real life of a cow and horse without thinking about the happy moments in my spare time?

It's so beautiful. After listening to one story, I look forward to the next one. There are too few stories in Wenwen, and I feel like I still have more to say. . . . The little iris is great too! Quite a good idea! The heroine is great! Highly recommended!

The plot is really great, refreshing and emotional. The heroine is beautiful and sassy, ​​sober and rational. It can be called the ceiling of the fast travel world. I really love it. I feel that everyone is well portrayed, as if the people in the book have come alive and narrated their stories in person. It is worth reading. I recommend it [Blow Kiss]

It is a fast-travel novel with a sense of design. Each world is relatively representative, and it will not make people feel embarrassed about dressing up and dressing up again to make up for the plot. The heroine insists on her own beliefs, and always has a bottom line while abusing the scum. The author can still uphold the guidance of mindfulness in online articles, which is very rare; the writing language is concise, and you can read it in one sitting. It's very satisfying, and the disagreement with Iris can be ignored. In short, as a reader with a relatively fragile heart, my blood will surge at the slightest abuse. I can understand the author's setting. The full text is generally very comfortable to read. For me, this is a good article that is suitable for reading and has basically no flaws.

The writing style is quite good, the character design is not OOC, and the heroine is not a heartthrob, so it can be regarded as a cool novel with a heroine without cp. The male protagonist (I mean the one who has the most roles, not the female protagonist's official partner) follows and accompanies the female protagonist in every small world. In fact, I feel that this role is a bit redundant. The female protagonist can use her talisman formation in the small world, and is basically invincible. However, in each small world, she still has to find the male protagonist to cooperate. Whoever you cooperate with is not cooperation. The male protagonist has a crush on the female protagonist. Even if he does not cross the boundary of friends, the overall feeling is that the author wants readers without cp and readers with cp. One cannot have both. Apart from this, I have to say that the author is really good at writing, especially the small world that favors boys over girls. Everyone knows that the mother is abducted and seeks outside power to save the mother. What makes me cry is that the heroine thinks of herself as the stain of the mother being trafficked. With her here, when faced with the gossip of others, the mother will think of the dark time when she was abducted over and over again. Therefore, she did not escape from the trafficker's village with her mother. Even when the trafficker tried to use her son to sell off her son, in an attempt to morally kidnap the mother and make her stay for the sake of the child, the heroine directly stood in front of her mother and told her about the evil that the trafficker had done, so that her mother could leave smoothly. [He has the opportunity to follow Su Yuan in each small world. He watched her become an empress, watched her become a legendary movie queen, watched her help the country, watched her become a pillar of the country, watched her lead mankind to rediscover the fire of civilization...] [A Yuan, I have turned into the clouds above your head, the wind in your ears, the thousands of miles of mountains and rivers you will travel through in the future, and your road of love and kindness. In the future, when you climb every mountain and cross every river. Traveling through mountains and rivers, I will always be there. ——Iris [The avenue of pursuit is called eternity. Everyone in the world says that the mountains are small, but I say that I am taller than the mountains. ——Su Yuan

The story is short but concise, and each character is vividly portrayed. Some people say that the emotional line is abrupt, but in fact it has a beginning and an end. After reading the extra, everything is animistic, and then I go back and read Ye Jin Yunting's sentence "It was a withered tree, but it becomes spring when I meet you." It gives me a strong sense of fate. It's not that A Yuan has no love for Little Iris, she just doesn't dare to love, and she is burdened with a blood feud. She just wants to avenge her teacher, and is afraid of changes. Iris's companionship is actually A Yuan's tacit approval. They are also partners. Iris can be regarded as A Yuan's hidden selfishness.

Meeting each other means signing the contract, so there is no need to miss each other for more than a year. I like the heroine's view of love. It's not that no one can live without the other. The world is big and time is very long. Although the gold finger is quite big, it is very smooth to use, which makes me not disgusted. The heroine's temperament is excellent, like a breeze in the world, she will not stop for anyone. Once you have seen the solitary smoke in the desert, you will not be nostalgic for the tenderness of the Jiangnan water town. When you see the bright and warm sunrise, you will not stop because of the cold moonlight. May you travel throughout the past and present, and throughout the world. The iris that keeps its love silently is always by your side.

Yes, I have read several quick-travel books recently, and this one is not willing to leave out any details from beginning to end. People in the world of immortality are all long-term and do not care about the short decades or hundreds of years in the human world. Just treat it as if there is a person from this world on the journey of experience, someone who knows the basics and silently accompanies you. How happy it is. Love life does not necessarily require physical contact. Pure companionship is the most beautiful thing. Many people online said that Iris is actually a very good person, simple and kind-hearted, and always repays kindness. It's a pity that Su Yuan doesn't need a partner, so be it! Stay safe, everyone! The author writes very well, highly recommended!

