HP*****

Harry, the main character with a brain, is so cool to watch. This is my second Harry book with a brain. I love it very much.

It's very beautiful, but I don't know if there is a cp. If there is hope, it will be Draco [laughing]

I really found a different kind of fanfic. I think it is very realistic. There will be no unreasonable good or unreasonable bad. Everything has a purpose or an entanglement of interests. It is well written and very exciting. It is worth recommending. I hope the author will continue to work [Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's very beautiful. Do you have a CP? Even if there is a heroine, I hope the heroine is not Hermione, I hope there is no heroine [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Big cheers for the author! Why doesn't anyone read such a beautiful book? I thought it was a new book at first, but then I found out that it has more than 100 chapters. Thank you to the author (ง•̀_•́)งThe plot is also very well written and rigorous. Finally, there is a book about sending Dumbledore away. I have read a lot of fan fiction about Harry Potter, and I have always wanted to find a book about Harry Potter with an IQ. I finally found one. Thank you to the author. Don't give up (›´ω`‹)

Holy shit, the savior in this book is so sane. I enjoyed reading it, but I just couldn't get enough of it.

Before reading this book, I had never seen the original book or the movie, just because this style suddenly became popular, so I knew that those authors would write that the Weasley protagonists were the male protagonists, and describe them as kinder, and I thought that was just a small fight. After reading this book, I realized that it was wrong for them to do that. It was too much for others, so I thought this book was really great, with a very upright outlook and great writing.

I personally think this book is very good. The author is very rigorous and solves some particularly strange things in the original work. The logic is generally correct. I feel that the only shortcoming is that the author's writing is a bit immature, although there are no logical problems with the characters' personality patterns and behavioral patterns. But the author's description is too boring. Especially Sirius, Severus, and Dumbledore. Although there is no logical problem with their actions, some of them occasionally appear to be inconsistent with the characters of the original characters. Sirius, for example, should have reacted with some surprise or anger when Harry told him that Dumbledore had a problem. This anger was not directed at Harry, but at the fact that Dumbledore might be "cheating on him." I hope the author can add some actions or expressions to the characters when they speak. Make them more vivid. Also, cheers to the author! It's been a long time since I've encountered such a rigorous author.

The thinking angle is very novel and quite reasonable. It is an idea that I have never thought of before. It is a five-star explosion. I like that Harry has his own ideas and is not led by others. Abandoned, what do 149 and 170 mean? They are so high and mighty🙃

I declare this book to be my number two.

The plot of this book is compact, and it is roughly consistent with the details and content of the original work as it should be in humanities. The author will also explain some places that are easily misunderstood as OOC. I have to say that the more I read, the more I feel that the author's three views are very correct. While I was reading, I couldn't help but sigh, "The author's three views are so correct." ! !

Very excellent plot design. It truly allows you to see the world of HP beyond the original work. What surprises me is that the author can maintain such a high update efficiency while maintaining quality (this is quite rare in Tomato). The protagonist is three-dimensional and vivid, and he is an out-and-out businessman. Every original plot of the author has a very reasonable explanation. Although the score does not seem to be high (maybe this is the case with Tomato), it is indeed a very good fanfic. Looking forward to the follow-up official confrontation with Voldemort and Dumbledore (the plot feels like it is still in the development stage, although there are a few subtle tricks, but there is no head-on conflict yet)

Very, very good, with good logic. Harry Potter has a wild character, can take action, and try not to make any noise. Moreover, the logic of Harry Potter in this book is relatively strong. The author is very good at using the plot of the original Harry Potter, that is, you are obviously reading a fanfic, but you can connect to the original plot everywhere. Highly recommended [Like] [Like] [Like] Don't be fooled by the ratings. It's really, really, really good-looking, and the author has a strong desire to survive. If there is anything different from the original plot, he will explain it to prevent everyone from misunderstanding. The author's writing is very, very good. You can also check out the author's other works. Those are also quite good, but I think they are not as good as this one. Anyway, I highly recommend [like] [like] [like]

Looks good, at least he has some brains

I hope Harry won't be friends with Ron

It looks good, don't care about some people's reviews, and of course don't believe mine. Everyone has their own reviews. I suggest you take a look at it and see if it suits your taste. Make sure you want to continue reading it. Because I think it looks good, so I gave it a five-star rating.

