Dragon Ball*****

It is very comfortable to read. As a Saiyan-themed battle novel, the fighting is very exciting. It is a good fusion of personal style and Dragon Ball comics. Now the novel is writing about the protagonist finding Weiss and the two brothers who have not become the God of Destruction. It also lays a place that may be a foreshadowing. The existence of absolute power that travels through time and space appears. I hope the author can grasp the following plot. From here on, it should be a test of the author's own script skills and the ability to control the Dragon Ball plot. Come on! This book is a great Dragon Ball novel, at least it is still very good so far!

The plot of the story is novel. The plot is before Beerus becomes the God of Destruction. This period should be 18 universes. I just don't know if the author will write the reasons and plots of the six erased universes. I don't know if the subsequent plot will be related to the Dragon Ball period, that is, the plot one billion years later. The God of Destruction is probably not the protagonist's goal. After all, he is linked to the Kaio God. Don't talk about the Archpriest of Angels. It is estimated that the combat power is as good as that of the Archpriest. You can create an unfettered God of Destruction for the protagonist, the God of Destruction or the God of Space-Time Destruction. You can arrange a wave of time-travelers with systems to cause trouble during the Dragon Ball period. After all, the system is not a good thing, and then the protagonist destroys the system, allowing the time-travelers to seek their own blessings. I hope the author can stick to it [laughing evilly]

It's different from the Dragon Ball fan fiction I read before. This is a direct trip back to the past. The author's ideas are very unique.

I give it four stars. It's actually pretty good... Much better than most other fandoms. It's full of novelty and has no obvious pitfalls or poisonous points. At least a lot of fandoms can't do these two things. I'm quite picky about reading, and it's good that I can finish reading it completely. The remaining 1 star is to encourage the author to keep up the good work... The most important thing is that the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, and they will die on the way to the extra update!

The writing is okay, but I hope not to write too many emotional scenes. Too many people won't write it and it will be disgusting🤮 After reading Dragon Ball novels for so many years, this one is very comfortable to read. Unlike other Dragon Ball novels, my fucking passionate anime novel was written in such a romantic and harem style that I really shrank my cerebellum.

It's okay, keep it up.

It's so beautiful to recommend. All in all, it's very beautiful. I'd give it a five-star rating. The only disadvantage is that there are too few. I can't update 10 chapters every day. It's annoying. I update two chapters every day and I'll finish it in a while. When can I fight Yamosi? Looking forward to it.

Come on, it's not enough.

Please update me quickly. One chapter a day, with a guaranteed minimum word count of one million, and there is no upper limit. [Anger]

Not bad, a masterpiece of Dragon Ball

It's okay, not bad. It's great to have a plot like that. You don't want a childhood sweetheart, you want such a piece of trash.

Good book Absolutely good book

Very good, but the author disappeared

Sun Wukong and Vegeta were directly weakened. I hope the author can strengthen the combat power of these two people. After all, Sun Wukong is the protagonist in the original work. Why we need to create a sakaki is beyond comprehension. Moreover, this conspiracy theory is too strong and does not have the flavor of a pure Saiyan. I'm very unhappy with this.

The best among Dragon Ball novels

It's readable, the writing is mediocre, but you can keep reading, and Dragon Ball fans are rare.

The plot has a clear logic and there are not many female protagonists. If you like passionate people, you can come here and read it. As a senior Dragon Ball fan, this book can be called the best. Unlike other books, the plot is weak. This book is written with a neutral attitude. There is no tragic beginning and it is not a good book. But it has the idea that the more you read, the more you want to continue reading.

Well written, amazing

Come on, come on, come on Not enough at all. Not enough at all.

Different Dragon Balls are great

There are very few people writing about this kind of subject, and even fewer can write well. I hope the author will work hard.

It's not enough. The subject matter is really good. Come on [thinking]

I haven't seen such a good Dragon Ball fanfic in a long time

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Very good, very beautiful

It looks good, and I feel like the main character is humane.

Five stars for encouragement

It's very enjoyable to watch, very innovative

Good, good, good, good

Very good, very beautiful