Can't You Just Like One Person?

The emotional line is indeed sweet, but so few people have read it, and I'm a bit afraid that the author may have cut it.

It's beautiful, brother, I beg you to keep writing, don't run away suddenly😭

After finishing the latest chapter, the author's writing is really good, but it would be better to start the main plot as early as possible. The memory chapter is a bit long. Advantages: harem, lightning protection, good heroine (such as Xia Zhimu Luoxi) Improvement: The expression needs to be optimized, and the character description can be improved, because too many characters are described as "slightly". Everyone likes to "smile slightly" or "nod slightly", which cannot distinguish different characters. For example, Luo Xi's character description is already very good (see Bai Huxi's chapters), but there is no place where "slightly" is used to describe it, which makes the reading smoother. (When you click on the table of contents in the text, there is a "Search Full Text" in the upper right corner)

The author should not be influenced by those bad reviews (their random negative reviews represent the entire book). Your book is what I am looking for. It has daily emotional interaction and good combat effectiveness. Each heroine has her own story, but when writing about that heroine, don't forget about the other heroines in this timeline. There needs to be some sense of presence.

If you look at the first five chapters, they are quite good, but the writing feels a bit too simple. If it becomes popular, it may be criticized. Moreover, the previous chapters gave us the feeling that the protagonist wants to rely on the heroines [laughs evilly]. As expected, this book should have multiple female protagonists. You can tell from the title of the book. If you read the 30th chapter of the review, cheers! [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Fantasy romance, what do you think, emmm, if you let me read urban romance, I can't stand it, because it is too close to reality. If it is a fantasy plot, I can accept it. The development of the story is basically the emotional line. I feel that emmm love games [face covering] can be regarded as a solution to the suffering of life. After all, reality is always unsatisfactory, there are too many bad things and too much pressure. Facing the powerlessness and fear of reality, I can only escape, but I also want to be a master of life. Come on, author, you must do the same!

The best of the best

Anyway, I quite like it, the heroine doesn't have any bad qualities. At the beginning, the relationship between several heroines and the protagonist is described, and then their experiences are described in detail in the form of memories. It is like taking reassurance and not having to guess what happened to this or that heroine in the end, so it has a good impression! ! ! There's nothing bloody or stomachache, so I'll give it five stars for that. Many female protagonists like to watch this kind of movies without any fancy torture. Then I hope the author can finish this book and give each character a good ending! ! !

The pure flow of novels in Tomato. I didn't expect to find such a novel without depression or thunder in Tomato.

When I saw the male protagonist thinking about how to deal with his relationship with Mo Youlian and Qianxue, I couldn't help but feel a little worried. It was well written, and the male protagonist was determined to follow his heart. I haven't finished reading it yet, but after reading about half of it, I couldn't help but give the author a good review [Love]

Why do we read novels? It's just to have fun, relax and not do a boring job.

The fact that the protagonist is a common man is a good thing. The protagonist is also a human being. There is no need to be too rigid. Just stick to the bottom line. The emotional line and writing style are remarkable, and the lightning protection is quite good. I haven't read the main story in detail yet, I'll make up the latest comments after reading it Finally, although it is estimated that not many people will read it now, I still hope that the author will not cut it

Good book about harem, excellent lightning protection, great wife

The plot is good, and the emotional line is really well written, but I feel that the only thing now is that the protagonist does not have a clear goal. The main reason is that the hole has not been filled, and it is not to be filled in now, but at least to give some clues. Originally, I thought that Luo Xi's appearance would fill a little hole, but it turned out to be a bigger hole [face covering], but Luo Xi should be used to fill the hole in the later period, just keep writing at this pace, come on!

Generally speaking, this kind of harem novel is guaranteed to be 3 stars if it is non-toxic and non-explosive. I give it five stars. The author is really talented to write such a book for the first time. It is better than many authors writing books for the nth time. Come on, come on.

In fact, I personally think it is very good-looking, but the long memories may make people read it (I don't think it's okay personally, but other netizens may not necessarily). All in all, it's very beautiful and highly recommended. The author would like to thank you for updating! [Like][Like][Like]

Manhun, a god among gods, one of Green Tomato's few god-level lightning protection works [Adoration]

Good luck, author

Tomato is one of the few fantasy harem masterpieces

An excellent harem novel that avoids lightning. It focuses on daily emotions, supplemented by cultivation. But unfortunately there were too many early memories, and I got stuck in the early memory chapters more than once. It may be frustrating for some people: the male protagonist and the female protagonist get along relatively softly, and they request the female protagonist more often. For example: the male protagonist lost his cultivation level in order to save Mo Youlian, lied to Qianxue and said they would go together, but ended up saving Mo Youlian alone. His eyes were full of pleading and self-blame, "Sister Qianxue, it's all my fault, just tolerate my willfulness this time, okay?"

It's very comfortable to watch. It's beautiful and I love watching it [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I'm from Tieba, support me bro🥰

Well written in my eyes

It's very well written, don't cut it.

Few exquisite products

I have read some books, and the author of this book has the strongest awareness of lightning protection.

Qcqs is already worthy of five stars

Please author, please write more, I can do anything🥵

Very well written, hope you stick with it.