Siheyuan: Master of Medicine

Can be rewritten

Not to mention the poor writing skills, let's just say that Widow Qin called her Jia and Zhang sometimes as mother, sometimes as mom, and sometimes as mother-in-law. And in the fourth chapter, He Yuzhu called Jia Zhang's Grandma Zhang, which was even more outrageous, ugh😔. I seem to have read a novel that is exactly the same as this one before

If it really doesn't work, then find another job, or maybe find a part-time job.

Your mother will have an abortion after reading what you wrote.

The content of the book is well written, but the relationship between the characters is really messy. I strongly recommend the author to revise it!

Let's evaluate it objectively. The writing style is not very good, and the writing is not very fluent. Although it is said that reading online articles does not use brains, it is really uncomfortable to read this kind of sluggishness. It feels like there is no connection between the front and the back. Moreover, the author has not read the original work at all, and the writing is strange.

After writing it, can you review it and check that many places are blocked? Not to mention the fact that the system delivered a set of courtyard houses to reality, but it actually gave me a set of modern home appliances. Are you waiting to be investigated?

It's so awkward. What the hell is He Yuyu? Is He Yuzhu the elder brother or the younger brother?

The plot is okay, the rest may have been written by the author when his brain was in a trance.

What a mess! The factory director is called boss, and the money is called silver! You're not being funny. Second uncle and third uncle? Who is this? Second uncle and third uncle? The names are messy! A little while this a little while that! The more I read, the more I feel that I am not very intelligent and cannot understand! Ding Qiunan calls the protagonist Brother He for a while, Brother He for a while! Senior Brother He, Doctor He, where do you grow up? Who is Wang Yao? The titles are a mess! Director He? Call me in the kitchen, uncle? Uncle? Owner? How many titles does your novel have?