Am I the Sister Picked up by Palos? !

I can't stand it anymore, but I want to give you a five-star review to encourage the author. I can feel the author's love for the characters. The daily life is very warm. The description of the characters of the Thunder Lion Pirates, except for the Thunder Lion, is pretty good. Halfway through, I discovered a small problem with the author, which is caused by his own lack of cognitive ability. The most obvious point is that It's the superiors like Garderros, Garderros's father, Lei Shi and Zuma. Their thinking logic and the superior's behavior style are not expressed at all. Instead, it feels like a child's play and a drama. The underlying thinking logic of the characters' actions is confusing and has no clear purpose. It feels like they just come up one after another. Generally speaking, the lack of experience leads to the disconnection between the article and reality, so it is easy for people to make mistakes. A good, excellent, and attractive work should not only be rich in emotions, but also be closer to reality and consistent with the thinking logic of reality. The stronger the sense of reality, the stronger the sense of involvement. The author needs to slowly understand this. Come on, I hope the author's next book will be even better.

As a die-hard fan, I think this book is very well written. Some of the original classic and important plots of this book have not changed. I really like the character of Palos. It is a bit OOC, but I think it is still very close to the original work. Unlike some books, the Raiders who pass through are... There are plots that take place among various original characters. The OOC is super serious, and the characters in the original work are all super well written... So in comparison, this book written by the author is also very good. The character of the heroine is also very good and will not give people a brainless pet. I hope the author will continue to do so, come on! !

After a thunderstorm there is always thunder, and no one can separate them. Lei Shi gave half of his tenderness to Rey and half to Camille. Camille's gentleness tends to the Thunder Lion throughout her life, and her loyalty tends to the Thunder Lion throughout her life. In the end, all that was left of Lei Shi was tenderness... And all that was left of Camille. Camille is the most loyal person! They are each other's bottom line and counter scale. "Without my right hand, I still have my left hand, and without my left hand, I still have my legs!" "Palos, have you seen Camille and Pelli?" "Unless Brother Leo needs it, I have no interest in putting myself in a dangerous place." Throw away all those irrelevant titles! Follow me, Camille! "As long as it's something that big brother wants, I will definitely make it happen for you!" Yes, the stars and the sea will never separate, and the lightning and thunder will always be with you. The purple stars and the blue sea. @ DrinkMOLI @ros is Xiya's @

I like the warm daily life you write. They are extracted from daily life, right? I like Changfeng's lively character, some little habits in life, and some little emotions. She is indeed very nervous sometimes, but when she is reliable, I love her very much. Her belly is black and her belly is black, but she is black, hehe... The plot does not blindly follow the original drama, it is generally good, and a lot of new content has been added to make it more novel. The plot is generally very sweet, but there are also knives, which is within my acceptable range. There are also many jokes in daily life, and many real-life jokes are added. Anyway, I like it too! Changfeng is a bit of a heartthrob in the relationship, and he is very easy to talk to Jiajia, and some of the small interactions with Palos are also very sweet, which eases the relationship between Palos and Lei Shi and makes the members have more trust in each other. The personalities of most of the characters are not broken. Even if Jiajia was a child, she is not like Changfeng. What should I say? Let go of all the pride of the king and indulge in bottomless favor? It's hard for me to describe, you can figure it out for yourself. I love the arrogant Jiajia so much! Gray is still aloof, but there are some inner scenes where I really think he is a sullen man, hahaha, but he still pretends to be aloof on the surface. Gymboree is still the warm little sun, and Zitang is still timid. Will he turn dark in the future? Actually, I hope Zitang can become more confident, because his personality is really similar to mine. What can I say? I hated my old self. And my dear Miss Kelly, I really love Miss Kelly who gossips with Changfeng! Also, please ask your sister Camille to give me a dozen! Silly Pelli also misses Rua so much, Sihasha... Ahem, that's not me. Let's continue with the review. The background of the character Palos in the original plot is really bad. He was betrayed since he was a child. Woohoo, my Papa... In this book, although Papa was still betrayed by that person, Changfeng also slightly changed his destiny? I think the author will most likely change the ending of Palos, and it won't turn into a dark one, right? I seem to have missed someone... Oh, there seems to be a line in this book about the boss Lei Shi calling Palos and the others, hahahaha, I really want to laugh when I read that. In short, hehe, author, I will always wait for your update. Come on, I love your writing so much, I will always support you!

I think this article is great. What do you think? No matter how you say it, it speaks to my heart (dog head) (dog head) (dog head)

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Very, very, very, very beautiful! There's just one problem. I feel like... Changfeng seems to have forgotten that she traveled through time.

It's a good watch and recommended. The plot is okay, but the cp is expected but not expected. The only bad thing is. The reason why I gave it a 4 out of 10 is because I saw it before it was finished. I can only say one thing, please update it quickly, the child is going to starve to death. More! The most important thing! Hope it doesn't end badly! Don't mess up! Don't mess up! ! ! ! ! [Laughing][laughing] (I encourage everyone to read every novel and review every novel carefully, so that everyone can see the best novels. It is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it.)

Although sometimes I feel a little unclear, maybe I didn't look carefully, but it's not bad, overall.

It's really beautiful! ! Like it very much! ! The author loves you so much! The plot inside is very rich and not boring at all! The characters are also well mastered! ! [Adoration] [Blowing kiss] I'm really looking forward to the next plot! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

... After reading it for so long, I haven't commented yet!

It's very beautiful and exciting, but I wish there were more candy and the author please use less knives. Also, dear author, I beg you to update it quickly. If there are knives, I will cry to death😭😭😭

It is recommended to look at the convex and concave powder! ! It's really beautiful! ! ! The protagonists Chang Feng and Lei Shi, as well as the members, Jili, Jin, and Gray...100/° Recommended! !

The article written by the author is very good. The plot is clear, organized, and the imagination is very good. The descriptions are very good (≧∇≦*). I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง. Here, I wish the author a happy National Day holiday and a happy life. Come on!

It's super nice. I hope this book will become more and more popular! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

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I am actually not a concave and convex fan. But because the author's writing is quite good, I came to read it myself. The name is really hard to remember. ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ ) This is a complaint from a non-concave fan. Is there anyone else like me? →

Hehe, I don't care, it's a good habit to give five stars to others! But it's really beautiful

It's very nice. The CP of this book is Palos, our Parme (the author, you want the five-star review)

Very nice, looks great with Palos. It's just that I'm Kabuki, so I think it's okay. The writing is very nice, so I can give it five stars.

It's a very good-looking novel, and you'll be at a loss if you don't read it. It can be summed up in two words: good-looking [top post] [top post] [top post]

Wow, this novel is so good🤩Recommended to read👀

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! ! ! ! ! But I hope you won't stop updating😭I really love watching it. Please don't stop updating. As long as you keep updating, I wish you good health, a safe family, and a lot of money😭happy😭 The characters are often OOC, too outrageous, and have many shortcomings. The protagonist forgets that he is a time traveler, and the bump contest is also changed. The audience is basically primary school students.

Really pretty! ! ! ! I just ran out of ideas! ! ! The characters are very vivid! ! ! The plot is also very interesting! ! ! ! Promise me! Go check it out! ! ! !

I'm sorry. Although I've quit the circle, I still feel very good when I watch it now.

Come on, come on, come on! I will always be there! ! [Laughing][laughing]

It's so well-written that five stars is not too much to give, hehe~

Update quickly, or I will follow the network cable to your door and stand in front of your door! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Added this 50 words)

The author is very diligent in updating, the content is also good, and I finally ranked third on the monthly gift list [Sending Hearts]

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