Armor: This Nava Is Too Cruel

Personally, I feel that this is probably the best armor fic that Tomato has written so far, with the protagonist being Duanmu Yan. The writing style is also very suitable to my taste, semi-invincible and close to invincible, not too brainless, and the character is not broken, so I give five stars to General Duanmu [make a face]

The author who updates five times a day has written ten thousand words in one day, which is extremely explosive in the entire armor world.

Come on, it's a very good armor book.

Purgatory Shura! Purgatory Shura! ! General Duanmu is invincible on earth! ! The galaxy is invincible! ! ! It is actually the orthodoxy of Lufa and Ares! ! So righteous! Number one in the world! [Laughing out loud]

The author is simply a model of Tomato. He updates every day. I really like the author's efficiency. This book is also very well written, with a wonderful plot. The author unfolds the armor world from the perspective of General Duanmu. There is no system or time travel, and it purely satisfies the legendary story of our general's training path. The book also has some flaws. For example, some of the details of the fights, the shaping of the characters, the logic of adding new themes, etc. Are not perfectly grasped. Of course, this is natural. After all, you can't force perfection in anything, let alone write a work as seriously as studying art. Overall, the author is really great, come on! I will support you later!!! [Laughs]

It's good-looking, the character design doesn't seem to be broken personally, and the author has made a lot of updates. Currently, Duanmu is defeated by Nava, but I prefer Tuo Na more, alas (╥ω╥`). There is no news about Zinami and Kurefu, Yatales will definitely come out (judgment: given Kaiyi's background, there is no need to write Nava [angry] if he doesn't come out), but it depends on how the author writes the rest.

The author's writing is very good. This is the most realistic version of General Duanmu among the fics I have ever read. [Sinister smile]

The author must update to Armor 5. If you really can't, you can go to the Mask next door to play. I usually have the habit of reading books, but when it comes to this book, I really can't! The main characters are well developed. The plot has been changed to suit my needs and is exciting. I watch 10 episodes of Power Generation for Love every day and I must continue to work on it. Chapters 165 and 411 are apotheosis. If it were a novel about cultivating immortals and the characters were well-developed, I might think it was normal. But it's the armor text. There is too little character material (Lu Fa and Bei Sanshui) shown in the play. There are even some holes that have not been filled. The author not only filled it in but also built a tall tower. This will definitely be the strongest armor text.

The writing is really beautiful. General Duanmu is very suitable to be the male protagonist. It is a standard protagonist template for cool novels. It is amazing.

This is so damn wonderful, and the writing of General Duanmu is so good, and he is so upright [Admiration][Admiration][Blowing a kiss][Salute]

It can be said that it is one of the few armor fanfics that I can read. It doesn't add much. Some plots deliberately depict some coincidences in order to promote the development of the story. But it is not poisonous, but dramatic. It is very good and interesting. It is a pleasure to watch. There are also problems. For example, the proud and proud part of General Duanmu's character appears to be a bit stronger.

The plot is really good. The familiar internal conflicts of Armor Warrior were also written for him, which took me back to my childhood. When watching Armor Warrior, General Duanmu's character was also written for him. There's just no heat

I finally saw the armor story with the original owner Duanmu as the protagonist, praise, praise, praise😚

It is a very logical book about General Duanmu, and the film industry is also very clever. All the characters in it are very consistent with their personalities, and their actions are all logical. It is like really watching Duanmu come to Kaiyi. It is very beautiful!

