I Came Home from Get Off Work and Picked up a Treasure Girl

The previous article is good, very sweet, and the whole journey is very fast. After my girlfriend came out, the viewing experience dropped, but it is still watchable. I will give it five stars first. If the heroine does not return, I will pay in installments. The male and female protagonists separated for half a month and finally got back together. Is this the end? Inexplicably, there is obviously a lot more to write about Laughing to death. This is the first time I have read a novel. I am stuck waiting for updates every day. How do you rate the ending? High emotional intelligence, open ending, low emotional intelligence, bad ending Forget it, seeing as what I wrote in front is pretty good, I'll give it a three-star rating [upvote] One more thing, if the author really can't write anymore, I hope he can make an extra chapter or something to explain the follow-up (I really hope you are deceiving the comment [I'm about to cry])

It's well written, please give me some advice. There is no need to make the characters look like characters, you have to add some hateful villains. There is no need to intensify the identity conflict later on. According to the current plot development style, a plain and warm progressive style is more suitable. To be honest, there are no more novels about bitterness and revenge on the market, except for this one. To put it simply, a playboy does not have to be a scumbag, and wealthy parents and family members do not have to be old-fashioned people who focus on family business and ignore the opinions of their children. Bringing more into the mentality of ordinary people, so as to have a more immersive feeling

It's the first time I read a sweet novel. I read it all night without realizing it, but I didn't know what to say. I had to read the last chapter this morning, and I am still full of anticipation. I really want to know how the two develop after Qin Yuyou returns to the wealthy family. I hope the follow-up will be better [Like]

For now, this work is a very good work for all reasons. Both in terms of character creation and plot, it is excellent. Although I read books very quickly, it has been 11 years since 2012. As for the concept of love, I think this kind of book is much better than the previous books of so-and-so, even if some people say Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. But most of them may have never truly loved someone and don't understand the feeling. But in order to ensure that I don't get stabbed and that I have a consistent pattern of reading Pomodoro books, I'll just read this book here. Latest chapter + five stars. I hope the author will get better and better. There is also the person who has been chasing for five years. In fact, no one is wrong, but some people never agree because they are afraid of being hurt. Women's feelings are the most difficult to understand.

Real love and sweetness are like this, plain and light, just like water, which can trickle down and make huge waves. After reading the Tomato love story for so long, this is the first time I encountered a sweetness that meets my expectations. I am very grateful to the author for letting me see such a beautiful love. Come on.

This novel is quite interesting, and the subject matter is novel but not unfamiliar at the same time. After reading too many terrible novels, it is really comfortable to read this kind of pure love story, with three chapters updated every day. Not enough! Not enough to watch at all! [Anger]

Yes, it is a very good novel. Although it has some minor flaws, it is already very good, including Fireflies on the Mountain and Bus, which gave me a very novel feeling after reading it. Now, the male protagonist wakes up, the second female protagonist chases after him, and the first female protagonist is sweet. A small suggestion to the author: the second female lead can support the first female lead in her scenes, but the second female lead's scenes should be less. After all, the daughter is the second female lead who attracts hatred. Watching it too much will have an impact on the viewer's feelings. I hope the author can write more novel things.

From the beginning to the latest chapter, the corner of my mouth has never dropped. The male protagonist has very upright views and is my ideal type. I look forward to the next plot and hope there will be a good ending. Finally, I wish lovers will get married! ! ! ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶ з

I clicked in after seeing the title and thinking of Sayu. The story line suits my own taste, so I think it's pretty good.

It's pretty good. I hope it gives Yue a good ending. Although she is really cool, she always realized that she was too arrogant to like the male protagonist [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! It was really good before, but now the plot starts to drag. There is no need to lengthen the pace of the sweet story.

I've read a lot of books, and there are all kinds of them. This is the only one I can comment on. I won't say whether it's good or not. At least I found it very relaxing after reading it. Maybe this is the meaning of reading a book. Maybe it's the theme of love that makes people feel relaxed.

It's very good. I also like the heroine very much. It feels very sweet. But the number of chapters is too few now. But if it continues like this, it will only be 100 to 300 chapters. If it can't reach 9.0, It will definitely be no problem. It will be rated 8.5 Or above. Why is it only 8.3?

