Can't You Just Like One Person?

The emotional line is indeed sweet, but so few people have read it, and I'm a bit afraid that the author may have cut it.

After finishing the latest chapter, the author's writing is really good, but it would be better to start the main plot as early as possible. The memory chapter is a bit long. Advantages: harem, lightning protection, good heroine (such as Xia Zhimu Luoxi) Improvement: The expression needs to be optimized, and the character description can be improved, because too many characters are described as "slightly". Everyone likes to "smile slightly" or "nod slightly", which cannot distinguish different characters. For example, Luo Xi's character description is already very good (see Bai Huxi's chapters), but there is no place where "slightly" is used to describe it, which makes the reading smoother. (When you click on the table of contents in the text, there is a "Search Full Text" in the upper right corner)

It's beautiful, brother, I beg you to keep writing, don't run away suddenly😭

Fantasy romance, what do you think, emmm, if you let me read urban romance, I can't stand it, because it is too close to reality. If it is a fantasy plot, I can accept it. The development of the story is basically the emotional line. I feel that emmm love games 🤦 can be regarded as a solution to the suffering of life. After all, reality is always unsatisfactory, there are too many bad things and too much pressure. Facing the powerlessness and fear of reality, I can only escape, but I also want to be a master of life. Come on, author, you must do the same!

The author should not be influenced by those bad reviews (their random negative reviews represent the entire book). Your book is what I am looking for. It has daily emotional interaction and good combat effectiveness. Each heroine has her own story, but when writing about that heroine, don't forget about the other heroines in this timeline. There needs to be some sense of presence.

If you look at the first five chapters, they are quite good, but the writing feels a bit too simple. If it becomes popular, it may be criticized. Moreover, the previous chapters gave us the feeling that the protagonist wants to rely on the heroines [laughs evilly]. As expected, this book should have multiple female protagonists. You can tell from the title of the book. If you read the 30th chapter of the review, cheers! [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Anyway, I quite like it, the heroine doesn't have any bad qualities. At the beginning, the relationship between several heroines and the protagonist is described, and then their experiences are described in detail in the form of memories. It is like taking reassurance and not having to guess what happened to this or that heroine in the end, so it has a good impression!!! There's nothing bloody or stomachache, so I'll give it five stars for that. Many female protagonists like to watch this kind of movies without any fancy torture. Then I hope the author can finish this book and give each character a good ending!!!

The best of the best

The pure flow of novels in Tomato. I didn't expect to find such a novel without depression or thunder in Tomato.

When I saw the male protagonist thinking about how to deal with his relationship with Mo Youlian and Qianxue, I couldn't help but feel a little worried. It was well written, and the male protagonist was determined to follow his heart. I haven't finished reading it yet, but after reading about half of it, I couldn't help but give the author a good review ❤️