There Are Too Many Love Partners, and the Master Turns into a Yandere

Master Feng Qingxian-6 Senior sister Feng Baiwei-5 Feng Qiu Shuang, the leader of the Feng clan-4 Yu Feiyan, the young poster of Fengxuelou-9 Miss Nangong Lianyue-10 Busty loli Bai Yingying-3 Qingyue Fairy Han Qingyue-Yuezhiyao-2 Succubus Princess Mo Qingxin-1 Dragon Princess Long Xuexin-7 Yundian Saint Ji Bingrou-Meng Wuyou-13 Valkyrie Su Qingyi-12 Shen Wuxin-Shenmengdie-8 Moon Emperor Yan Muxue-11 Cang Yue Empress Nanhuang Shenyue-Xiaoxue-14 The heroine is not too much and not too little, and the emotional line is full. It is a very good harem story.

Very beautiful, I hope there are more than 20 female protagonists

The writing is really good and the details are well handled. But how should I put it, I personally feel that the plot is a bit slow, or the development period is too long [Thinking][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

It's well written, but too little. Come on, author. Can you finish this book first and have dozens of chapters come out tomorrow?

Reading it now, the plot is still attractive. The most important thing is that there are no logical errors, and the protagonist does not have any anti-value thoughts or behaviors.

It's a very good book and I like to read it. But it would be better if it could be updated more. It's not enough to read at all.

1. It can be seen that the author is very careful in portraying each character, but the technique is not perfect enough. It feels that many places are just expressing emotions for no reason. 2 The combat power of this cultivation realm is very confusing, but this is a cool article and relatively normal. 3. The one I like most about the love line is Yingying. Although she has shortcomings, she is much better than the others. (It feels too deliberate) 4 The Great World's Earnings is not simply about the number of talented people as many as dogs. It is absolutely possible to use more pen and ink to write about the content of a hundred flowers blooming and the heroes vying for the throne. In short, this book made me blinded and hopeful at the same time, because I also have the idea of ​​​​writing a book. If I really write it, my writing skills are too poor and the writing will not be as good as this book. The main line can be pushed slowly, but the emotional line really can't be vague :-)

It's so beautiful and no one sees it. Is it true?

Well, this book captivated me from the beginning. I originally didn't like to read about children because other books are about the main character cheating from a young age and then the adults have to obey him. It's hard to feel a sense of substitution. This book is about children at the beginning, but it's very healing. I saw the cuteness of children. I was really touched when I saw how sensible and ignorant they were. I originally thought this was a harem novel, but it could be written like this. The little brother and the elder sister living together is not a passionate love between a couple, but more like a young mother and son. The empress is like a mother who has just brought up a child. Her cold mouth makes the child want to cry. Then the hero goes alone to feel wronged. The empress reflects on herself and then comforts him. Then she smiles warmly. Everything is so touching. I have rarely seen such a heartwarming book on Tomato. I almost cried. I felt like this just after reading the first few chapters. I don't know how to review the book. I just read it and said a few words because it was heart-warming. [Blow a kiss] The writing is sophisticated and a lot of details are explained clearly. Yes, it's really nice.

Five stars directly, I believe your book, I want to eat Feng Qingxian's baby granary [I'm about to cry]

In pure romance novels about cultivating immortals, the protagonist's emotional growth is the main focus, and there are few descriptions of fighting skills to improve his strength. Each heroine has a unique and unforgettable experience with the protagonist. The protagonist's character development is unsatisfactory, affectionate and affectionate cannot be distinguished clearly, and promises and oaths are too casual. Some of the plot's advancements and twists are too strong, but overall it's good. The supporting characters also have their own stories and are worth watching.

It's good to watch. The emotional scenes are very good. The characters such as Master and Qingyue are vividly described. If you like reading novels similar to the Evil God, you can continue reading. The current female protagonists are all written in a lovable way, each with their own characteristics. Fairy Qingyue is similar to Yue Chan in the perfect world, with her temperament and character. However, the emotional scenes are definitely much better than those written by Chen Dong. The male protagonist is also not ink. It would be perfect if Shi Hao and Qingyi didn't use swords.

