Comprehensive Martial Arts: Blackened Li Lianhua, the Founder of the Inherited Demonic Path

It looks a bit messy. The force value of some people is written down, and Xiao Zijin's force value is written extremely high. Di Feisheng is not on par with Li Xiangyi, and now it has become a demon corpse with a higher force value. It has been with Xiao Zijin for so long, shouldn't it be an instant kill?

It's just average, but the fighting is too ink-filled, with adults and children fighting back and forth, and there are only one or two narrations about people who die in one or two blows. Many people find it annoying to read. After all, nowadays we read a lot at a fast pace, and not many people can read this way.

It's so ordinary. After rescuing Sikong Qianluo, the protagonist doesn't want to get rid of her. Instead, he just feels that he has an extra mouthful of food. There are many girls in the world at noon. I feel that after saving him, he will have an extra mouthful of food and lose weight. You can either say that the girl is good-looking and the protagonist should accept her. Or drive her away. There are so many women that can be saved from this world. What are you writing about? Just like that, I had an encounter with this woman. Can you be a little more rigorous? It's really mindless writing, blacklisting, and poisoning!

I really don't want a female protagonist, and even if I want one, I don't want Sikong Qianluo! ! !

The writing is okay, but it's verbose and not crisp at all.

Well written, keep it up

It's well written, please check it again after you finish it.

It's only over fifty chapters and the drama has already begun. Instead of killing the person who harmed you, he sent his subordinates to play with someone else's younger brother personally for five chapters.

Very good, come on