Transform into Shen He in the Parallel World

Once upon a time, a monster guarded a tall tower The princess is locked in the tower The monster was nice to her But she still couldn't be happy Suddenly one day a knight came Said to the princess: "The monster has been killed by me." The king was very happy and married the princess to the knight When the wedding was going on, the princess suddenly stood up on tiptoes and leaned into the knight's ear and said: "You have to be careful and hide your tail well."

The beginning is good, but there are too few words. If the author expects to make money from this, he will have to update at least five chapters a day. There is also the question of whether the author will suddenly stop updating or gradually stop updating. The last book I saw said that it would not stop updating, but it still stopped. Furthermore, because the number of words is too small now, the overall quality of the article will not be evaluated until after 30W. Of course, if my brain suddenly breaks down in the middle, I will follow up and comment. Finally, I have to stop updating and tell you in advance! If you want to stop updating, please tell me in advance! If you want to stop updating, please tell me in advance! Don't make readers wait for updates, come on, authors.

It looks good, the writing is okay, the plot is very interesting, and the setting is also very good. Compared with those games or movies where you become a character and travel to another world, and the other world also has a game or movie, there will not be a bunch of embarrassing lines. I hope the author will not give up, I hope it will be a hundred orders [Send heart]

The first comment is mine.

The writing is okay, but a bit lacking. Come on, author [smile][smile]

It's very good. It's my favorite type. I hope the author can write more novels and don't leave the book unfinished or discontinued. It's best not to finish it so quickly. I hope that if the author finishes this book in the future, he can write more novels as good as this one. Come on! This book would be best if it were Lily

Very good among the books I have read

Invincible, the author must persevere😣 Blow the roots, blow the roots, come on, update meow Speaking of which, can others learn the Great Cave Milo Sutra? Shen He seems to be at the stage of refining energy and becoming a god now. He is one step away from refining the god and returning to the void to recreate the Five Elements Universe. He should be able to teach others. By the way, don't read too many novels about cultivating immortals and think that refining qi to transform into gods is rubbish. This kind of state has been rare in ancient times. The so-called immortal emperors and gods in many novels are actually only at the level of refining qi to transform into gods, and some even fall short of it.

Finally, I waited until the book was finished. I personally feel that this book is still great. However, the hole dug before has not been filled in, which is a small regret. For example, why was the protagonist chosen? What happened to Teyvat? Questions like these have not yet been answered

There are ideas, writing style, and clear regulations. Many people are only in the stage of having ideas, and the rest is a mess. It is really powerful to write like this.

Why are there so few? I still want to watch. I still want to watch. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

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It's really nice [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] Can the author give more [shy][shy][shy]

The plot of this book is gripping and makes people want to put it down. It is really an intoxicating good book. The author uses vivid descriptions and delicate emotions to make the whole story full of warmth and power. The language of this book is concise and clear, and every word is exquisite. It is mesmerizing to read. And I think the plot of the story is compact and every chapter is fascinating, making people unable to stop reading. What makes people shine is that The author's descriptions are delicate and nuanced, making readers feel as if they are personally on the scene and experiencing various stories with the protagonist. The best thing is that the theme of this book is deeply rooted in people's hearts and triggered my thinking about life and human nature. With a unique perspective and profound insight, the author outlines a rich character that makes people moved. Summary: This book has both passionate adventures and deeply rooted emotional descriptions, which can bring readers a rich and colorful reading experience; the story has twists and turns, full of suspense and surprises, keeping readers in a tense reading state. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ The article is cleverly conceived and reasonably laid out, showing profound cultural accumulation and unique insights, which is of great benefit to people. I want to say: "Your article is like flowing clouds and flowing water. It is written in one go. After reading it, I feel enlightened and enlightened. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is stretched and free, natural and free. It can be regarded as a relatively successful work. Although this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions. I enjoy reading it. Taste, the author can explain complex concepts vividly and in simple terms, making it easy to understand. The readability of the article is extremely high. Whether it is the choice of words, sentences, or the layout of the article, the author's excellent writing skills are demonstrated. The author's writing is like flowing clouds and flowing water, all in one go, giving people a hearty feeling. Summary: This novel has novel themes, wonderful ideas, and lively language. The refreshing atmosphere of Genshin Impact and the author's views on life are revealed between the lines (I personally think it is worth reading, and the subject matter is novel, unlike the novels on the recommendation list that are all the same, with no characteristics. Some novel authors even copy and paste the fruits of other people's hard work directly into their own novels. It is completely wrong, but some people still say it is good, and even the name of the protagonist is not changed. But this novel is not the same. Every word and paragraph is typed out by the author himself who stayed up late at night). You can read it.

I have read an article about sex before, and I think it is very well said. You think you are a man now because of the experience of living as a man for more than ten years. Now that you have lived as a woman for several times as long as a man, or even thousands or hundreds of years later, will you still consider yourself a man? [Thinking]

It's okay, I just find Li Ying's character development a bit boring, so I'm not too optimistic about this couple [Thinking]

Wuhu! When a new fan comes, the author is confused about whether he will accept it [making a face]

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The plot and other aspects are pretty good, but the author's subjective consciousness is too strong. From time to time, you can see the author's satire on the current society, and it is not an implicit satire, but an explicit satire. I always feel like I am in a drama. If I don't like it, I just need to say it appropriately. There is no need to say a lot. Moreover, the writing style of satire is a little bit better. I can look forward to the future.

It's so good-looking [Sending my heart to you] I'm invincible when I first came here, I like it

It's nice. By the way, does Shen He have a CP for this book?

In general, there are some new ideas but not many, and it cannot escape from traditional routines. Those who like Genshin Impact and Shen He can check it out. Reading this kind of novel is basically a pleasure, but it won't work as well after the novelty has passed.

It looks good, but my friend said it seems unlikely that it will cost ten gold.

It's okay. I've read Chapter 86 so far. It feels like playing a game and doing tasks. For example, when you are running the map, an emergency task is suddenly triggered, and someone is attacked by a monster, etc...

Looks good\(//∇//)\, it's time to take the exam. Still fascinated [laughing and crying]. It's your fault if you fail the exam

It's rare to find a good book that is comfortable to read. Huh~ It would be great if all Tomato books were like this, then we wouldn't have a book shortage...

It's very well written and I like the subject matter, but it's a bit short.

So when can I get a night orchid? ! I know that Ye Lan and Shen He are not familiar with each other, but since the pig's feet have become Shen He's, it's not too much to have Ye Lan as his wife, right? ! After all, the works painted by that woman are very attractive.

Process: Not bad, five-star arrangement. Ending: No, Xiaocao is over for you! 4! No more! ! ! Crane and Fu:...? It's so crispy on the outside and tender on the inside, hehehe~~~1 star. From now on. I am selfless. Where's Utz's fire girl? What about Amber? Dee and Kai: Ah, it's over. I'll just take this bite... Two men, two women... QAQ. That, that, that... Alas, forget it. Ignore it, Hefu... QAQ

Come on! This type of subject matter is still rare! I like this type of story about transforming into a character and traveling into an imaginary world. Is there any recommended [send heart] [top post]?