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Reader comments
Not to mention the poor writing skills, let's just say that Widow Qin called her Jia and Zhang sometimes as mother, sometimes as mom, and sometimes as mother-in-law. And in the fourth chapter, He Yuzhu called Jia Zhang's Grandma Zhang, which was even more outrageous, ugh😔. I seem to have read a novel that is exactly the same as this one before
Can be rewritten
Your mother will have an abortion after reading what you wrote.
If it really doesn't work, then find another job, or maybe find a part-time job.
The content of the book is well written, but the relationship between the characters is really messy. I strongly recommend the author to revise it!
After writing it, can you review it and check that many places are blocked? Not to mention the fact that the system delivered a set of courtyard houses to reality, but it actually gave me a set of modern home appliances. Are you waiting to be investigated?
Let's evaluate it objectively. The writing style is not very good, and the writing is not very fluent. Although it is said that reading online articles does not use brains, it is really uncomfortable to read this kind of sluggishness. It feels like there is no connection between the front and the back. Moreover, the author has not read the original work at all, and the writing is strange.
It's so awkward. What the hell is He Yuyu? Is He Yuzhu the elder brother or the younger brother?
The writing is too ordinary, the names of the characters are confusing, and the plot makes no sense. It seems that everything can be predicted, but there is no way to take precautions?
There are too many typos and some articles are too skippy.
The author should stop writing, it's a mess, sometimes I'm a sister, sometimes I'm a big sister, it's too messy, it's so bad, you are the worst person to write about the Siheyuan [vomit]
What a mess! The factory director is called boss, and the money is called silver! You're not being funny.
Second uncle and third uncle? Who is this? Second uncle and third uncle? The names are messy! A little while this a little while that! The more I read, the more I feel that I am not very intelligent and cannot understand! Ding Qiunan calls the protagonist Brother He for a while, Brother He for a while! Senior Brother He, Doctor He, where do you grow up? Who is Wang Yao? The titles are a mess! Director He? Call me in the kitchen, uncle? Uncle? Owner? How many titles does your novel have?
The plot is quite good, but the author is terrible at writing. He must have written it when his brain was twitching. He can write the previous sentence and the next sentence of a novel without even connecting one sentence. You are so good. Even cerebral thrombosis calls you brother, real brother.
The plot is okay, the rest may have been written by the author when his brain was in a trance.
The logic is illogical, the content is confusing, there are many typos, and the writing is not summarized. The more you write, the more confusing it becomes. Please give it a two-star review.
The relationship between the characters is a bit confusing. One moment he is Yuyu's second brother, and the other moment he becomes Yu Yu's elder sister.
I really need to change my job. The more I write, the more messy it becomes. In the end, I can't stand it anymore. It's such a mess.
Even my brother, brother, sister and sister didn't understand what it was about.
What a huge mess
I've read a few chapters and can't stand it any longer. What are you writing about?
Even a batch of copies with many typos could not be copied like this.
What nonsense did you write to defraud the manuscript fee?
What the hell is a brother and a younger brother?
See for yourself
So many typos
Only worth this point
What are you writing? Haven't you read it yourself?
It's such a mess, you can even get the names of the characters wrong. . Don't say anything else
If you have medical skills, is it interesting for a doctor not to treat illnesses and save people but to do fancy things all day long?
It's written in a mess. It's too confusing. If you don't know how to write, don't write. It's embarrassing.
Not to mention the poor writing skills, let's just say that Widow Qin called her Jia and Zhang sometimes as mother, sometimes as mom, and sometimes as mother-in-law. And in the fourth chapter, He Yuzhu called Jia Zhang's Grandma Zhang, which was even more outrageous, ugh😔. I seem to have read a novel that is exactly the same as this one before
Can be rewritten
Your mother will have an abortion after reading what you wrote.
If it really doesn't work, then find another job, or maybe find a part-time job.
The content of the book is well written, but the relationship between the characters is really messy. I strongly recommend the author to revise it!
After writing it, can you review it and check that many places are blocked? Not to mention the fact that the system delivered a set of courtyard houses to reality, but it actually gave me a set of modern home appliances. Are you waiting to be investigated?
Let's evaluate it objectively. The writing style is not very good, and the writing is not very fluent. Although it is said that reading online articles does not use brains, it is really uncomfortable to read this kind of sluggishness. It feels like there is no connection between the front and the back. Moreover, the author has not read the original work at all, and the writing is strange.
It's so awkward. What the hell is He Yuyu? Is He Yuzhu the elder brother or the younger brother?
The writing is too ordinary, the names of the characters are confusing, and the plot makes no sense. It seems that everything can be predicted, but there is no way to take precautions?
There are too many typos and some articles are too skippy.
The author should stop writing, it's a mess, sometimes I'm a sister, sometimes I'm a big sister, it's too messy, it's so bad, you are the worst person to write about the Siheyuan [vomit]
What a mess! The factory director is called boss, and the money is called silver! You're not being funny. Second uncle and third uncle? Who is this? Second uncle and third uncle? The names are messy! A little while this a little while that! The more I read, the more I feel that I am not very intelligent and cannot understand! Ding Qiunan calls the protagonist Brother He for a while, Brother He for a while! Senior Brother He, Doctor He, where do you grow up? Who is Wang Yao? The titles are a mess! Director He? Call me in the kitchen, uncle? Uncle? Owner? How many titles does your novel have?
The plot is quite good, but the author is terrible at writing. He must have written it when his brain was twitching. He can write the previous sentence and the next sentence of a novel without even connecting one sentence. You are so good. Even cerebral thrombosis calls you brother, real brother.
The plot is okay, the rest may have been written by the author when his brain was in a trance.
The logic is illogical, the content is confusing, there are many typos, and the writing is not summarized. The more you write, the more confusing it becomes. Please give it a two-star review.
The relationship between the characters is a bit confusing. One moment he is Yuyu's second brother, and the other moment he becomes Yu Yu's elder sister.
I really need to change my job. The more I write, the more messy it becomes. In the end, I can't stand it anymore. It's such a mess.
Even my brother, brother, sister and sister didn't understand what it was about.
What a huge mess
I've read a few chapters and can't stand it any longer. What are you writing about?
Even a batch of copies with many typos could not be copied like this.
What nonsense did you write to defraud the manuscript fee?
What the hell is a brother and a younger brother?
See for yourself
So many typos
Only worth this point
What are you writing? Haven't you read it yourself?
It's such a mess, you can even get the names of the characters wrong. . Don't say anything else
If you have medical skills, is it interesting for a doctor not to treat illnesses and save people but to do fancy things all day long?
It's written in a mess. It's too confusing. If you don't know how to write, don't write. It's embarrassing.