The author's writing style is very concise. He never portrays women as accessories that can only depend on men. Women become great. The women in the author's writings can be founders, empresses, entrepreneurs, and great people who influence a generation. Women are inherently beautiful, and in the author's pen, the author fully demonstrates the greatness of women, which makes me deeply moved. Moreover, the love between women and men does not only exist when women are dependent on men. Women can only rely on men's love for her to gain the benefits they want. The heroine can fight side by side with men and can be better than men. True love and affection are not about unparalleled love, using other people's lives as a foreshadowing to achieve one's love for another person, but about companionship and win-win cooperation. I admire the author's spiritual thoughts. The characters' small feelings and love are written into the feelings of family and country, and the national righteousness. It is no longer the same sweet romance, but cooperation and companionship based on interests. Maybe what I said is nonsense to some people, but this is what I really want to say. The author has published a total of seven books, four of which I have read and never tire of reading. I like the author's writing style very much.

Overall it's pretty good, with content, depth and purpose. When I saw the scene where the heroine stood in front of her mother's car to block other people's prying eyes, my heart was deeply touched. Yes, she is not just a mother. Before becoming a mother, she is a person first. She should be given the respect she deserves as a person, instead of forcing the shackles of great maternal love on her head and asking her to compromise for it. I think this is true love, giving the other person the most correct and suitable thing. Not disturbing is also a kind of love. My only regret is that it is too short and a bit unsatisfactory. Worth a look, recommended.

It is a qualified novel with a clear main line throughout, the plot advances smoothly without dragging, the heroine's character is stable, and the general direction is very clear without being indecisive. There is a male character who comes in from time to time and has a strong sense of presence. Fortunately, we are not together. Even if this male character is portrayed as very exciting and has a three-dimensional and full image, he is so worthy. I always believe that if a person has something to do, he will definitely put most of his energy into it. It is difficult to allocate a lot of energy to do another thing. The pursuit of love will spend time on love. Of course, it's normal if they are together. In this way, the article must leave space to describe how they fall in love, and less to write about other things. It will be difficult to balance this.

It's good-looking and makes me want to read more. Although the short stories in the fast-moving novels are all similar, the author of this article expresses his words very well, which makes me want to continue reading even if I read similar stories. And the end of each short story moved me to tears. I am ready to read the author's other works.

Very good, the story has a beginning and an end and looks really comfortable. The content of each small world is very solid and has its own magic, but it is more about the planning that goes with it. I really like this kind of content. It's not like some other novels that are just plug-ins. They barely use your brain and just beat you up at the beginning. It looks great, but after a few short stories, it feels boring. It doesn't change the soup without changing the medicine. So this is a really good book, with just the right ratio of spells and strategies. It doesn't make people feel like they're brainless in breaking the situation, and it's not all about reasoning or anything like that. I really love it. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more novels with a similar framework. I love you [flying kisses] [flying kisses] (If possible, I would like to secretly recommend writing survival novels about small worlds that travel through various natural disasters. There are too few good ones on this theme.)

Who knows? It's really good. I've read a lot of books. This writing is super good! ! 1. Mr. Rong Shi! Oh my god, strategize and use one person's power to stir up the power in the capital. 2. The world where I rescued my abducted mother. Oh my God, I chose to let my mother leave and live a good life. I was afraid that others would hurt her because of me. Every scene was so touching! 3. Iris! Ahhhhhh, really, the pure admiration of a young man, you can't love it, ahhhhh! Super pretty! 4. Qingyao! It's a pity that there is a demon king who ruined his life, otherwise he would be the heroine's best friend! 5. The female protagonist Su Yuan has a firm goal! Not trapped by others, with a superior IQ, a great heroine! ! !

Familiar author, familiar writing style. The fact that A Yuan and Little Iris are not together severely broke my fantasy about the finale of the princess and prince. But this is the most reasonable. How can a normal person fall in love when there is a big hatred? This book is really great, but it is a bit short. I want to ask the author if he can write another book. I love reading it!

It is a particularly good-looking fast-travel novel. It is unsystematic and is similar to the story of immortal cultivators traveling through time and space to collect fragments. However, the worlds written in big letters by the author are very special. They have a sense of blackness and depth, and are deeper than other novels! It feels like a philosophical discussion, using different worlds to provide evidence. It is very deep, some make people cry, and some souls tremble... How is evil formed? Why does evil exist as long as there are people? Just like the demons in the original world, they are all formed from all kinds of evil. This novel is not just about killing time, it makes me think and reflect after reading it. Dear author, this is already the third masterpiece I have read by you! I really like your writing style. You have a correct outlook on life, rigorous material selection, and a firm no-censorship approach. Come on, look forward to your new work!

Beautiful [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration], the emotional line of this book is really good, it is regrettable but also unforgettable. Not all admiration can be fulfilled, life is inherently regretful, and being able to meet each other is already the greatest luck in this life. The heroine is really well portrayed. She has a goal and will do her best to achieve it regardless of everything, instead of falling in love midway like other novels. So it's really disgusting that everything fails in the face of love. The intention of this novel is very good and it doesn't deviate at all. Love can be the icing on the cake but it cannot be the only one. [Like][Like][Like]

Apart from anything else, at least the plot is compact and logical, and the character settings are full and consistent (many Tomato stories about character collapse...). The heroine said that no cp means no cp. After several stories, she was still thinking about the revenge at the beginning. I forgot about it if I didn't write it down. Moreover, the feelings written about the unrequited love of a man are also more reasonable. The punishment for the villain is also very satisfying, but there is no particularly disgusting punishment for abusing a woman. So far, it looks good.