Although the author hasn't finished updating it yet, and I haven't finished reading it yet, after reading the first few chapters, I really feel that the author's logic is very good, and I feel very happy. The protagonist's analysis is not muddled. He is simply very smart. He took revenge when he needed it and acted when he needed to act. The author is also very considerate and writes a short explanation at the back for people who don't understand. The writing is good and the author is very considerate. I highly recommend this book without any hesitation [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The character design is special in Heli [laughing evilly] The author's writing is superb and delicate, and it can fill in the pitfalls of the original work.

It feels like a documentary or script. There is no character psychology, expression description or environment description. It is all dialogue between characters. I don't know if it was moved from the script. But the advantage of this kind of film is that the plot advances faster. The protagonist's character is just rational and aware of current affairs. It has no particularly distinctive characteristics and is not flexible enough. Some plots are a bit embarrassing, but others are okay. [Praise]

It's okay. I love Potter who has a brain, but sometimes our protagonist speaks a bit too straightforwardly. The purpose may not be the purpose, but what he says is a little deviated from some ways of thinking. For example, when he said that Severus Snape was Voldemort's subordinate, it was too straightforward. Everything else is okay. I hope the author will update it in time (* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤

It's very good. This novel is full of rationality and logic. However, the only thing that feels weird is that Harry is only an 11 or 12-year-old child (obviously). No one doubts that he is so rational [face covering]

I think the writing is very good, it is about survival, but I personally feel a little choked up. If I insist on speaking out, I think the protagonist is very scheming, and the links within each link feel a bit like the "Jiusuo" chain "a toy" But if you jump out of the protagonist's ideological level, it is easy to be seen through. Overall, I feel that there is no problem with the online IQ, and the writing is very good.

The author is very detailed, and the punctuation marks are not convenient and I am not used to it, but it is only on one point, but the other plots and characters fit the original work very well, and the plot is very good.

It's so good. Although this book doesn't have a rating now, it's no worse than a 9-point rating.

It is a very unique book with its own ideas. It may be very toxic to those who are addicted to the original work, but the author has found another way and the logic is valid. Thumbs up for the unique fanfic!

Although it is a conspiracy theory type, it is well written, has clear ideas, and is objective in its judgment. It is one of the best books in recent years, except Poisonous Eggs and Fat Chicken with Round Faces. I hope the author will work hard on detailing some reasonable plots. I hope you will work hard on the author.

It's really good, I love it so much. I declare this HP article to be the best I have seen in Tomato HP. The characters are described delicately. Everyone has their own personality characteristics, and in my opinion, the description of each person is very reasonable. As the protagonist, as an orphan, he has reasonable caution.

Come on author, you are Nan Bowan in my heart! ! ! Trader Porter has a strong sense of reason, a bit of conspiracy theory, and a sinister underbelly. The plot is exciting, and there are no mistakes in the whole process. There are answers to questions at the end. Highly recommended! ! !

Anyway, I think it is well written. The most important thing is actually the sanity of the protagonist. Although in reality this may not be that exaggerated, I like this kind of behavior. Even if it is a satire on the characters in the original work, there is nothing wrong with it. I am not a fan of them. To me, this is a very good work.

The protagonist makes only a small amount of money. If you really want to make a lot of money, you should use the Wizarding War to defeat purebloods and expropriate their industries, then improve production methods to increase productivity, and finally use potions to create consumer goods that are far more effective than tobacco and alcohol to earn back the wages paid out.