Restart the Villain Route and Save Bai Yueguang from Downfall

The character of Bai Yueguang, the male protagonist, Big Brother, is the most consistent character I have ever seen! The author's portrayal of Nali is very good, and there is no plot like falling in love with the male protagonist out of nowhere. Haha, the kind of person who likes the male protagonist towards his senior brother does not just fall in love with him simply because he saved him, but slowly falls in love with him while getting along with him.

The plot of this book is not a terrible plot, but a novel plot. This kind of book is rare on Tomato. When I read it for the first time, I realized that there was a lot of truth in this book, but I didn't read it carefully. So I went back and took a rough look at it, and then sorted out these principles. For me, they are worth studying and useful. 1. There should be no place to live, and the mind should be born: 2. However, things have a constant appearance, but there is no constant examination of thinking. 3. The long sky is so inferior to human beings 4. Yarrow changes and presents new hexagrams. Twenty-fifth, hexagram Wuwang. To be prosperous is to stick to the right path; when thunder moves in the world, everything responds. 5. Twenty, observe the hexagram, observe my life, a gentleman has no fault; observe his life, a gentleman has no fault. ' 6. The sage said: "My husband does not fight, so no one in the world can fight with him." " 7. "Three out of ten people will be disciples in life; three out of ten will be disciples in death." 8. See the small to know the cuteness, see the end to know the end; 9. 'If you don't see it yourself, you will understand it; if you don't see it yourself, you will see it clearly;' 10. Sometimes the truth is there, but it is not perfect. " Some of these principles come from the Tao Te Ching, some from the I Ching, some from the Legends, and some from some poems. From this we can know that the author's literary talent is very good. I'm very much looking forward to the next plot. Author, come on

6.9 Points? Xianpin is very in line with my taste. It comes from a bookworm who has been reading novels for 8 years since he was in the sixth grade of elementary school and is now in his third year of college. Xianpin. Except for the novels about My Concubine in Shanyang, I rarely read novels that don't fast forward. The writing is quite good. I like this kind of character. Xianpin, I just like this kind of novel. Xianpin! I have only read one novel of this type in My Concubine in Shanyang, but it is different, the writing is good! Quite good! Immortal product! I have no intention of recommending other authors, Xianpin, I have no intention of saying more, I have already seen the latest chapter, you should be careful, the writing can save me, Xianpin!

