Hard Work and Talent Are Indispensable

It's very good. I suggest you add Naruto Uchiha xxxxx in parentheses after the name so that you can search for it. Tomato's only unsystematic fanfic, a novel that relies on your brain and has no poisonous points. It is recommended to organize the timeline so as not to conflict with the original work. The original animation Minato Heroes saved the beauty after Minato and Kushina graduated. The whirlpool had been destroyed before Kushina went to Konoha. Anyway, there are so many details, come on I advise you not to read it. The author's writing is terrible and full of poisonous points. Now that I have read it, I realize that it is garbage. The first time I read it, I thought it was good. However, as time went by, I realized that it was through the delicate description of the number of words. I started to become a lot more vicious. Facing the protagonist, the enemies were outwitted, merciful and reluctant to kill. In the latest chapter, the opponents were all Jonin, and they were even arrogant and ruthless. Only when I was about to cool down did I remember that I was an enemy and I had to do whatever it took, and what I had done before. It is normal to reduce the number of opponents at the beginning of the war and help relieve the pressure on teammates. When you meet the protagonist and find out that the genin is giving the opponent a hand, this kind of intelligence-destroying blow is actually interpreted as the arrogance of the jounin. It is understandable in the early stage of the ninja war. This is already a decisive battle. Such people have already gone to see Liu Dao.

It's very immersive. I read it in one go. It's the kind of thing I've always wanted to watch. Although I haven't watched Naruto for a long time, I still want to say come on, author✊[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] It's highly poisonous. It's been determined that it's not alive. It's probably been changed. I've been feeling very sick since I went to the bathhouse. I just wrote it just for the sake of writing it. You can write it plainly and it won't ruin your character at all.

It has a strong sense of immersion and is not a boring invincible novel. I hope that it can change the fate of more people in the future and make up for some of the regrets in Naruto. I hope the author will keep up the good work and never end it.

If I were to travel through Naruto and have a golden finger, I would be invincible. I only did two things, one was to make Kaguya and his son into pills and eat them, and two, to release the Ten-Tails and Infinite Tsukuyomi to make the ninja world into a fruit and eat it. Then wait for the Otsutsuki clan to come and refine them all into pills. Naruto is a twisted worldview that has no need to exist.

It fully deserves 5 stars. It is written with great care, has a sense of empathy, and can be read. It is a rare young novel.

It feels like you are writing, like you are reading, and we are listening, narration,

I would like to solemnly say that the author's thinking and logic are very clear. From the perspective of my many years of novel writing, what you write is the best among Naruto-type books. I hope you can continue to work hard. To all Taoists who are lucky enough to read my comments, I solemnly recommend this book. This author is really attentive. I hope everyone will support him. After all, there are too few high-quality online articles now.

I feel that there is nothing wrong with it, but the Sharingan looks like a fake. It is obvious that I am going to die several times. It is said that I cannot rely on the Sharingan, but it is really uncomfortable to watch. Hope to use it soon

Very good, more realistic! No cheating so far! So far, except for the random thoughts, everything else is remarkable. This book is still very interesting! Recommended to watch!

It's okay. The protagonist's growth was slow in the early stage. He relied on hard work and the Uchiha Sengoku training method. He became stronger in the war. The original work is analyzed from a different perspective. In the later stage, the protagonist becomes stronger and competes with the Hokage faction. It's more interesting to watch. After that, he gets married and starts a career, and relies on the ninjas of the same period. The story of the wartime bond that united the story, the establishment of the new security department, and the participation in Konoha politics as the acting Hokage was a great story. After that, the plot was mixed up next to the main character of Hokage while making small changes that did not deviate from the main line of the original work, which made up for some regrets, which was good. The highlight in the middle is the description of being persecuted at the root, the love story is relatively sloppy, and the psychological changes are a little abrupt. If you don't mind the main plot not changing much, you can watch it. OK

It's pretty good and real, not the invincible kind. This is the situation of ordinary (actually not that ordinary) ninjas in the general context.

In Naruto-type books, it is considered very good. There is no system and it all depends on your own efforts. In addition, the protagonist's talent is not as incredible as that of the protagonists in other books. The protagonist and other characters' IQs are also online, and there is no so-called harem.