The officially recognized strength rankings of Armor Warriors are as follows: 1. Emperor Armor: Gathering light, shadow, five elements and all things, possessing infinite power, it is the strongest armor in the bright universe. Relying on the power of the sun, one can live forever as long as there is light. The ultimate move, Demon Subduing and Annihilating Slash, is fast and powerful. 2. Shura Armor: The armor of the king of the galaxy, only those with the strongest energy can control it. The ability to change places and travel through time and space is very strong. 3. Xingtian Armor: A set of mass-produced armor. It is also a comprehensive armor with both offensive and defensive capabilities. Finally, he obtained the God of War Fiery Sword and destroyed Lufa. 4. Thunder Yatales: possesses the five elements and can use the attack style ability of four sets of armor. The weapon must kill Yatas, Heaven and Earth Slash, and the ultimate must kill Yatales, Aurora Sha. It is so powerful that it can kill monsters instantly. The strong one is not Nava, but the summoner! If you put General Duanmu in Xingtian Episode 1: Emperor Yan throws away his helmet and still gives up his armor, Hell Face Shura cuts his way through Episode 2: Ares shows his arrogance, Duanmu accuses King Peel "Get on the feet without transforming" "Interrupting Oxel's transformation" "I won't let you go even if you beg me" "Nava is crazy" "One day I am an Oaks, I will be an Oaks forever" "I am too lazy to reason with you, you don't deserve to listen" "Since you are already dead, why are you coming back now? There are five sets of armors in one drama. General Duanmu has three sets of armors. One of the three teammates went abroad in the middle. , One becomes Oxer, one enters the game, 31 out of 39 blame him, if tricked, he wants to grab the summoner and directly summon Qilin, not the Holy Mother, one hit and one is beaten, one hit two is knocked back, one hit three kills one, one hit four kills another, one hit five kills one and the other dies, one sworn by another, lazy to talk and listen, whenever he comes into contact with Shura Armor Directly promoted to Hell Face Shura, others are righteous and evil, he is righteous and evil, arrogant and arrogant? Isn't it enough for the MVP to scold his teammate for being a jerk? A standard cool male protagonist Oxel: Do we deserve to die? Yanlong: hesitate Xing Tian: Self-doubt Nava: Aren't you talking nonsense? If you don't die, will I die?

I would like to call it the best opening novel I have ever seen. More than 95% of the character's personality matches the personality. The writing is smooth and logical, and the depiction of combat is pretty good if not top-notch. I, the god of the world, approved it.

It ranks among the top three armor fanfics I've read. It's undoubtedly great. Although the character design may be a little biased, it's definitely fun.

It is also one of the best among armors. You are the best novel among domestic armor novels. Most people write about Kamen Rider, but I am worried that the rating will increase so fast and it will be blocked, so I still recommend the author to save the manuscript. It's over, let's take a look at the duration

One word is cool. Regardless of other reviews, this book exudes an aura of invincibility from beginning to end. From beginning to end, it is a one-on-one torment. Even if the villain is strengthened in the later stage, it can still be one-on-one and not fall behind. It is even caught and the base is fully loaded. The logic may be a little worse, but the article is impeccable. This is a refreshing book worth reading.

The description is very good, and it mainly highlights that they did not fully exert the power of the Five Elements Armor, while Yan Zhi Nava was fully exerted by Duan Muyan. , In the later stage, Duan Muyan can be rewarded with a Shura Armor Summoner. , And then forget about the Emperor Armor. , Don't play just because it's a piece of cake. , Thunder Yatales must get it.

I like Duan Muyan's character very much, and hate evil as much as hatred, but the author made me see the bad side of this character. Too much righteousness leads to evil, things must be reversed at their extremes, yin and yang are in conflict and produce each other, things are opposite and transform into each other. Laozi's views are still applicable after thousands of years, but through the author's description, I We can also see the growth of Duan Muyan, and the author has brought in some famous scenes in the works very well, such as General Duanmu's slander, "We still don't know what Li Zi's suggestion is about that day", rotten oranges are rotten oranges and many other famous scenes, and the author has indeed It has made great progress, and the plot can be seen to have grown. In fact, it was a little unsmooth at first, but after continuing to watch it, I still felt that it was a lot of fun, and the final ending was satisfactory. Can I go to other world views, such as the fake one of Aunt Dong next door? Face Knight, although I have not read this, I have read some fanfics. I think it is still worth writing. I would like to trouble the author to read it. Finally, I would like to thank the author for such a wonderful writing, which also satisfied my childhood. In my heart, General Duanmu, the undefeated and invincible righteous Duanmuyan!