The limitations of destiny may last forever, but the unyielding challenge is indispensable. ——Shi Tiesheng's "My Dream" This article is the most ancient fairy tale I have ever seen among the two men, and the world is very complete and the details are perfect. There is a certain amount of blank space for the plot in the article, and it can be seen that the author's exquisite design is a well-written work. I am not a person who likes to think very much when reading books, so maybe personally the plot of the book shocked me a lot. The main plot is very clear, and the hidden plot (the ending of the supporting characters) is also worthy of careful consideration. The plot is full of foreshadowing, the logic is clear, and the plot is unconventional. The author's uniqueness can be seen everywhere. Emotions in the book come naturally and slowly, but the details are touching and need to be savored, and you can see a lot. If you like to read the love line, your wish may not come true immediately at the beginning, so be patient. The above are the general characteristics of a good book in my opinion. Let's talk about the characteristics below. The most memorable thing about this book is actually the change in emphasis presented by the author - from "Tao" to "People". In the immortal writings I have read, "people" usually exist as the object of "Tao", and the Tao cannot be shaken. However, whether people are seekers, doubters, or those who have obtained the Tao, they actually do not break out of the established framework of "Tao", which is a bit like Cheng and Zhu's Neo-Confucianism of "preserving the principles of nature and destroying human desires." So at the beginning, I was also in this thinking framework and felt that there must be a theme of "asking". So this book was a surprise to me. The author puts the subject of cultivating immortality on human beings, not cultivating immortality or Taoism, but cultivating the heart - the human heart. Human expectations and desires, human love, hate, anger and delusion, from Azhen and Nali to Song Zhaopei and others, all have extremely distinctive personal characteristics and sufficient subjective initiative that can overshadow the great road. This is also like the Lu Wang Xinxue, which believes that "heaven, earth and I are one", emphasizing that heaven's principles exist in people's hearts, and what people think is "Tao". This also provided the soil for Azhen and Nali's disobedience. In fact, the disobedience in the article is not as good as resisting oneself. Not giving in in the face of fate is actually a concrete manifestation of "thinking that you are more than this." As for the confusion about one's own choices, it is better to say that it is asking one's heart than asking. Nali has the right and wrong of "retreating, I stop; advancing, I go". Success or failure is all in my heart, and Lin Hanzhang directly believes that I am the leader. When talking about the characters, from the protagonist to the supporting characters, they are all vivid and vital. Almost everyone has their own unique experiences and choices, and they can all understand different truths. I'm only talking about the protagonist here. Personally, I think Lin Hanzhang's growth path is obvious and obvious. His perseverance and prudence did not come from nowhere, but were tempered through many experiences. Na Li, whose temperament has matured and cannot be changed, is in the dark. He has the gentleness of "the best is like water, which benefits all things without fighting", and the benevolence of heaven and earth that "sages are not benevolent and treats the people as stupid dogs". The contradictory qualities are unified in him, and he achieves a strange harmony. Hegel once mentioned that successful people have three qualities - diversity, clarity, and firmness, which are perfectly embodied in Nali. Gentleness is his clarity, and benevolence is his firmness. I personally think he is the most successful character in the book. (It's also my favorite [adoration][adoration], super——Senior Brother Ai) This novel is the first serial I followed and the first novel I reviewed because I really, really like and am satisfied with it. This is the first time I have a lot of insights into an online novel, so I have put a lot of patience into it, not even one page or ten lines. But I think this book deserves patient reflection. (Really very cultured) [Attention] [Attention] [Attention] I wrote too much, and I even dropped my book bag a little, which is embarrassing. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better, move to the next door, and get to know you again in the next book. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Awesome, well-written, not embarrassing, has a growth line, has a character that likes to take things away, and is open-minded and clear-minded. I also like the emotional line. When can I stop laughing when I see that joke in the copywriting?

It is a kind of high-quality beauty that no tomato can match. The author's writing skills are very solid and solid. In the author's own words, "there is a trace of off-line in the seriousness" [shy] [shy] [sending heart] [sending heart], thinking about Tao, and some brain-burning plots, which are very consistent with the characters in the book... The ending is so popular with me! There is no use in talking more. Dear book friends, please watch by yourself [shy] You won't lose money if you invest in shares [laughing]

The characters are amazing, and the author has drawn many details very well. The only regret is that it is not very popular. The problem may be that those who want to watch the emotional line feel that there are too few emotional scenes, while those who want to watch the plot feel that they can't understand it. . It's not that the author's plot is unclear, but there is an indescribable sense of obstruction. I hope this book will become a hit immediately and the author will add updates like crazy ah ah ah ah

It's so good. It's one of the best novels I've ever read. It's not the cliché kind of being saved by someone and then starting to lick him after being reborn. The senior brother is very good and worth it, and the male protagonist is also very good and worth it!

Like! Although the structure of the worldview of this article is still within a relatively old-fashioned framework, Xiaolin's dual cultivation of ghosts and Taoism really shines in people's eyes, and Xiaolin's strong and true character with strong desires is particularly vivid when seeing the New Year's Day attackers who only want to ascend to Taoism. And I also particularly like the emotional line between Xiaolin and his senior brother, which is very thin but always progressing. It really feels like they are slowly getting to know each other and are not being pushed by the author. I look forward to the unfolding of the story!

