HP I Was a Moonlight at Hogwarts

My evaluation is really good. Although a pair of official partners (Roch) were removed, the new CPs are Krum and Hermione! Krum, a person who smelled the fragrance of flowers before the roses bloomed. He discovered the dusty pearl and cherished her especially, so I really have no objection to the official match being separated [shy] Thirdly, many fanfics will write Severus as maybe OOC, but this book is okay. The changes that are both unexpected and reasonable can easily arouse good feelings. Thank you to the author for giving Harry a perfection that is not in the original work. The final outcome is no longer a victory that ends with us being defeated. It's about the happy ending of defeating the darkness that comes after we have gone through thousands of sails. The last thing I want to say is that the lighting session really made me sad [crying] See you in the next book~

Overall it's okay The most brilliant thing is that Luo He finally dismantled Ke He is real. I also enjoyed watching the reunion finale. And the reborn Draco undoubtedly avoided a lot of trouble

It must be Draco. With the heroine's character written like this, it seems that Draco is the perfect match for her to join forces and connect with each other. Author, you are really good at writing and characterization, the plot is coherent and the foreshadowing is well written. Come on, big brother! ! !

I really think this book is good. It's not a nonsense, nor is it a knee-jerk licking of the main character. The heroine is independent in personality, a top student, and sober in the world. Anyway, I think it's pretty good, and she is the best match for Draco! ! !

It's pretty good, but it's too little and not enough to read. I wish the author would update the chapter every day. I really like Draco and Severus and hope there will be more stories about them. Who doesn't love the platinum young master and the arrogant and venomous old bat? ! !

It's really beautiful. First of all, the logic is very clear. It's very smooth after reading it in one sitting. There's nothing obscure or childish about it. The writing style is goooooood! Secondly, the character and character of the heroine are the most lovable. Also, Draco's "rebirth" setting is contradictory to me. On the one hand, the young master has experienced so many ups and downs, and his psychology is different from when he was a child. On the other hand, his mind has matured and he will not be tit-for-tat with Harry (but I am not sure about love). No matter what the young master looks like, I will like him [Adoration] I feel like this book doesn't describe Harry enough. I could write more about why Harry is attracted to the heroine. The love at first sight scene is very good, but the foundation of the relationship needs to be deeper [Blow kiss] I still like the young master's love for a long time ~ Finally, I want to vote for the young master! [Shy] The author will update quickly. It's so slow right now [Crying] I'm on vacation, why don't I update a few more chapters? It's best to start with 10 chapters [Adored]

It's really good-looking. I hope the male protagonist is Draco. He and the female protagonist are really sweet.

Although a lot of foreshadowing was not written and Draco's heartbeat was very inexplicable, it is a rare Golden Finger article that is not so exaggerated and the writing style is online. The subsequent interaction between the male and female protagonists is quite sweet. I originally thought about the subsequent interaction between the female protagonist and the little golden unicorn, but I didn't expect it. A tool beast that made Draco fall in love with her, and a brief explanation of the second life. I still want to write the extra chapter in more detail, and the god who traded souls. Many parts that could be expanded upon were skipped over. I like the happy ending without bento fanfic, and I like this article.

Super awesome! Don't know why the rating is so low... There is a rare Kehe CP!

It's a very good book. I don't understand why the score is so low. The logic runs through the whole text and the ending fills in the previous pitfalls. The personal settings are also very well written. It makes me feel that the personal settings created by the author are really like those written by Rowling. The writing style is also very good. The male and female protagonists also stepped on my point. I really don't understand why the score is so low. I read it in two days. I really feel that their story is real. I was a little reluctant to read it in the early morning. In short, it is really worth it! ! ! The score for this book should be higher! ! ! I also hope that all of you in the parallel world can shine brightly in the next journey of life. May we all be happy people.

It's a very good book. I want Draco to be the male protagonist.

To be honest, this is my first time watching HP fanfic (I watched the movie). I think it is really interesting. The subsequent interaction between the heroine and Draco is really sweet, and at the beginning, I saw that Draco was actually reborn. I was very surprised [Adoration] When I saw Cedric, Gemini, Snape, and Dumbledore all fine, I was really touched [crying] Then there may be missing words or typos in the chapters. I personally don't think it affects me, but I still hope the author can change it~ I also think the Otome in the introduction can be changed~ Finally, it's the night at the end~ I want to watch it so much [shy] but I really feel like it's not enough, I'm still not finished, I want to watch it twice! In fact, I don't know what the purpose of describing the plot of Elaine and Tom's childhood is, but since the author wrote it this way, she has a reason! So it doesn't affect me to continue reading~ I can't write long reviews [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] The introduction to the plot of Elaine and Tom when they were young should be a supplement to the previous chapter where the basilisk was solved and Tom said to Elaine that you betrayed me, right? [Thinking] 2 I thought about it again while I was brushing [eating melon]

It is a HP novel that is relatively easy to read. The heroine is a studious and innocent Miss Hufflepuff. It's also a book-wearing, fetal-wearing thing. Well, Draco actually came back from the war, which is a bit magical. Then the two of them find a way to deal with Voldemort together, and join forces with Dumbledore and others. With Hufflepuff's characteristics, knowing so many regrets in the future, he will definitely want to change something. There are many male protagonists, this is what attracts me the most haha. Overall it's not bad.