I have read many books of this type, and I ask myself that this is the best one I have ever read. Whether it is the creation of characters or the description of emotions, it always gives people a delicate feeling. The author's writing style is also very comfortable to read and can be called excellent for this type of book. The most commendable thing among them is the author's correct view of love. It is undeniable that many of today's husband-chasing and harem articles can bring us spiritual pleasure, but they will also gradually affect our three views. Therefore, what is lacking in today's online literature world is this kind of works with correct values. This has nothing to do with ideology, but must exist in society. (It's a bit biased. In fact, these are just to praise the author. I have no intention to do so. I accept all criticisms from my personal point of view.) As for the content of this work, I don't think there is any need to force it. This book is actually very good in taking the route of sweet writing. Many scenes described by the author can't help but make me, a single who was pregnant with a solo, weave a beautiful scene in my heart on a starry night. I hope the author will keep up the good work and try to update it so that it doesn't end badly. (I really want to see this beautiful love come to a perfect end)

It's quite beautiful. It reminds me of a passage in "Camel Xiangzi": "There are not many truths in this world. A woman's blush is better than a long dialogue." But then I got Rouge, and I couldn't tell whether it was true love or falsehood. After reading it, I felt like I was in love, which gave me, a frigid person, a little warmth. Thank you

The plot is exciting and I can't stop watching it. But I'm not educated and can only say it's good to watch. I highly recommend it.

It's so damn good to watch, I want to fall in love every time I watch it. I really recommend it. Even though the ending is not very satisfying, it's also a satisfactory ending. The ending is too dull. It would be better if the author can do some extra chapters. I highly recommend it.

The writing is very good, and there are not so many poisonous points. I don't know if there will be a lot of bloody plots in the heroine's family in the future, but for now, the writing is still relatively good, and it is very comfortable to watch. The author updates it more than a day, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to be as lazy as you.

It is a very interesting novel. Although it is a sweet novel, it is different from most sweet novels. It is sweet but not greasy, and just right. The portrayal of emotions is also very delicate. Also, you must not cause trouble when the heroine comes home. [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out]

I would like to call you the strongest author. Whether it is the character description or the plot, it is very, very, very clear. It can compete with my favorite God of Wealth. You can be very powerful. Come on, come on, come on. It is really good. This book has brought me back to my original intention of reading novels. I really, really like it (๑> <๑)

The work is well written. At the beginning, it felt like it would be a relatively traditional story, but later on, you can still find many differences. The overall narrative is also very coherent, the article is not long, and it is very interesting to read. The whole process is very complete and vivid, and the emotions are well written step by step. Sweet is indeed very sweet, and it also deliberately downplays many conflicts, making the whole article more harmonious. Although there are some small flaws in the writing in a few places, it is normal and there is no perfect work. I was looking forward to the rest of the story, but in the end it ended directly, which was indeed a bit sudden. But it's just right for the story to stop here. From another perspective, it's enough, not too long, not too short, just right... It makes people yearn for a relationship. When I read it, it was quite... I thought of some things and felt sad from time to time... In short, it is worth recommending!

From the beginning to the end, from my personal point of view, the plot is very good, some details are good, and the ending is OK, but as a layman, I hope that the author will continue writing and use some space to write about some plots after they met, some life plots after that, and Qin Tianxiong's gradual change (that is, Qin Tianxiong agreed to be together but did not show it, I don't know how to say it specifically), etc., As for Shen Lang's recognition, it will be fine. Also, after each other confirms that they like each other, the ambiguity is a bit monotonous. Most of them involve kissing and sleeping on the same bed, hugging each other, etc. You can add some interactive actions such as flicking the forehead, pinching the face, etc.