After reading all the reviews, they are all 5 stars, and they are also very good-looking. Unfortunately, it is not popular. I hope my 5 stars can make this book popular. This book must be rated at the top [angry][angry][angry]

Duan Muyan gave me a large part of the feeling of satisfaction in Kai San. The author also used his own efforts to improve the feeling of enjoyment in the world of Kai I and Kai II. He did not favor one thing over another because of Duan Muyan's existence. The plot must have plot, the growth line must have growth line, and the program effect must have program effect. "Nava Famous scenes such as "Going crazy", "It's too scary to come out to Nava again", "Li Zi's suggestion", interrupting spell casting, "any insect dares to come out and interrupt" are all echoed. It also satisfies everyone's fantasy of Duan Muyan wearing Shura armor, and the experience of balancing Shura and Yatales is also quite funny. In addition, the adaptation of the original work in the shaping of Bei Sanshui, An Mixiu, Lu Fa and others, although not perfect, can be said to be fair and enrich the image.

Beautiful, I like it! Although you may feel slightly uncomfortable in some places, it's nothing! Highly recommended! [Angry][angry] Oops~ One more thing, is there a female protagonist? [Send heart][Send heart]

The best armored warrior fanfic I have seen on Tomato so far. It is very consistent with the character of General Duanmu. There is no deliberate weakening of the protagonist and supporting characters. The villain's IQ is also online. There is no brainless plot, and there is no Virgin (The Virgin is not General Duanmu). I have read ninety chapters so far, and I have not found any poisonous points.

This book is definitely the best in the Duanmu General fan series. It has no system plug-ins, is extremely pure, and tastes great.

The plot and characters are not too shabby but are handled very well. There are also many small details about General Duanmu that are very interesting. There are also many famous quotes from General Duanmu. Now the only famous scenes between General Duanmu and An Mixiu are missing.

Hmm, I haven't watched it for a long time. Well, I'll come back and comment. I didn't watch it since I saw that Dang Fu was about to return to his own world. The previous descriptions of Duanmu's reflection vision are very good, whether it is in Armor 1, the battle with Beimiao, or the limited strength in Armor 2. It's the same thing to change your thinking and respond in a timely manner, and then lead the new team to let the Xingtian team grow. It can be seen that the author has certain ideas about depicting the plot. Duan Muye is like the son of the earth who is favored by the earth. There is a special magnetic field that seduce him to meet Oaks, or it is a mask for supernatural beasts. No matter what it is called, Duan Muyan's character remains unchanged. He hates evil as much as he hates it, and he is decisive and courageous. Justice and righteousness are vented. Love is love, hate is hate, and sorrow is sorrow. Whether it's Lu Fa's cleansing or Xiaogang's misunderstanding. In other words, in the first armor team, Beimiao's provocative challenges and attitude towards Yuchao are not as changeable as others in the team. If he believes it, he will believe it. If he doesn't believe it, he doesn't believe it. If he believes it, he will always believe it without any doubt. If he doesn't believe it, he will hate evil as much as he hates it, so he will treat him as Oxer's opponent and enemy. It's very good, so to speak, and there are enough foreshadowings, and the plot twist is big enough and logical, so you can watch it with a little brain or without a brain. You can feel the charm of General Duanmu. I often forget to comment. This is a comment to supplement the author. Please continue to work hard after your writing is very good.

It looks good, Zundu looks good. It took me a few days to finally catch up with the author's update. I have to say that the plot has made up for many of the poisonous points of the original plot, and the logic has also been improved. The author also has his own understanding. Overall, he has neither been biased by various criticisms nor lost his own style. Most of the characters who appear are restored to those in the original plot, and the image created by the author is even richer. PS: It might be better if the frequency of expressions such as "wry smile" and "bitterness" could be reduced.

It's really great. I never thought I could see armor fan fiction of this level on Tomato. The characters are not broken and the plot is reasonable. Armor fans will definitely recommend it. It's finished, the best armor fanfic on Tomato right now