Very pretty. But it's different from the introduction. It's a 1v1 with a heartthrob in the early stage and later stage. Cedric and Harry both have CP in the later stages. Some places have not been filled in, such as the second life and the third life, and Tom's emotional line, and the memory loss before the age of seven has not been written.

Very nice! The rebirth of Draco is very attractive, but the fact that he is still afraid of Voldemort is very real. Yes, he is just a teenager. Even if he is reborn, he can only protect his family as much as possible under limited time and circumstances. The heroine was his biggest change and luck after his rebirth, allowing him to truly protect his family and have his most precious lover. Of course, the initial confrontation and exchange of spells was beyond my expectations, hahahaha. After reading the author's ending, I was surprised that this is a novel without an outline, but it seems very reasonable. Come on, author, and look forward to more HP fans. Of course, if you are still Draco CP, I will support you forever [Love]

I cried when I read it. I really like the happy ending. Every character is well portrayed. The author is great at writing. [Like] I have read a lot of HP fanfics. In my opinion, this will be the top one. Elaine is a witch with both strength and beauty. The fact that Draco is reborn also pokes fun at me. I am really happy [crying] and the Magic Circle Five. Everyone is great. They benefited a lot from studying the Magic Circle together. [Like] I always admire the courage of Harry, the savior. Of course, Ron is also an excellent Gryffindor "Miss Know-it-all" Hermione. Her knowledge is impressive, and her courage [sending heart] and Bernie, Theodore Blaise... I like every one of them [laughs] The author is really great. I think this is a great fan work [Like]

Please keep up the good work and update it. It looks great. It will be finished in a while. ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡

This is the second Harry Potter fan novel I've read on Tomato, and it's really good! Choosing Draco as the male protagonist is also expected. After all, both of them can be regarded as "adults in children's skin." Compared with others, their souls are more compatible. They can get very close from the beginning, and they will be together naturally later on.

It looks good. The female protagonist is a pure-blooded Norwegian and the male protagonist Draco (oh, why didn't I discover this article earlier!!). I really like the feeling that the two of them are evenly matched at the beginning. In this era, the only two male and female protagonists who know the development of the plot really feel good. Even if they are not lovers at the beginning, there is this kind of thread that tightly ties them together. This is very satisfying for me, a Draco dream girl. All kinds of foreshadowings buried in the previous article are also filled in at the back. In short, it is very attractive. I recommend it [sending my heart]

It's very beautiful, but there are too few and it's not enough to see! Draco and Elaine really get along so well! ! ! Please give me a boost and make more updates! [Please update]

Really love it! ! ! My favorite HP I love the heroine so much! Beautiful, career and ambitious Wow wow wow, I really cried to death. I was preparing to make up for it during the vacation, but it ended [crying][crying][crying]

Emmmmm The heroine is not particularly strong. She just fights to the end. She still follows a lot of storylines and there are no major changes. Although it is a derivative, it is really friendly to fans of the original work. It also satisfies our regrets. The plot is also super good! I contributed o(^▽^)o to my first Tomato review. I was really inspired after reading it, and I plan to start writing some essays. I am so inspired! (OvO) Looking forward to the author's new book~(=^x^=)

It's good-looking, and the ending is very, very, very perfect. All the difficulties come to a good end in this book. The author is great. I like the character of the heroine [Blowing Kiss], but the character creation of the hero is not rich enough. I just felt that he was very bland throughout, and he felt a bit like a sweet doting type.

Very well written! The writing style is very delicate, and the relationship between Elaine and Draco is perfectly written. From the beginning to the end, the content is consistent. Whether it is the friendship between girls and boys, or the love between other people, each has its own story. The rich characters make it flesh and blood. I really like Elaine's way of doing things, and I also envy their love story. The author writes very well, looking forward to the new book📖

The emotional line of the protagonist is still very delicate, and the overall storyline of HP has also been improved a lot. Some of the regrets about reading HP when I was a child have also been changed. It is an excellent HP fanfic worth re-reading.

8.5/10 A very interesting book. The Draco in this book is a 2.0 Mature version. I like the relationship between him and the heroine gradually. It is very pure and sweet. I also love the plot, it's well written

It's super good-looking. There's a lot of foreshadowing in it. It's not just a campus romance. The heroine, Bao Bao, is very popular. She is the first heroine I've seen who is not a Slytherin. The overall atmosphere is very good. I recommend watching [Shy]

It's very good-looking, and it's just right for my taste. I rank it second in my opinion. It's very well written, and I feel that there's absolutely no connection between it and the storyline. Personally, I think it's quite reasonable. I like it very much!

Very nice! ! I am a person who has never read Harry Potter. After reading this fanfic, I became very interested in Harry Potter, especially the story of Dumbledore and Grindelwald! ! ! ! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]

Actually, I think there is one thing that is different from what I thought. Well, it feels like Harry is still kept in the dark, an ignorant hero who was sacrificed. But compared to the movie, at least here Harry didn't lose many people he loved. Well, the story between the heroine and Draco is also quite good, but it feels a little rushed later on, and the plot of Voldemort is less. Overall, it's a very good book with all its flaws. Ah, so empty. This kind of immersive writing makes reading the whole book give people a feeling of loneliness as they return to the real world. It's like a bystander finished reading their story, brought in an insignificant role next to them, and then was forcibly kicked out at the finale. [Almost crying]