A Thousand-Year Pact: Now I Am the Disciple, and You Are the Master

The writing style is jerky, the perspective changes and connections are too stiff, and the storyline is not very controllable. It should be strengthened. The story should not deviate too much from the main line, the theme and purpose should be enhanced, and the most basic story flow should be achieved. There is a lack of in-depth characterization of the characters, and some plots that have a tendency to reduce intelligence need to be revised. As a fantasy work, the skills of the characters are too single, and some characters are seriously transparent. Let's aim to tell a good story first.

A thousand years later, the master becomes his apprentice, and the protagonist is invincible and emotionally rich. You can read this book. The author's updates are also great.

Well written and the plot is very good

Love it, love it, eat iced watermelon and read novels at the same time, so comfortable

Beautifully written, I'm fascinated by it

There is very little nonsense. The more I read, the more I can't live without it. Author, you are awesome.

Well written, the author's writing style is wonderful

I just watched it all night, it was so beautiful

I love this book so much. I must continue to read it.

The plot is very reasonable and the content is not boring. I will continue to follow it.