[Double male protagonist] [Straight ball] [Master and recipient] [1v1 double clean] [Sweet flirting] The score has just been released, and the score will gradually increase, so feel free to eat
On the first day of transformation, I wish I had an iron rice bowl.
As the saying goes, the end of the world lies in passing the public examination. On the first day of life, life is complete!
It's just that I agreed to take the male protagonist's script. Whose male protagonist is so miserable? Where is the boss? I want to complain!
Hades: "Are you calling me?"
Shu Yue: "You heard wrong, I didn't say anything~"
After a while——
Shu Yue: "Are you mistaken? Why is it that you are in every world? Is Pluto so free? Do my KPIs need to be assessed by the boss?"
"I'm not a human, but you're a real dog!"
1: Poor little guy in the 1970s ✓
2: The actor who was robbed of his script ✓
Three: Forced to become the protagonist of the villain✓
Four: That ray of sunshine in the doomsday ✓
Five: Little Heavenly Master will give you one-stop service ✓
Six: Well, it is the hope of the whole village✓
Seven: The CEO captured by the time traveler ✓
8: Now that everyone has sat down, it's time for me to take the lead ✓
Nine: Night and day...
10: The plants have mutated in the end of the natural disaster...
Eleven: Lian Zong, I have a fixed CP...
Twelve: Abo, who wants to change to O? I am super A, okay...
Thirteen: When the world covers your ears...
Fourteen: Who travels in the world of immortality by carriage...
Fifteen: Past and present lives...
(The world that has not yet been written is not certain and may change at any time, but the outline has been written, so you can eat it with confidence)
Reader comments
How to put it, 1. I feel that the emotional progress is a bit fast. You can lay out the plot first, and then the emotional line can be used as a seasoning. This may improve the comfort of reading.
2. There will be some wrong sentence question types in the Chinese paper. I hope you can pay more attention to them. Although sometimes you will really miss them or make other mistakes (anyway, you just don't find those basic errors), but there are still readers. We will remind you, so don't forget to correct them when the time comes.
3. The writing style is still good, but I feel that the wording in some places is not so appropriate, and I need to pay more attention to it.
4. The above are some personal opinions and some suggestions (I still hope that the story will be mainly based on the plot, so that the article will appear fuller. If necessary, some ups and downs of the plot can be included to improve the readability. However, if you want to write a sweet article or an article that supplements sugar, I still support it, but the intensity must be controlled, otherwise it may be boring and dry when reading)
Finally, I wish that the articles written by Da Da will get better and better and be seen and liked by more and more people.
Wish you the best of luck in advance! ! ! Shu Yue is a gentle and cute girl! ! !
[Crying] [Crying] It's so sad. It was taken off the shelves before I even finished reading it. [Cry][cry][cry]
Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?
It looks great, but I can't send gifts. This phone has a strange problem. Everything else is connected to the network. But the network is unstable when I send gifts. It pisses me off. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
It's good-looking. The relationship is like love at first sight. It's fast and sweet. It accounts for more in the early stage and less in the later stage. The main thing is the plot, and the plot is great. There are no big logical problems. It's very smooth and exciting. The writing is also improving, so please work hard ^0＾~
These are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it
It's super, super good-looking, really really good-looking, ahhhhh, I love this style so much [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]
[Learned] Look good, look good, look good, say important things three times. In every world, the two of them are sweet, there is no misunderstanding, and they love each other.
Why was it removed? Why? Why was it removed? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Very pretty ah ah ah ah
The content is concise, clear and beautiful (○｀ε´○)
It's pretty and very sweet.
Don't say anything, except that it's still being updated, this book is simply amazing [adoration][adoration][adoration]
There are billions of points short. Not enough to watch at all.
It's beautiful, I just like the golden finger text
Come on, the author [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]It's super beautiful[shy][shy][shy]
Ah, it's so beautiful, why is there no one there? ⊙ω⊙I really love it, love it, love it, love it [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Author, come on💪
It's really beautiful. If no one reads this book, I will be sad (๑•́ωก̀๑) [crying] The author, please come on [send heart][send heart][send heart][love][love]
The beginning is novel and has a style that I have never seen before.
