[Two male leads] [Straightforward pursuit] [Shou protagonist] [One-on-one, both virgins] [Sweet, flirtatious, and doting] Just got a rating, so it'll slowly go up. Don't worry, enjoy!
On the very first day after transforming into human form, he landed a stable government job.
As the saying goes, the endgame of life is passing the civil service exam. He became human on day one and already had it made!
But weren't I supposed to get the male lead's story? Which male lead has it this rough? Where's my boss? I want to file a complaint!
King of the Underworld: “Are you calling me?”
Shu Yue: “You must have misheard. I didn't say anything~”
Some time later
Shu Yue: “You've got to be kidding me! Why are you in every world? Is the King of the Underworld really that free? Does my boss have to review my KPIs?”
“I'm not human, but you're a real dog!”
One: A poor little soul in the 1970s ✓
Two: The movie star whose script was stolen ✓
Three: The protagonist forced to become a villain ✓
Four: A ray of sunshine in the apocalypse ✓
Five: The little Heavenly Master offers you full dragon service ✓
Six: Uh, I'm the whole village's hope ✓
Seven: The CEO pursued by someone who transmigrated into his world ✓
Eight: Everybody sit down. It's my turn to carry the team ✓
Nine: Night and day…
Ten: Plants have mutated in this apocalyptic disaster…
Eleven: A dating show? I've already got a fixed ship…
Twelve: ABO: Who wants to be an omega? I'm the one who's super alpha, okay…
Thirteen: When the world covers your ears…
Fourteen: Who rides in a horse-drawn carriage to get around the cultivation world…
Fifteen: Past and present lives…
(The worlds I haven't written yet aren't set in stone and may change at any time, but the outline is ready, so go ahead and enjoy!)
How to put it, 1. I feel that the emotional progress is a bit fast. You can lay out the plot first, and then the emotional line can be used as a seasoning. This may improve the comfort of reading. 2. There will be some wrong sentence question types in the Chinese paper. I hope you can pay more attention to them. Although sometimes you will really miss them or make other mistakes (anyway, you just don't find those basic errors), but there are still readers. We will remind you, so don't forget to correct them when the time comes. 3. The writing style is still good, but I feel that the wording in some places is not so appropriate, and I need to pay more attention to it. 4. The above are some personal opinions and some suggestions (I still hope that the story will be mainly based on the plot, so that the article will appear fuller. If necessary, some ups and downs of the plot can be included to improve the readability. However, if you want to write a sweet article or an article that supplements sugar, I still support it, but the intensity must be controlled, otherwise it may be boring and dry when reading) Finally, I wish that the articles written by Da Da will get better and better and be seen and liked by more and more people.
Wish you the best of luck in advance! ! ! Shu Yue is a gentle and cute girl! ! !
😢 😢 It's so sad. It was taken off the shelves before I even finished reading it. 😢😢😢
Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?
It's good-looking. The relationship is like love at first sight. It's fast and sweet. It accounts for more in the early stage and less in the later stage. The main thing is the plot, and the plot is great. There are no big logical problems. It's very smooth and exciting. The writing is also improving, so please work hard ^0^~ These are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it
Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good (*/ω*)
It looks great, but I can't send gifts. This phone has a strange problem. Everything else is connected to the network. But the network is unstable when I send gifts. It pisses me off. 👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's super, super good-looking, really really good-looking, ahhhhh, I love this style so much 🥰[Admiration][Admiration]
[Learned] Look good, look good, look good, say important things three times. In every world, the two of them are sweet, there is no misunderstanding, and they love each other.
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