[Elf World] + [Magic Kingdom] + [Story Direction] + [Battle] + [Pure Love] + [Healing]
Bai Su, who traveled to the mainland of Rock Kingdom, activated the sign-in reward system.
On the eve of the Summer Festival, he received a special system task and came to the palace.
I saw the grown-up Clysia and Sally wrapped in bathrobes, smiling sweetly at each other.
In order not to be discovered, he had to hide under the bathtub covered with flower petals.
The gears of fate began to turn.
Reader comments
It's okay. It would be even better to add some pictures of elves in the book. (I've been a weakling who has been retired for many years, so some suggestions)
I hope to add a picture later, I haven't played Locke for many years. Some familiar pets can trigger memories of that time
After reading the latest chapter, my feeling is that the system is mixed, and the male protagonist is not generally weak, especially the plot of the auction (I didn't like it very much, so I removed it first), but the writing is still okay.
It's pretty good. The Invincible novel is too boring. Although the plot is a bit dark, the protagonist has a certain degree of advancement and retreat despite his limited strength. The bottom line is also very clear. There are very few novels like this in Tomato. I hope the author can continue to update it.
Wow you are finally back
This Rock Kingdom smells like a fantasy novel
First time on tomato
I saw a novel about Locke Kingdom
Overall, well written
The protagonist is not the invincible stream on Tomato but is
The kind that slowly gets stronger
It may take a long time to write
I think it would be better if it were connected according to the main line of the game, cartoons and movies, and it would be more in line with my imagination of the Rock Kingdom novel. After all, the plots of the cartoons, movies and the main game are also very well done.
Although I don't know why the rating is so low, I still want to talk about this book. I probably wrote that humans are not weaker than elves, and super-evolved elves may not be as good as magicians, so it is almost all magic. The main character is awesome. The plot is a bit toxic, but I feel it is okay. There are new characters. Please give me a picture [crying]
I haven't played in seven or eight years. I don't know many elves anymore
Author: Get an Ice Dragon King or Ice Dragon King baby
Come on, I hope to strengthen the protagonist and collect Abu.
You can't escape from Jie
Why are there so many readers and so few comments [Chigua]
Author, please keep writing this Locke Kingdom fanfic. I hope you won't stop updating it.
The updates are very stable and the content is very good. It is one of the few good books I have ever read. It is worth reading [Thinking][Thinking]
It's okay, but the author is too short.
Let's strengthen the protagonists
Resurrection, my author!
This book is obviously very well written, why is the rating so low?
Love you to death
Full of childhood memories
@Paranoid youth author, do you have a group?
Come on, your writing is okay.
Qi Shuangqi I like it
Come on, author, there are very few Locke Kingdom books on Tomato, I hope you can stick to it [Like]
I want to ask who is the heroine? Single heroine or harem? Is the heroine Lina? Why didn't you show up?
The plot connection is very good. It just seems that the author doesn't want to do it anymore. Very uncomfortable
It's very good, but it's too slow to follow. It would be better if the updates were faster. Keep writing, at least it won't be unfinished. I will keep reading as long as you keep writing.
It's okay. It would be even better to add some pictures of elves in the book. (I've been a weakling who has been retired for many years, so some suggestions)
I hope to add a picture later, I haven't played Locke for many years. Some familiar pets can trigger memories of that time
After reading the latest chapter, my feeling is that the system is mixed, and the male protagonist is not generally weak, especially the plot of the auction (I didn't like it very much, so I removed it first), but the writing is still okay.
It's pretty good. The Invincible novel is too boring. Although the plot is a bit dark, the protagonist has a certain degree of advancement and retreat despite his limited strength. The bottom line is also very clear. There are very few novels like this in Tomato. I hope the author can continue to update it.
Wow you are finally back
This Rock Kingdom smells like a fantasy novel
First time on tomato I saw a novel about Locke Kingdom Overall, well written The protagonist is not the invincible stream on Tomato but is The kind that slowly gets stronger It may take a long time to write
I think it would be better if it were connected according to the main line of the game, cartoons and movies, and it would be more in line with my imagination of the Rock Kingdom novel. After all, the plots of the cartoons, movies and the main game are also very well done.
Although I don't know why the rating is so low, I still want to talk about this book. I probably wrote that humans are not weaker than elves, and super-evolved elves may not be as good as magicians, so it is almost all magic. The main character is awesome. The plot is a bit toxic, but I feel it is okay. There are new characters. Please give me a picture [crying]
I haven't played in seven or eight years. I don't know many elves anymore
Author: Get an Ice Dragon King or Ice Dragon King baby
Come on, I hope to strengthen the protagonist and collect Abu.
You can't escape from Jie
Why are there so many readers and so few comments [Chigua]
Author, please keep writing this Locke Kingdom fanfic. I hope you won't stop updating it.
The updates are very stable and the content is very good. It is one of the few good books I have ever read. It is worth reading [Thinking][Thinking]
It's okay, but the author is too short.
Let's strengthen the protagonists
Resurrection, my author!
This book is obviously very well written, why is the rating so low?
Love you to death
Full of childhood memories
@Paranoid youth author, do you have a group?
Come on, your writing is okay.
Qi Shuangqi I like it
Come on, author, there are very few Locke Kingdom books on Tomato, I hope you can stick to it [Like]
I want to ask who is the heroine? Single heroine or harem? Is the heroine Lina? Why didn't you show up?
The plot connection is very good. It just seems that the author doesn't want to do it anymore. Very uncomfortable
It's very good, but it's too slow to follow. It would be better if the updates were faster. Keep writing, at least it won't be unfinished. I will keep reading as long as you keep writing.
Author, keep working hard