Valon: Even a Supporting Character Can Change His Fate.

It's pretty good. I've watched so many Jackie Chan adventures, and either became a Holy Lord or created my own character. This time traveling through Jackie Chan is quite novel. The most important thing is that the arrangement of this Golden Finger is a bit interesting.

It can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas. These ideas are quite excellent, but the writing style is not mature enough and needs improvement. And the description of the battle is very vague. It seems to be described, but it is no different from no description, because there is no room for imagination for others who write it. Looking forward to the next one.

Don't always put them in other worlds. Even if you put them in other worlds, you should get more hot ones. Otherwise, if you show other worlds and you can't understand them, it's too uncomfortable. I'll give it four stars. If I don't do other worlds in the future, I'll give it five stars. Finish it quickly. I'm so drunk. Posted a bunch of stuff that didn't belong to Jackie Chan's Adventures. If you really can't do it, just change the title of the book. I can't understand the early Jackie Chan Adventures or anything like that.

To be honest, the fan novel is pretty good, but I'm worried that it will crash. After all, the G4 studied by the protagonist can bring back transcendence and sell it to exchange for points to buy things. Will the strength increase too fast? I hope the author can see this.

The writing is good, the language is fluent, and Wallon is finally proud. I look forward to more exciting writing by the author in the future.

If you want to do good things and still have patriotic feelings, wouldn't it be better to travel through time to become a dragon? It's too weird for you to travel through time to become a good person in Wallon.

Not bad, the plot and characters are quite good. The only shortcoming is the setting of the transcendent. Although it cannot be said to be a failure, it still makes people feel a little disappointed. But it's understandable. After all, if you want to write for a long time, you have to find a channel to contact other worlds. Otherwise, just to write adventures, two million would be enough.

I suddenly remembered, in terms of copyright, isn't Jackie Chan's Adventures American?

It's very exciting. There is also a transcendent city, and the world structure is suddenly as big as the universe. I just don't know if the author can keep it stable.

I've finished reading it. So far, there's nothing toxic about it. I hope the author will continue writing and don't make it too unfinished and too much of a mistress.

It's pretty, but there are a lot of poisons too. In the middle period of writing, the combat power began to collapse. The protagonist of the all-talisman couldn't keep a helicopter. The protagonist wanted to rob everything (dad's shop was looted), but the things he grabbed were either not used or useless (such as the above talisman). The author follows the original plot's setting of a balance between righteousness and blackness, but makes the protagonist of the black side (the protagonist of this book) crazily suppress the righteous protagonist (Xiaoyu and other protagonists). This is obviously wrong: 1. Suppressing the protagonist group is likely to make the world go out of control (you don't know what tricks Zhengqi will play for them), which is fatal to the time travellers. 2. The stronger the righteousness, the stronger the black energy. If you fully understand the protagonist's group movements, providing them with appropriate help will be more conducive to the protagonist becoming stronger (the stronger the righteousness will stimulate the black energy and strengthen the protagonist). Above, 4 stars for encouragement

So far, it's okay. The author should update the previous book quickly. It's not easy to have a book about Super Star God.

The author has a good idea, has found the right direction to write, and the characters' characteristics are also very good. A transcendent person in terms of plot, this is good but don't rely too much on the power of the 12 spells. Air magic and black magic are not bad in power.

It's very interesting. I wonder if there are any similar novels?

I think as a fanfic, this is undoubtedly qualified. However, the author has some shortcomings in terms of the rules of the entire story. In terms of character creation, I think it still lacks a little spirituality, but overall it is worth encouraging. Keep up the good work.

When you want to write about regret, you can't just write about regret, you have to write about the emotions it often brings, the nights it keeps you tossing and turning, the symbols it drips on the diary, and the childish thoughts of longing to turn back time.

The character description is brilliant, but Wallon will only grow and become stronger. This shows that the path of the strong is doomed to be lonely, and I hope that Wallong will be lonely for the rest of his life.

The plot is very good. Compared with the protagonists in other novels, this one is very good. The protagonist is very well portrayed. He is still developing his strength even though he is a dog. He will not develop like other novels, where he is evenly matched in one battle and surpasses in one battle. He is still very low-key while being a dog. The protagonist is portrayed very well. He slowly accumulates strength while being a dog. After accumulating strength, he makes a deal with the devil to gain strength again. This is very good. This point alone is far superior to other novels with the protagonist Gou. It is not like that kind of novel. Except that the fighting power of the dog behind immediately collapsed at the beginning, this novel is very good.

When will the mask plot still have demonic energy? It's so slow. I feel like water. I've been wandering around the city and then leveled up and closed the minions. I'm looking forward to the mask plot. Valon has 12 spell VIs masks. I wonder if he will accept the mask and dispel the negative effects.

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So far, it looks ok, not bad, not bad

This fanfic you wrote in Tomato is the most interesting one I found.

I didn't want to watch it at first, but when I came in, I found it was pretty good. The more I watched, the more interesting it became, and I immediately saw the updates. Both the content and the degree of restoration are very good. The author will update it soon.

Not bad, keep up the good work

I especially want to know what the protagonist group is doing now? And the 100-year-old one. When can the battle between Zhengqi and Black Qi begin? There is still a lot of content, he must have a follow-up, I want to see that follow-up. There are many branch plots that have no follow-up. I want to see those follow-ups without hesitation.

Well, it's pretty good. I watched it all at once, but if I wait slowly, I won't feel as good as watching a lot at once. I think it's more recommended to keep it up, but it's easy to finish it, so I usually watch it once a week.

If you have the ability to obtain the eight demonic energies and combine them with the power of the twelve talismans, you will be invincible.

At the end of the story, the white dove no longer stops in the church, and the bird is no longer bound to a cage. We run towards the light, towards our ideals, and embrace our own desires.

It's really good to watch, the thinking is clear, the plot is novel, it's good to watch and I love watching it [Chigua][Chigua]

I started following it again after a long time, and I have finished watching it now. The plot is exciting, the protagonist is powerful and smart, and can travel through all the worlds to improve himself, and there are many travelers from other worlds. They are strong together and have worldly feelings [Like][Like][Please update]