Lotus*************

There is a feeling of confusion when looking at it, and I feel that this book has no focus. I write here and there, but I have no desire to read further.

Come on!

It's too chaotic. All kinds of characters are thrown in. It's not a variety show. Why are so many characters from other novels added? It's so distracting.

Just use the Jiujianxian template and you still need to play the role, which is totally speechless. There are also plot characters who stray into other worlds of cultivating immortals. In a world of low martial arts, we should write more plots that fit the characters of low martial arts. Watch the follow-up plot and give high scores to support!

Are there any comparisons between those who cultivate immortality and those who practice martial arts?

The strength is too low,

Why is it so annoying that no matter what novel there is, there has to be a female protagonist? It's so easy to achieve five stars by myself, but then a female protagonist has to be forced into it. Why don't I just ask if you can not add the heroine? If you can win with a good card, you have to add a bad card, and then you will have to shred the remaining good cards! If you can't fix it, don't fix it. I originally came here for Li Lianhua. It was fine at the beginning, but it didn't work in the end and it pissed me off to death! What the hell! If you can't write, don't write blindly, you've ruined all the characters like Li Hanyi, the Master of Wine and Swordsman! If you want to write a novel, you should write it well. If you have to destroy the characters, you can't write it like this when writing a fan novel. This is simply nonsense.

There are too many things in this book, it's too complicated

It's so messy and the fighter in the trash

Chapter 4 can't be watched anymore, I'm so embarrassed, one of them yelled out "Swordsmanship", and he yelled twice before the sword moved.

Just because you are too watery [you taste it carefully]

It looks chaotic and I feel tired

Eighty percent of it is rubbish