[Love] [Love] [Love] A very beautiful article about cultivating immortals. It is different from previous articles about cultivating immortals. It has the author's own worldview, and the author has created a world of his own in it. I have been reluctant to recommend it until now it is finished. It is really good-looking and the logic is very clear. There are many twists and turns in it, and there are also some foreshadowings that are revealed in the follow-up. It is very exciting, and the development of their relationship is the kind of light and dark lines intersecting. As the plot develops, it flows quietly and slowly without being abrupt. What I thought was unrequited love was actually a two-way love affair. The difference from traditional immortality writings is that he does not aspire to ascension, but practices in the process of experience, solves problems encountered, and confronts his own hatred of inner demons and beliefs. The character setting is also very exciting and different. The author uses his own language to bring the characters to life. It is not just limited to the introduction of the setting. You can feel that the characters in the pen are vivid and vital, and have their own thoughts. Among all the fairy tales I have read, this one ranks at the top in my mind. The writing style is very exciting and full of content. You can feel that the author is a person with deep knowledge and he will work hard on the content. You can also learn some ancient knowledge while reading the article. [Working on manuscript][Exploring][Learned] The finale actually felt a little rushed, but it felt like it was already the best. I felt like I could keep writing, but as I continued writing, I felt like there was something more. Maybe to this extent, the ending was just right, because when it came to the end, I already felt that it was about to end. Conflicts, tangled emotions, and a feeling that there is still a little bit left, but with the end of the extra episode, it is really completely over. In the end, it is very complete, and we have overcome all difficulties and reunited [love] again. Looking forward to seeing you again! We will get to know each other again in the next book [please update]. Whether it's the character setting, emotional rush, or the ups and downs of the plot, it's worth watching. [Sending Hearts]

After reading it completely, I feel that it doesn't feel like the novel in 🍅. The world view in the novel is also very unique. It may be the first time I read this kind of novel, and it feels very novel (rebirth + parallel world 'created by one of the male protagonists' awakening, revised original text by a living writer' + traveling through the book 'preliminary character recognition' + awakening of characters in the book). The early part of the novel may be very dull to read, without any major ups and downs in the plot, but after reading it (including the extras, which will have some important plot supplements), you will find that the original plot is like this, reversing and reversing, but it can come back smoothly. After reviewing the middle and early stages, you will find that there are many details, and what happens next will not be abrupt. It is very interesting and recommended! The relationship between the protagonists is long-lasting, and they are in love for a long time and then commit to each other for life. There is also the ending. Strictly speaking, according to the main text, the ending is be, but depending on the development of the ending, it will end up being he. Of course, the extra chapter is indeed he. Highly recommended!

This is a strange book that is different from what I have read before... Few books can bring me so many surprises. The writing style, completion, and creativity are all remarkable. Thanks for the feed, and congratulations on the successful completion. I look forward to seeing more good stories in the future. (Afterwards, I realized that I had just finished reading the nonsense and long comments and supplements. I didn't understand why I had so many words and was so tired.)

The truth is simple, the words are concise and concise. The clarity of mind of the senior brother is really heart-warming and admirable. It is no wonder that the protagonist is so devoted, but others may not be able to do this for the senior brother. It is really the best state for the two of them to know each other and stay together. Sometimes I feel that senior brother's position is always vague, and he is always not as firm as Gong in making some decisions. Emm. Although Gong finally said that he betrayed senior brother in other worlds, in this world Lai Gong has always been an unswerving supporter of Shou. Senior brother's personality does not have much emotional fluctuations. His replies to some questions and Gong's questions are always very delayed, and sometimes his actions are not very considerate of Gong. There is always something happening in between, and Lao Gong feels that love is often in short supply, which makes people feel unbalanced. It seems that the emotional output of the two is not quite equal. Although the senior brother will respond to Gong later, it is like eating a sweet cake with a sweet tooth. At the end of the meal, he suddenly took a mouthful of sour cream.

