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Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Wuchen waited for Nalan Yuntang for 10 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Yang Guo waited for Xiao Longnu for 16 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue has waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, White Snake has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and Huo Ling'er has waited for Huang for hundreds of thousands of years. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day of a certain year, a man was lying weakly on the bed. His face was pale, but there was a slight smile on the corner of his mouth. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, tears glistened at the corners of his eyes, and he murmured in a hoarse voice: "Don't forget to update. ..." Author, the pace is a bit slow, you can change it to a faster pace! Su Ming should be able to cross the starry sky, and Su Nan is looking for his twin sister, and the day organization... The author cannot "a hammer in the east and a stick in the west" This is a very bad habit [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]! We can also change the parts of Shi Qingxuan and Wang Qing, which are a bit watery. But overall, this is pretty good for a new author! After all, you took the first step [cool][cool][cool]

It's okay, there's a cuteness between the lines, I suspect the author is a lolicon,,,, the plot content is okay, but too cliche,,, it's the reincarnation of a strong man,,,

What I want to say is, don't write in the first person

The author is really skilled at switching between first person and third person

Not bad, not bad, very nice, The young Su Ming alone can give you five stars [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The settings are pretty good, but the level needs to be improved.