Hpguardian in the Dark

No matter, give yourself a chance first [shy]

⚠️Some slight spoilers in the second half of the review The writing style of this article is acceptable, and the storyline is much better than some simple HP fan fiction that directly provides one-on-one support. It can be seen that the author is not easy to produce food in his free time, and a complete outline structure can be clearly seen. Replace some of Lily's character functions with the protagonist, and because the protagonist likes the character of Snape, it makes Snape's school days much easier and creates emotions. The routine here is acceptable Contains spoilers 👇 I really like the setting where the heroine uses a practical time turner to go back in time and gradually "recall" what she has done. However, it may be because the author is really in a hurry and there are some setting holes that are not filled in before the decisive battle in the Triwizard Tournament. Moreover, in the first half of the reading, Snape's behavior in order to verify the identity of the protagonist was a bit rash and it did feel a bit OOC (forgive me that the plot was so confusing that I had no impression and was too lazy to read it). Basically, the protagonist used the time turner several times to "remember" that he had affected some things in the past. The setting of the heroine becoming the "weapon spirit" of Hogwarts Castle is really good, and there is also a time turner. Just like Peeves, she should be a magical creature born at the same time as Peeves. Speaking of which, why the heroine was able to hear the sound of modern weapons when Hogwarts was attacked thousands of years ago has not been filled in. The author must study hard and reorganize it after the college entrance examination. I'm optimistic about you!

The plot is pretty good, but Dada's writing is lacking, but I can see that Dada is improving. However, some plot points seem to be missing, such as the Mirror of Erised, and the twins' scenes are almost missing, and the Boggart seems to have not been written yet. I hope more attention will be paid to these details. You're still very pretty~ Come on, I love you~ [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] (Although I'm in school, it's hard to make updates, but... (Crazy hint)) I changed my mind, five stars! (The premise is to torture the professor severely) Updates are too slow. They only update once every few weeks. I almost forgot the previous plot.

I like it so much, but why hasn't the author updated it? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's so beautiful, why is it not rated enough? ! ! !

9. The heroine entered Slytherin under the false identity of her adoptive parents' Death Eater surnames. It was as if the whole school knew her adoptive parents. Once she was sorted, the whole school ostracized her. I don't know what level the adoptive parents were in the new setting. But Hermione, everyone from the Muggle world knew this surname. It was even more strange that Slytherin also ostracized the heroine, as if there were no Death Eaters in any family.

Good book, but I really want to know when the heroine will die!

I like it very much. It fits my reading comfort point very well. I also like the character design.

Very nice article

I guess it's a time converter.

I like it very much, I hope I won't abandon the book

When can we recognize each other? I'm so anxious.

It's really beautiful. I like knives and candies. Hurry up and get rid of the handle. I'm so impatient.

Very very very beautiful.

Come on! (But I plan to stock up first, cough)

It's beautiful, really very beautiful.

It's edible, support the author [Blow a kiss]

The author's writing is super good👍👍👍, the writing style is super delicate, I didn't read this book earlier😭

Very nice The plot and language of this book are good I'm not very good at evaluating the heroine, but she's also very good. This is a new book. I guarantee you will be hooked after reading 6 chapters.