I really like Da Da's writing style, and the characters are also stand-alone. I thought Song Zhaofei would be like most novels, always stupid, but later he became smarter. Although he is still stupid, I think this kind of development is the right one. Come on Da Da, I really like it [Adoration]

Anyway, overall it's good. I feel very comfortable watching. The overall writing style is more ancient. Occasionally there are some twists and turns. But I can only describe it in one word. Bitter. It makes me so miserable. I couldn't stand it until I read more than 100 chapters. I really couldn't stand it. That jade thing made me so angry. Because of that Song thing. I wish I could go in and give him a few slaps. But overall, I am very happy with Olizi's character design. What about the character of Senior Brother? It can actually be considered compassion in the true sense. So kind. Even the kindness makes me feel a little itchy. I hate it so much. Why do those people take advantage of senior brother's kindness to bully me? Why? Why? Why? Why? Overall, I think it's pretty good. Very recommended. So emotional. The character of senior brother is really rare. There are very few pure and kind protagonists nowadays. It is truly compassionate. I understand why it is said to be unlucky. It's because I read too many cool articles. Well.

This is a book with a lot of foreshadowing and twists. I was really shocked when I read the last few chapters and wanted to open the author's mind to see what the genius had in mind! The author's writing style is also very good. You can tell at a glance that he is very literate. He is very suitable for writing about ancient times and cultivating immortals! Gong Shou's kind of shallow love that is not just about lust is actually very profound [Sending Hearts] In the end, Gong Shou is able to embrace his senior brother and return home.

This article is one of the few novels I have seen in Tomato that really suits my taste. The love story mainly focuses on the perspective of love, and it is the kind of love that is full of admiration and admiration. Shou is a sassy, ​​gentle, upright and beautiful senior brother, while Gong is a sinister and sinister junior brother. Gong liked his senior brother very much, but he didn't dare to reveal his feelings. At first, he was because of the grace of saving his life in his previous life and couldn't bear the persecution of his senior brother. She has been guarding him silently and eliminating danger for him, but she still can't help but get closer and pursue her. I was rejected and alienated, and my heart almost broke, but I still protected my senior brother silently, but I couldn't help but continue to pursue him. I really, really like this🥰🥰. Of course, senior brother was still moved in the end. When I read the introduction, I thought it was written in vernacular Chinese, but the main text was written in a very ancient style, which was a bit difficult to read, as it was written in semi-classical Chinese. I gave up several times in the middle, but the writing was so good, so I finished reading it. It turned out to be as good as I expected🥰🥰

The writing has a feeling that does not belong to Tomato. The writing is really beautiful, and the characters are vividly drawn. It feels like everyone has their own temperament. The words are well-written and the wording feels rare, but it is very appropriate.

I read it for several hours at a stretch and am currently at chapter 50 or so. I have to say that the author's writing style is very good in Tomato. The two protagonists have particularly good personalities, with clear distinctions between love and hate, and not a saintly heart. The emotions are described very delicately and don't feel abrupt. Moreover, Gong is really favored and favored, isn't he? He was already very double-standard before he realized his feelings in the early stage. After I saw about thirty chapters, he became even more fond of his senior brother and had nothing to say after he understood his feelings. Looking forward to the author's continued updates.

Oh my gosh, the author's logic is very good, and the plot is brand new. There is no template at all, not like a bad street, and this is really fine chaff. I am really lucky to see it [face covering] I can see that the author is very talented [face covering] The writing is super good! ! ! ——The author must have understood a lot of logic. As for the financial monopoly section, I really feel that the author taught the author how to make money. Otherwise, how could he have such a thorough understanding of finance?

The author's writing style is really good. Maybe because I read it all night, my brain is a little bit behind the logic. But there is no denying that the writing is really great! There is no sense of embarrassment and the author quotes from classics. It can be seen that the author has really read a lot of books and has extensive knowledge. I don't know if their relationship is a long-term and smooth one, or if it's just a matter of time and again. Anyway, I really have a good relationship with the gentle senior brother and the persistent junior brother. Both of them made me crazy. The characters are also well-shaped, with different perspectives colliding and blending, and each hurdle is overcome in a gentle way, which can be regarded as the author's gentleness. It's just a pity that there wasn't enough interaction... Most of the time we were just exchanging views and discussing business matters, which is a pity. All in all, it's a very interesting novel!

