Su Yang traveled through the world of Lotus Tower, activated the role-playing system, and successfully activated his first character, Jiujianxian.
His superb swordsmanship has attracted praises from people in the world.
The restoration of Nanyin caused a bloody storm in the world, and everyone was in danger.
Su Yang originally just wanted to drink and have fun and play with the world.
But he was forced to get involved in the battle between good and evil in the martial arts world.
Helpless, Su Yang opened the Tianmen with a sword.
The world is at peace!
Reader comments
There is a feeling of confusion when looking at it, and I feel that this book has no focus. I write here and there, but I have no desire to read further.
Come on!
It's too chaotic. All kinds of characters are thrown in. It's not a variety show. Why are so many characters from other novels added? It's so distracting.
Just use the Jiujianxian template and you still need to play the role, which is totally speechless. There are also plot characters who stray into other worlds of cultivating immortals. In a world of low martial arts, we should write more plots that fit the characters of low martial arts. Watch the follow-up plot and give high scores to support!
Are there any comparisons between those who cultivate immortality and those who practice martial arts?
The strength is too low,
Why is it so annoying that no matter what novel there is, there has to be a female protagonist? It's so easy to achieve five stars by myself, but then a female protagonist has to be forced into it.
Why don't I just ask if you can not add the heroine? If you can win with a good card, you have to add a bad card, and then you will have to shred the remaining good cards! If you can't fix it, don't fix it. I originally came here for Li Lianhua. It was fine at the beginning, but it didn't work in the end and it pissed me off to death! What the hell! If you can't write, don't write blindly, you've ruined all the characters like Li Hanyi, the Master of Wine and Swordsman! If you want to write a novel, you should write it well. If you have to destroy the characters, you can't write it like this when writing a fan novel. This is simply nonsense.
There are too many things in this book, it's too complicated
It's so messy and the fighter in the trash
Chapter 4 can't be watched anymore, I'm so embarrassed, one of them yelled out "Swordsmanship", and he yelled twice before the sword moved.
Just because you are too watery [you taste it carefully]
There is a feeling of confusion when looking at it, and I feel that this book has no focus. I write here and there, but I have no desire to read further.
Come on!
It's too chaotic. All kinds of characters are thrown in. It's not a variety show. Why are so many characters from other novels added? It's so distracting.
Just use the Jiujianxian template and you still need to play the role, which is totally speechless. There are also plot characters who stray into other worlds of cultivating immortals. In a world of low martial arts, we should write more plots that fit the characters of low martial arts. Watch the follow-up plot and give high scores to support!
Are there any comparisons between those who cultivate immortality and those who practice martial arts?
The strength is too low,
Why is it so annoying that no matter what novel there is, there has to be a female protagonist? It's so easy to achieve five stars by myself, but then a female protagonist has to be forced into it. Why don't I just ask if you can not add the heroine? If you can win with a good card, you have to add a bad card, and then you will have to shred the remaining good cards! If you can't fix it, don't fix it. I originally came here for Li Lianhua. It was fine at the beginning, but it didn't work in the end and it pissed me off to death! What the hell! If you can't write, don't write blindly, you've ruined all the characters like Li Hanyi, the Master of Wine and Swordsman! If you want to write a novel, you should write it well. If you have to destroy the characters, you can't write it like this when writing a fan novel. This is simply nonsense.
There are too many things in this book, it's too complicated
It's so messy and the fighter in the trash
Chapter 4 can't be watched anymore, I'm so embarrassed, one of them yelled out "Swordsmanship", and he yelled twice before the sword moved.
Just because you are too watery [you taste it carefully]
It looks chaotic and I feel tired
Eighty percent of it is rubbish