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It's so well written, this is really yandere. The author maintains that women are strong and men are weak, otherwise the effect will be lost [laughter][laughter]

It's so beautiful, but I hope that Junior Sister is still alive and has a happy ending. I hope I can be with Junior Sister. I don't think the others are as good as Junior Sister.

It looks good, but is this a single female protagonist? I always feel that it is a bit uncomfortable to have a harem with this kind of yandere novel. Personally, I prefer a single female protagonist, and I prefer Huajian Shang. The emotional lines of other girls are not as rich as Huajian Tang, and I feel that they are not as good-looking as Huajian Shang, so if it is a single female protagonist, I would prefer Huajian Shang

The heroine Hanajian is pregnant again, so this... [Laughs evilly] Doesn't the relationship directly make the article interesting [cool]

It's great. I've just read the latest one. I hope the author can update the next heroine as soon as possible. Actually, there's no need to describe too many other irrelevant things. Everyone is here to see the yandere.

The author hopes you can come out. We are waiting for a perfect ending. My condolences after my grandfather passed away. People will grow old. I have experienced this kind of pain. I was only a few years old when my grandfather passed away. I understood everything at that time. Hey, my condolences.

Why is it a 7.7 Rating out of five stars? I almost missed this yandere sweet novel. Is it to protect low scores? I've only seen chapter 38 so far, which is pretty good. The rest of it is too short, so I don't think it's interesting to save it first.

Kyoye Beixuan and Huajian Shang CP

Not bad? So who is the heroine? Just don't tell me it's Qing Shui.

Not bad. There is nothing poisonous about the article. Maybe the author wanted to write the book in a logical and flavorful way, but it always felt like he was a bit deliberately trying to portray the protagonist and some supporting characters. What I want to say is that the contrast in the back is too big and it is easy to lose control of it, resulting in a bad ending. I found that not many people read this type of book. After all, the plot is somewhat "popular" and there are countless books of the same type. But there are also advantages. The author will take care of the readers' feelings, and the language of the whole book is fluent. However, for an author, there is no perfect attendance award for breaking updates, so you don't want to be without perfect attendance as an author [laughs evilly]. Back to the topic, I still suggest that the author write less hydrology so that our young readers can see better articles. Small suggestions and complaints (of no use) I hope Flowers in the Mist (the author) will get better and better [smile] Not bad If the system is useless, don't write it. It's a bit embarrassing [smile]

The author please hurry up. 2 Pictures a day is not enough

Madam: Seeing the words is like seeing the face. When the wife read this letter, she must have understood everything that the husband had to do. The husband wanted to save a girl who had lost her original intention and lead her back to the right path. Seventeen years have passed by in a hurry, and every memory left by the time is deeply imprinted in my mind. There is not a day when my husband misses you, and there is not a day when I don't love you. But I also want you to understand that my love is different from your love. I want you to understand what love is. Maybe you can only learn to cherish after losing, but there is no way back in life. Loving someone has a price, and not every price can be repaid. You love me, but the price I paid is something I cannot repay. Therefore, my husband chooses to bear all the costs myself. Madam, this may be the last time my husband loves you. Hope to cherish it. I love you Ye Beixuan I posted it in a comment, but I can't find it. Fortunately, there was a written record at the time.

As long as there are a few keywords such as the yandere Shura harem, I will be satisfied [Thinking] I'm really confused, why no one reads such a great novel [crying] The author is also very slow in updating, always updating at night

However, I like this book very much. It is so in line with my taste. Mainly [Adoration] [Adoration], but it is still too short. The logic could be better. Some places actually look incoherent.

It's really good-looking, and the writing makes me feel at ease [smile][smile][send my heart][send my heart][adoration][adoration]

It is an okay book, and the first fifty chapters deserve five stars. The emotional drama between Huajian Chang and the male protagonist is well controlled. Huajian Chang's yandere attributes and possessiveness are also described delicately. Looking at the whole text, the character description of Huajian Chang is also good. The yandere does not fall in love because of the protagonist's weakness, but has his own ideas to possess the protagonist. This is something that many yandere novels do not have, so this character is very good. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. The chapter after the male protagonist left the Sun and Moon God Sect was not very satisfying, it was very bland, and there was no desire to continue reading (if it weren't for Huajian Shang, he might have given up at that time), and then the character of Yuezhu was too unnatural, and the plot of kidnapping a young lady and risking her life was also a bit toxic, although the author said I wanted to sublimate the relationship between the two, but looking back, there was actually no affectionate dialogue between the two. Instead, they did it as soon as they came back (what sublimation did this, I feel a little unfair to Qingshui. In the final analysis, this character is not strong enough, and even simple possession is a luxury), I shed tears for my family Qingshui [crying] Then there is the fight scene, which is quite boring to watch. The design of the conflict is a bit low-level (but many cool novels have this problem). Wang Er, another chamber of commerce, Ye, Lu, etc. Are all in conflict with the protagonist because of their greed for the women around him. Such conflicts are too clichéd and a bit boring to watch. But overall, it's a good yandere novel, and it's quite satisfying in terms of yandere. Other plots, transitions, and conflict designs need to be improved. (And strengthen my Qingshui! Now the male protagonist doesn't feel particularly in love with her, she is the weakest among the women, and there is a sister behind her who is suppressing her. How can I live [crying])

Ilil, this yandere novel is one of the better ones I've ever read.

As a foot addict, I like this book very much [Adoration]

I think the male protagonist was the Emperor of Heaven in his previous life, the others were all female, and the female protagonist was the witch [eating melon]

The frame is quite large and the characters are well described. However, the chapter about fighting in the ring is very long, and I keep updating it. I hope it can continue to be updated.

The plot concept is very clever, the overall style is slightly melancholy, and most of the core is filled with tragedy. The portrayal of the yandere is very successful, which is quite powerful.

Keeping this narrative rhythm, the author grasps the bottom line of high defense from the bottom of his heart, and writes the yandere well. The potential of this book is still great. The writing is very good and so is the harem. It is difficult to consolidate the single female main line into a few more impressive ones that have been formed so far. It is good to write it like this now.

Wow, it's rare to find a book I like, why is it blocked? I really want to read the follow-up [crying]

Don't tell me, this is really good. I'll fall asleep listening to it tomorrow night. I've watched it to the end today. Now I'm really looking forward to the update.

Update soon! ! ! ! It's so pretty and it suits my taste perfectly hahaha

Can there be more words? [I'm almost crying] There's not enough to read [Crying]

One of the more outstanding yandere novels

At present, my seven-year-old book has always been better. The character of the protagonist is more in line with my heart. I hope that the junior sister will not be killed in the end.

Well, it looks good, but I don't feel like I have too many orgasms.

To be honest, this is one of the few books I found wonderful this month