The relationship between attacker and receiver is also super sweet
The author's writing style is also nice
I'm not very good at praising, but I really recommend this book.
So beautiful! Big cheers for the author!
Super wonderful article
It's very beautiful. Why is the rating so low? I can't figure it out.
I like this kind of love at first sight, the feeling is quick, super sweet, and the chapters are not long.
Well written and very beautiful!
Nice! The author loves you so much!
Nice! The writing is really detailed
Beautiful, I like it very much
They are each other's destiny
Hey hey hey, can't you let me eat this meat?
What's going on? Why can't I see it all of a sudden?
How to put it, 1. I feel that the emotional progress is a bit fast. You can lay out the plot first, and then the emotional line can be used as a seasoning. This may improve the comfort of reading. 2. There will be some wrong sentence question types in the Chinese paper. I hope you can pay more attention to them. Although sometimes you will really miss them or make other mistakes (anyway, you just don't find those basic errors), but there are still readers. We will remind you, so don't forget to correct them when the time comes. 3. The writing style is still good, but I feel that the wording in some places is not so appropriate, and I need to pay more attention to it. 4. The above are some personal opinions and some suggestions (I still hope that the story will be mainly based on the plot, so that the article will appear fuller. If necessary, some ups and downs of the plot can be included to improve the readability. However, if you want to write a sweet article or an article that supplements sugar, I still support it, but the intensity must be controlled, otherwise it may be boring and dry when reading) Finally, I wish that the articles written by Da Da will get better and better and be seen and liked by more and more people.
Wish you the best of luck in advance! ! ! Shu Yue is a gentle and cute girl! ! !
[Crying] [Crying] It's so sad. It was taken off the shelves before I even finished reading it. [Cry][cry][cry]
Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?
It looks great, but I can't send gifts. This phone has a strange problem. Everything else is connected to the network. But the network is unstable when I send gifts. It pisses me off. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good (*／ω＊)
It's good-looking. The relationship is like love at first sight. It's fast and sweet. It accounts for more in the early stage and less in the later stage. The main thing is the plot, and the plot is great. There are no big logical problems. It's very smooth and exciting. The writing is also improving, so please work hard ^0＾~ These are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it
It's super, super good-looking, really really good-looking, ahhhhh, I love this style so much [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]
[Learned] Look good, look good, look good, say important things three times. In every world, the two of them are sweet, there is no misunderstanding, and they love each other.
Why was it removed? Why? Why was it removed? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Very pretty ah ah ah ah
The content is concise, clear and beautiful (○｀ε´○)
It's pretty and very sweet.
Don't say anything, except that it's still being updated, this book is simply amazing [adoration][adoration][adoration]
There are billions of points short. Not enough to watch at all.
It's beautiful, I just like the golden finger text
Come on, the author [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]It's super beautiful[shy][shy][shy]
Ah, it's so beautiful, why is there no one there? ⊙ω⊙I really love it, love it, love it, love it [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Author, come on💪 It's really beautiful. If no one reads this book, I will be sad (๑•́ωก̀๑) [crying] The author, please come on [send heart][send heart][send heart][love][love]
The beginning is novel and has a style that I have never seen before. The relationship between attacker and receiver is also super sweet The author's writing style is also nice I'm not very good at praising, but I really recommend this book.
So beautiful! Big cheers for the author!
Super wonderful article
It's very beautiful. Why is the rating so low? I can't figure it out.
I like this kind of love at first sight, the feeling is quick, super sweet, and the chapters are not long.
Well written and very beautiful!
Nice! The author loves you so much!
Nice! The writing is really detailed
Beautiful, I like it very much
They are each other's destiny
Hey hey hey, can't you let me eat this meat?
What's going on? Why can't I see it all of a sudden?