Honkai: Star Rail: I’m the Luofu’s Dragon Lord and a Part-Time Judge

There are too few people, and I really like what Bai Chen said: "If you want a horse to run, you have to give it plenty of fodder." If you want the author to keep updating, you need to give the author enough rewards.

Generally, the protagonist is too frustrated, as if there is no good person in Vidyadhara, which makes the whole fairy boat very rotten, and the plug-ins are so troublesome, and the various differences are not explained in advance. Overall, it's okay, but very few people will watch it until the end. All the differences and responses in the previous chapters add up to the word boring. I felt really upset. If I hadn't been bored these past few days and endured the upset as a test, I would have read a dozen or twenty chapters at most. (If the protagonist is weak, then don't fight so many enemies! If you want to fight, give him strength. The plug-in explanation is weak, and the explanation has an upper limit. But for a normal Vidyadhara, who has not been targeted, develop slowly and step by step for a while, and then talk about it. The daily writing is quite good, let's do a little combination of solving crimes. Everyday, it's pretty good. Now it's too urgent, the main plot is too urgent, and the development is slow. At least the people who read it won't withdraw half of it. No one will believe that your writing is good, and only some people will read it.) (I'm feeling aggrieved. I've been in a bad mood for the past few days. Now I need to exercise. It's all based on personal opinions (largely personal opinion, supplemented by objectivity). Watch it appropriately, feel calm, and be at peace when you're broken. It's worthy of me.) To sum up, it is a little frustrating. The protagonist is too forced to participate (too eager, one thing after another), and the difference between his strength and the events he participates in is too big.

To be honest, I personally feel that Samsung is about the same. There are many flaws in it, but after all, it is my own book. There is no shame in being a newbie. Reviews will be updated regardless of whether they are good or bad. Those who have already added updates will like them in the comments.

The writing is okay, but I always feel like reading some cool articles from that time. [Thinking] By the way, who is the heroine?

So far it's okay, there's nothing wrong with it overall, that is, the timeline is a bit messy, which may dissuade some people. The current plot mainly revolves around the Xianzhou Space Station and the Space Pirate Headquarters. The second creation should have some plots created by itself. I looked at the introduction. I hope there are not too many female protagonists. I should develop Jackdaw Snow Clothes or Fu Xuan first. All in all, it is a good book. The word count is a bit short at the moment. I hope the quality will not decline in the future. There will be no eunuchs and a very far-fetched ending. There are also some shortcomings. For example, the combat power rises too fast. Logically speaking, it should rise little by little. It was good in the past. I found a broken page and could rise a little. Now, in the latest broken page, the combat power has increased so fast that I can tear apart the spaceship with my hands. The protagonist is okay. In my opinion, it is similar to most protagonists. It suits my appetite for reading novels. Finally, I hope the author can write better in the next book.

How can I put it, it just looks weird. Thanks to this being written from a parallel universe, it still feels weird. Including the Happy Star God, he cannot go to other worlds and soak in himself. He is limited to that universe. Although he can climb the tree, it should not be similar to the system set by the Mi family. The tree that completely controls all the worlds is at best similar to the world tree of Genshin Impact.

It's very good, but it feels a bit weird and the plot is a bit more everyday. I hope Bai Chen can arrange more fighting scenes when his combat power increases. If it doesn't work, I can give you some candies. Please, please [blowing kiss]

Come on, the author is great

Well... The author writes very well, I hope he won't stop updating.

Very well written, good luck to the author