Ahem, the opening topic is a sweet pet article. Although the first encounter was a bit accidental, in reality, the girls I met did not go home with me stupidly. No, no, no, no, ahem, in short, it has a high sugar content, sweet teeth, correct and true writing. A boy and a girl encountered something unclear when they were in love. Although they have not confirmed their relationship, but, just read it, any article can be happy. As I continued reading, I felt unhappy and dissatisfied with the article. It was very similar to a book I read before. That book was one of the few time travel stories about sweet pets that I have read. I liked it very much. This book is very similar. The character development is very slow, but detailed and not greasy. I finally want to say that it is very interesting. I may not be qualified to comment because I have never even written a book. From the perspective of a reader, it is very popular with me [laughs] It's a very good book, but can you make up for the ending? I've read that there is no such thing as a bad ending. You just don't want the ending. The tail is cut off before it grows. If you want to leave room for the audience's imagination, leave it too big. It's a good ending. The ending is about getting married and having a baby, which is what the audience wants to see. The bad ending is naturally the B ending, which the audience doesn't want to see. Writing this kind of ending also depends on your skills. Choose one of the two. The second one will get you scolded at most. This is the first time I've seen someone like you who doesn't write an ending.

I feel that many things that happen between the protagonists are very romantic. For example, Yu You and A Lang first drew comics together, but later because of the affairs of Yu You's family, only A Lang did the drawing. The author compared the comics to the children they love. It is also very clever. A Lang will not give up on this child just because Yu You is not around for the time being. The child will not disappear until their love ends. The love between the two originated from fate, just as Yu You can see the paintings between them when A Lang is painting alone. Although the two are temporarily separated in space, their souls will always be involved in this trace of fate and will never be separated. The kiss that runs through the article also makes me feel so sweet. Of course, there are also the little strawberries, which all make me feel so sweet. The author is great! The story is wonderful! Update soon

It's quite sweet. Although it's unfinished, I can only accept it. After all, I won't force others to continue writing. The scene where the two people are tired of each other is very well written. I like it very much and will probably read it again in the future. Maybe many things are not perfect, and the end of this book is also unfinished. But as a high school student, this may be a rare opportunity to read a novel until midnight on vacation. I read it for two days in a row. Although the result of the novel was not very satisfying, it was very sweet when I finished it. I felt like I was falling out of love. Same, because the ending really makes people... I still feel unsatisfied, but I still thank the author. I have eaten a lot of sweets from the male and female protagonists in the past two days, but unfortunately, in the end, I did not see the male protagonist engaging in sexual intercourse [laughing evilly]. I hope this book can be continued one day. What I am talking about is the continuation written by the author himself, not written by others [face covering], so be it. This is the experience of the predecessors. I hope newcomers will read it carefully and don't see the ending like me. I feel like something is missing and become lost for half an hour [crying]

Personally, I think this book is an excellent one among the online novels I have read. This one does not have very unrealistic things such as time travel and systems. The male protagonists Shen Lang, Shen Lang, and Zhang Yue are like reality. Nowadays, boys cannot chase girls, so boys take the initiative, while girls are arrogant and refuse to lose face, which ultimately leads to "tragedy". The life of Shen Lang and Qin Yuyou is more like an ideal couple's life. The male protagonist and the female protagonist met by chance, and then they got along from strangers to the beginning, and their emotions developed and they fell in love. The female protagonist and the male protagonist are destined not to be together in reality, but in the world of the novel, it can be realized. Regardless of the family background gap and the obstruction from the outside world, the male protagonist and the female protagonist cannot meet and contact each other in the second half, but their hearts have been together for a long time, and they have become married at this moment.

Very good plot, Very good description, Very good person, Very good idea, Finally, Very good work! Wish you a prosperous journey🌹

Give me a five-star support first Overall, it's good. It has a bit of a romantic comedy feel. Both the male and female protagonists are a bit arrogant. Although they haven't established a relationship now, it's almost the same. However, there are some doubts. As the eldest lady, Qin Yuyou will definitely not delay the search for so long if the group is serious about it. There are still two people who have not established a relationship but are so ambiguous, okay? I hope the author can fill in the holes Come on, come on [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]

Ordinary, this is not the beginning of another kind of life. Everything involves the premise of ability. The writing is good, and I guess there is a knife behind it.

Facts can be YY, and the author who understands YY is not only a good writer, but also a good driver. He can drive a good car and a good luxury car. He can pull naturally without overturning at speeds of life and death. He deserves five-star praise! He is suspected of abusing singles! Hope you keep working hard and don't finish!