Sihe************

If it weren't always said that there is no blood relationship, this would be a good book, and it's not a novel about clothing, so why is there no blood relationship?

The names of He Yuzhu and He Yupeng are indistinguishable, and modern words pop up from time to time. There is also a system that seems to be a system for doing good things. It is not suitable for a task. It is better to choose the system, to help or not to help. Some of the contents seem inconsistent.

Alas, no, your novel is not right. Xu Damao has finished cleaning the toilet. The next one is school. Why can't the physical education exam be eliminated?

Disgusting indeed.

It looks disgusting,

Take a look without eyes!

Didn't even see it! It's talking about the system of doing good deeds, and it's easy to get points! A piece of toilet paper costs a thousand! Do you only do good deeds every day? Not to mention how many points you get by doing one thing! How come there are so many things for you to do! And that system of yours, under the guise of doing good things, writes about selecting the system!

I didn't finish the fourth chapter, so I was persuaded to quit… At the beginning, acupuncture was mentioned to treat heart disease. If the heart is missing a valve or is deformed, can acupuncture also cure it? Next came the Nascent Soul Pill... Siheyuan can cultivate immortality! Since I'm writing about a courtyard house, I won't describe the lack of food and clothing, the hardships of life in this era, and why I want to cultivate immortality... Finally, in the fourth chapter... Lou Xiao'e entrusted the gold and silver jewelry to the protagonist for safekeeping when we met her for the first time! Is this simple? Is this ignorance? No! This is a big sand sculpture. Author, please go back and give me your house book, ID card, etc., And I will keep them for you, okay? I only read four chapters and didn't read the rest. Hmm... Dear readers who have seen it, please watch it with caution and see you later.

It just looks a little bit like that and I just can't see it. Besides, Jia and Zhang are not that vicious towards Qin. If they beat and cursed each other every day like in the book, would Qin stay in Jia's house all the time? Goodbye long ago.

What the hell are they? I just ran into Baicai Ditch after writing them [vomit]

Not bad😊[laugh][laugh]

I can't stand it anymore. What the hell is written here.

Damn you wasting my time, I should have abandoned the book earlier! There are too many deviations in the writing, and the range is too large. It is not even a book.

From Chapter 57, Xu Damao was punished to clean the toilet, and from Chapter 58, it was no longer a story of love in the courtyard, but a story that traveled back and forth between modern times and the Ming Dynasty. I also want to see how the protagonist tortures the animals in the courtyard.

The first 57 chapters are fine, but from chapter 58 I don't know what to do.

What's wrong with authors nowadays? Good Siheyuan novels usually write some messy stuff after about 60 chapters. If there's nothing to write, they go home and wash themselves off.

What did you write after chapter 58?

Bad review, the front is fine, but the back is completely unreadable

321 Basket [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Your building is too crooked

Rubbish. . . . .

Chapter 3: As a soldier, I caught the trafficker who abducted women and released him unconditionally! Is there something wrong with my outlook on life?

It's really boring. He always emphasizes that it has nothing to do with the He family and does not accept the cause and effect. He has to pay money from the system before taking action. At the beginning, he will forcefully separate the family and go to the courtyard.

The recovery pill has come out. What do you think? Aren't you afraid of being sliced ​​into pieces? It is unreasonable to save heart disease at the beginning, but it is completely cured. Why, you can learn the magic of immortality and need to recombine the era. This is not the world of immortality.

Why is the second half different?

Even one star is too much to write properly. If you don't want to write about it, don't write about it. Please ask the platform to remove it from the shelves.

A negative review, it's okay at first, but in the end I don't know what it's about? The author can return to your mother's womb and be raised before being born again.

What's that thing behind? I'm looking at the stage.

The bull's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong. You will know where you are going when you see it.

It's all off topic. You haven't finished writing Siheyuan yet and you're writing about another world? What a mess?