After reading Chapter 50, I discovered that there was no military merit in the battle. . . In Chapter 61, the combat power has collapsed. No wonder other book friends will say that the latter part is too watery. If the combat power has collapsed, it will be watery.

Thanks to the author. My family is too poor and I have never watched Naruto. It really bothers the author to take the trouble to retell the main plot of Naruto. [You taste carefully][You taste carefully][You taste carefully]

The author's writing style is quite good It takes a long time to write, I have a lot of experience, the quality is very good, you can read it for a long time The author's writing of Naruto is very real, especially when writing about the war, the cruelty of the war is written to the fullest. Especially when fighting, the fighting in various positions is very well written, which is difficult for other authors to have. The writing is very real and careful, and various daily life before and after the war, The combat power is written very rigorously and is completely linked to all the details of life.

Md, it's so good. It's a general ninja novel that I want to read. I thought that after a certain book was discontinued, it wouldn't be so to my liking, but I saw this book, and it's really to my liking.

Just two words, it's good-looking, it's in line with the original setting, and it's also innovative. The story feels very smooth as it develops, without any abruptness. I feel it is comparable to "Tsensei Eye" and "Starting with the Defection of Konoha".

It's quite good-looking. Although it's a little wordy at times, it's really good-looking. There's no brainless cheating. The protagonist is careful and cautious. The fighting descriptions are OK. The female characters I encounter are not overrated. Then, just looking at the title and cover, I really didn't expect this to be a Naruto fanfic. When will it become more distinctive?

Personally, I think it's quite good. Although sometimes it seems quite depressing, it is indeed a good book. The author also has his own views and logic on Naruto. The early writing was very good, but when the protagonist started looking for a girlfriend, he stopped working and started to let go! So the author wants to express that "there is no woman in my heart, so I draw my sword to the God of Nature"!

, Happy New Year, I hope the author will work hard [smile] I hope the author will work harder to add some interactions between Izumi Uchiha and the protagonist. When will they be able to achieve enlightenment? [Smile]

The ending is a bit average, the early stage is good, but it is also logical to think about it. In the world of Naruto, blood is king. The protagonist is an Uchiha. Without technology, the peak is Uchiha Madara. The four stations really don't play a role. Especially after Nazuo grows up, the protagonist develops to surpass Itachi but not as good as Ben. I think this setting is very good.

It's a very good book, but the fandom will always have the idea of ​​realizing the dream to make up for the regrets. It's true to protect yourself, but sometimes the regrets that can be made up for are just a little bit of hard work, or you can just mention it. Following the plot step by step without paying attention may be the reason why this book does not get a score of nine!

Not bad, this kind of pleasure is watching the protagonist survive at the bottom. Alas, I used to write well, but now my writing is worse. I keep telling myself that the author will change and write well again, but what I always get is disappointment and regret. I am deceiving myself and others. After all, I am wrong.

Among Naruto fans, I would like to call this book a sacred book and it is worth recommending. Firstly, the combat power is not broken (if you want to watch the Invincible style, don't fall into the trap). Secondly, the characters are consistent with the original work. Thirdly, the plot is logical and exciting. The last flaw is that the protagonist has traveled through the past without leaving any points to change the world (such as unification, reform, technology, creation of new techniques, etc.)

War is always cruel, the author is so truthful

It feels like the protagonist is in danger most of the time, but he doesn't want to stay away from the danger. He wants to solve the danger and then move on to the next danger. He completely regards himself as the protagonist, the immortal kind. But it's still watchable, generally good, but it feels a bit masochistic. I don't know why, maybe it's my misunderstanding! I'll take a look again! [Cover face][cover face]

Very reasonable. I want to see Long Aotian go out and turn left.

It's okay, it's pretty well written, and it describes Naruto from another perspective. After all, it can be said that the original work that directly writes about World War II and World War II is very powerful, and the protagonist's start is not smooth sailing. He will fail and grow. It is very close to reality, which is very good. Much better than those mindless cheats. It's just that the audience is too small. Come on!

May I ask: What is the role of the protagonist in this book? Answer: Let me recall the plot of Naruto again. The early stage was a little boring, but it was okay. The later stage was to narrate the plot of Shippuden from the perspective of the audience. Although a few supporting characters were saved, it had no impact on the plot.

This is for the front, the front is great It just feels like it's completely rotten.