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I'll give this a five-star rating. Don't forget to turn into a cat girl and give me a pout someday😀

Please write quickly, thank you, I want to see the protagonist being super

Hey, I'm a fellow writer, but I'm not capable of writing. You're pretty awesome, you're capable.

What a pity. I really like this kind of book, but you are driving too fast. My stroller almost couldn't catch up. I'm just kidding, haha. As the saying goes, there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand readers. Whether it is good or bad depends on your heart. Even if it is recognized as bad by the Internet, some people like it, and some people hate it if it is good. All material evaluations and values ​​are just accessories of human development. I still hope that the author will not give up on this subject. Don't pay attention to sarcastic remarks and keep your mind clear. Come on, I like writing about changing marriages. . . Big. . Brother and sister? In short, changing marriage is the best. (For me, watching the change of marriage is to see the changes in the heroine's mental process and the sweetness)

Wow, this book... Is spicy, fast-paced, and not watery. If you are a man, hurry up and read it [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] I want to give ten stars

Why give it five stars? I don't know either

This book is really well written. The writing and the writing are perfect. The heroine's female form is very smooth. The awkwardness of having too many brows is perfect. I hope to continue writing. The copy mode is actually not impossible. You can refer to the rules in the survival game to decipher and clear the boss. The male and female protagonists can join the national team, and then solve one space-time rift or secret realm after another, and they can spread the dog food without monotonous college life. We can also add some emotional scenes with other supporting characters. Anyway, this book has great potential. Come on, author!

Overall, I still think it's very good, whether it's the world view or the characters, especially the system that adds fuel to the flames, and the cars are also great. Although it's still a bit sparse at the moment, I can look forward to it in the future [please update]

I have studied literary novels. The writing of this novel can be said to be pretty good, and the sentences are also very fluent. It can be seen from the front that there is an outline. Without an outline, the author must have a clear idea, so I will give 9.5 Points for the first half, followed by our favorite erotic part. There is nothing to say about this, just full marks. Is Shen Yue accepting the brother a little too fast? Let's say that a man cannot accept falling in love with a man for a while, unless he is gay. If you can describe here that it is because of the influence of the system or estrogen, it will be better to slowly and slowly become attracted to men (well, it's so perverted). Then the whole book is like this. It is not unreasonable to be on the hot list. I hope it can be updated twice a day, so it will definitely become more popular. Finally, keep going.

I've seen people driving, but I've never seen people driving so fast (person •͈ᴗ•͈)♡☆

I like it so fast, it really makes people feel that they are perverted, hahahahaha [Top post][Top post][Top post]

The author drives very fast, which is my favorite type. It would be great if the author could update it quickly.

It's a very interesting book. I bought it for my child. He loves to eat it and died three years ago. The characters are rich in personality, the emotions are wonderful, the articles are very literary, and the author is very graceful. They are updated overnight and the children cried to death.

Sweet, very sweet. The author's writing is so sweet that I must give it five stars for this sweetness.

It's really beautiful! Why were you dragged to the playoffs? I must follow the network cable another day and beat those who reported the case one by one.

Come back, my beloved author, my most proud belief, I can still see Bai Mao clearly in my mind, and I vaguely remember February 2. There is also an awesome author who conquers all readers, and I am not tired even if I read all night long!

The update is too slow, why can't it be 100 chapters a day? (*^ω^*)

It's rare to find such an excellent wedding, so I must give it five stars.

Let me tell you my own feelings first: (The following is purely my personal opinion and is not intended to start a fight!!!) Question 1. I'm not very sure what the duo is doing after the academy chapter. I feel that the plot is a bit confusing, or it may be due to my own understanding. 2. There are a bit too many game descriptions in this book (?). I admit that proper game description can indeed enhance immersion (self-feeling). It does not mean that the writing is not good, but it is hard to describe the discomfort (after all, I just played the game until it collapsed and read the novel. Your writing directly reminded me of "The Wonderful Moment (Being Tricked by Teammates?)") Advantages 1 I dare to write. Tomato needs warrior writers like you who dare to describe. 2 The main plot line is very clear (before the academy chapter, I feel a bit mixed after that), which is much better than those authors who only know how to drive. Summary(?) For now, this book is quite excellent, and I don't know why the rating is so low (it shouldn't be...). Keep it up, and I believe the book reviews will rise sooner or later.

Author, you could write it in more detail [laughing evilly]

Come on, come on, hurry up and put the protagonist to death on the spot.

This book is so good that people unconsciously gave it a five-star rating.

I don't know why it's five stars. Maybe it's because I'm bt.

He survived, he survived, he won the resurrection match [crying]

Very good. I don't want the author to change the theme and title. I also hope that the name given to the character by the author feels a little unfamiliar. I have changed it and I don't want the author to change the content, because the content is really great, has a love flavor, and also has the excitement of competition. I hope the author will make it longer, write more chapters, and not end it hastily. After the end, I also hope the author will write another very similar book with the theme of the two protagonists of this book. Just think of it as a sequel to this book, and don't change the main character's name. Relationships also don't want to add other people, and they don't want to be in the category of games and high-tech. Don't write about ancient customs, just write about modern cities. I don't want it to be like two people traveling through time from beginning to end. Traveled to a world similar to the original world. I also know that it is difficult for the author, but I still hope that the author will continue another book, thank you.

I just started reading it and I thought it was very interesting and very suitable for this kind of taste. Can the author turn into white hair and make me pout? [Blow a kiss]

The writing is good (≧∇≦*), and the author, please update it quickly, or I will turn you into a white-haired lolita with cat ears.

This article is stupid, but I love reading it! ! !

It's literally written all over my XP Damn, can you write more? I've been looking for books like yours these past two days, and I've been going crazy. Please

It's okay. Nothing else about this book made me so disgusted.