The worldview is quite well constructed. The struggle between extreme people and mortals, those with Qi and those without Qi, cultivation and technology, depicts different development trajectories of the world. The mortals' desire for life and persistent exploration of the outside world are allusions to reality, and it is mainly logically smooth; By reversing the cause and effect of the Qimen Chaos Formation (it should be called this, right?) And Lin Hanzhang, as the protagonist, turning time over again, the plot changes of several generations are shown without any chaos. Information is well revealed through different world lines, allowing us to watch Lin Hanzhang in this life gradually take control of his own destiny, allowing the senior brother to break free from the shackles of the old plot and save "White Moonlight". But the reversal at the end is quite interesting, and it feels like it makes the characters of Lin Hanzhang and Nali more full-bodied, especially Nali. I think he is a very outstanding character, and I personally like him even more than Lin Hanzhang. Of course, other supporting characters are also very distinctive, such as Yu Xiaozi, Mei Congning, Song Zhaofei and other characters with more ink. However, Shan Yuhe, Song Qi and other characters can also outline a distinctive image with just a few strokes, which is amazing👍 I finished reading it in one sitting, and I personally felt that the pace was pretty good. In general, I actually like a few things the most. First, I was clearly shocked twice, when I read the first chapter and The Master of Destiny. The former is that I think the first chapter is very attractive, and it can clearly clarify the three worlds and tell them clearly to the readers. Thank you for popularizing science in your words🙏; The third is the pursuit of rigorous logic. I especially like Lin Hanzhang's description of each step of thinking. The epiphany really reflects the progress and maturity of thought, including the discussion of Tao, destiny, the flow of existence and self. The analysis is all philosophical and rational, and the logic in the article can be closed-loop and self-consistent; the fourth is the writing style, which is very comfortable, literary and charming. The dialogue between the senior brother and Ah Zhen is very interesting, and the emotional line is reflected in it. Finally, I love you so much, your writing is so awesome❤ Squatting new article

The writing style is very delicate, the subject matter is very novel and has depth. It is much better than the current meal replacement articles. I would like to give you a small suggestion: 1. When describing, try not to use the first point of view with multiple people. It will easily increase the difficulty of reading and cause confusion. (Can it be divided into chapters or an autobiography?) 2. When characters have a long dialogue, you can add a description of the character's expression or action before the words, so that readers can understand who said this sentence. The author's writing is very beautiful, and the protagonist's dialogues are very artistic and deep, but sometimes it is difficult to figure out who is talking after reading it over and over again [laughing and crying]

A rare protagonist with a tough and transparent mind, a character and an independent mind. The IQs of the characters are all on the passing line, and there are no brainless supporting characters, which is great. The author's writing style is sophisticated, and he can easily pick up a lot of uncommon knowledge. Reading it is hearty, as if he has stepped into a lifelike world of cultivation. The writing is very good, but the pacing in the later stages is too chaotic. It is a pity that the author wanted to express a lot, but the most basic story was not told well.

It's rare to see such a well-written story on Tomato, and the plot is really brain-burning and full of foreshadowing. The two characters have a contrasting cuteness... I really like their "differences in appearance and appearance". They are constantly reincarnating in a misplaced time and space, and finally find their perfection. From the beginning, they didn't know where they started. While exploring the avenue, they were also looking for the secret to break the situation for their lover. Senior brother really has all the qualities of a god, but what good is it to be a god? Millions of years of loneliness are unbearable. He even spent ten years of loneliness waiting for a letter from his A-Zhen. And I personally think that a small detail here is that when he came out of seclusion, he had no understanding except that Ah Zhen was angry and stopped sending him letters. As for Ah Zhen, she has always loved her clearly. The story is over, I hope there will only be sweetness after their happy ending.

The writing style is excellent, and it can be regarded as the pinnacle of writing style in my tomato novels. The plot is unconventional, and the character and image of the protagonist are vivid and lifelike. They are not flat images like many novels. They are so vivid that people can't help but like the characters in the book and change their mood according to the joy of the characters. It is worth mentioning that although the plot of this novel is smooth and smooth, it does feel like a slow stream of water. It is not like other popular novels, which makes people feel eager to read it all at once. It feels like gentle wind to me rather than hot fire. I like his plot, but I'm not eager to finish reading it all. The gentleness lingers around me, giving me comfort. For example, when I read a novel I like, I stay up late, until 3 or 4 o'clock, and then fall asleep reluctantly. But even though I love reading this novel, it doesn't take long to go to sleep. It really gives me a feeling of "we still have a long time together"; when I have free time, I will open it and continue reading the unfinished parts. To put it simply, the withdrawal reaction of this novel is weak, but this does not mean that its plot is unattractive. On the contrary, I highly recommend it. I think that among fast-paced novels, it is always time to change the taste and read a book that is exciting and has few "side effects".

Don't be put off by the title summary! This is a masterpiece! I was originally bored and was going to read a little folk article, but I clicked on it and found that it was different from what I expected. I was attracted by the first chapter. The plot has the thrill of peeling off the cocoon, and everything suddenly becomes clear at the end, and all the foreshadowings in the past are verified one by one. Even if the response is not good, the author still insists on writing. The character design is also very cute to me. I was really excited to see Senior Brother Wenwen get angry (strange xp). Gongjun's green tea words are really consistent. I feel that this article is mainly based on the plot. It is recommended to be careful when reading, otherwise it will be easy to get confused later. Show me quickly!

I typed a lot of words, and then in the middle of the night I was confused and couldn't write clearly, so I deleted it. Overall, it looks great and the setting is also very interesting. What attracts me the most is the emotional line between Hanzhang and Nali. It's really a match made in heaven. It's so sweet. They get along like an old married couple. Their characters are well-established and their personalities are vivid and flesh-and-blood. Hanzhang's relationship with The resistance of fate changed many predetermined endings. Nali is really a gentle and serious person. The dialogue between them also particularly touched me. They are lovers, confidants, and close friends... I just didn't expect it to end so quickly. It feels like it goes by so fast.

A very, very good novel, unique among Tomato Rebirth novels! I was once rejected because the rating was too low and the title was too generic. Now I am very grateful to myself for clicking in not long ago. I really like to see the different thoughts and opinions of various characters on Tao, the world, and "I" in Xiuxian, so this article is particularly suitable for me; in the later stages of the novel, whether it is the recycling of foreshadowing or the plot twist, it is surprising. Even though the story is relatively complete, it's still a pity that there aren't more extras. It's been a long time since I've done any serious output. My writing is limited and it's difficult to summarize the plot and characters. I can only dryly recommend to my future self: "Let's take a look again!"

This is the best article about cultivating immortality that I have seen recently. The following is simply a reversal, and then another reversal, explaining everything very clearly. This book is told from the perspective of a third person, Lin, which allows readers like me to think from his perspective, so until later I felt that what he was thinking was correct, and the conclusions he came to were also correct, which was very immersive. So his character set is very full, and why he is like this is because of what he has experienced. There is just one kind of thing, it should be like this, it should be like this. The subsequent reversal simply stunned me. But as long as you carefully ponder the previous article, you can feel it. It is very exciting, and it feels like it comes naturally. It might feel a bit confusing when you first read it, because everything was not fully explained. I read the book review carefully before continuing to read. The rest of the book is really exciting. The author's writing style is also very good, and perhaps the most intuitive expression is his view of "Tao". What is Tao? This is a question that has appeared several times in this article. I am not very good at understanding this kind of theoretical and abstract truth, but I think our senior brothers should understand "Tao". ರ_ರ... So in my opinion, this article is very well written in three aspects. The first aspect is the plot, with several story lines intersecting with each other, and finally creating a very complete story; the second aspect, I think, is the emotional line; and the third aspect, I think it is the "Tao". Anyway, it's beautiful, very beautiful. To describe it in two words, it's wonderful. I thought about it so much without realizing it, and didn't care, as long as it looked good. ('▽')