Very good, really good, but I would like to ask the author whether Feng Qiu Shuang and South African Cigarettes will be accepted. My opinion is that they will be accepted.

After reading it, I feel a bit complicated. I actually don't know how to write this book review [Chigua]. Let me tell you some things to note before reading this book. First: don't read it with your brain! Don't watch it with your brain! Don't watch it with your brain! Because the character of the male protagonist in the early stages of this book is not lovable, and he is even said to be a beast. Second: Everyone, remember, this is a harem story! Not a single heroine! Third: The heroines of this book are: Feng Qingxian, Han Qingyue [Yue Zhiyuan], Ji Binrou [Meng Wuyou], Shen Mengdie [Shen Wuxin], Feng Baiwei, Feng Qiu Shuang, Mo Qingxin, Yan Muxue [Moon Emperor], Xiaoxue [Cang Yue], Long Xinxue, Yu Feiyan, Su Qingyi, Nangong Lianyue, Bai Yingying, a total of 14 heroines! Yes, you read that right 14 bits! —— Now that we've talked about the things to note, let's talk about the plot. From a plot perspective, this book is pretty good in terms of the character creation and the coherence of the plot. However, I feel that the insertion of individual characters is quite abrupt, such as Bai Yingying's first appearance in the early stage. To be honest, I still think it's too abrupt. It feels like a character is forcibly inserted. Everything else is fine. Well, there are also big and small knives. I can only say that the 14 female protagonists are all good people, especially Feng Baiwei and Bai Yueguang, but the characters are all different. It's so sad. If this book had a single female protagonist, the rating might be higher, but there would also be more regrets. I can only say Aunt Qiu is fun [laughing evilly]. After all, Aunt Qiu really dotes on the male protagonist, and [does it] more times than all the other female protagonists put together (ah, yes, that's it) The one you are thinking of [laughs evilly]), the other heroines are really good. To be honest, they are really good. Of course, except for Bai Yingying, she is a slut and a coquettish one. Although she looks cute and cute on the surface, she turns out to be very bad. —— I think the most miserable one is Shen Mengdie. She betrayed her own tribe for the sake of the male protagonist. In the end, two factions of the tribe were wiped out. And she herself was targeted as the shame pillar of rebellion and was kicked out of the tribe. On the day when the male protagonist took revenge, she still stupidly waited for the male protagonist to ask her. Proposal, but the male protagonist abandoned her because of his obsession with loving her only a month away. I think this character is the best character in this book. I actually felt sorry for her when I saw it later, but I couldn't help it. The male protagonist and her competed for the first time because he defeated her. , To put it bluntly, the Gods couldn't afford to lose, and they framed the male protagonist for stealing the Gods' treasure, which led to Yue Zhiyao's death. In order to take revenge, the male protagonist sealed his hatred for the Gods, and fell in love with Shen Mengdie for the cultivation resources behind him, and then took revenge. Perhaps because his obsession was too strong, he abandoned her on the day of revenge. They never saw each other again, and Shen Mengdie every 10 years. She would go to the Immortal Court once, but the male protagonist never saw her. Later, she wanted to improve her cultivation, kicked open the gate of the Immortal Court, and forced him to marry her. What she didn't expect was that the male protagonist died [actually not dead, but the male protagonist allowed himself to reverse growth and be reborn in an era that was a month away]. And when the Immortal Court was in turmoil, she would rather be suppressed for hundreds of millions of years than wait for the male protagonist. I can only say that the female protagonists in this book are actually pretty good, what? You ask me about the male protagonist? The male protagonist is a fucking beast —— The final summary, in fact, judging from the character creation and plot line alone, the score of this book can be around 9.2, But the poisonous points in the front and the character design of the male protagonist are too beastly. When I was more than 200 chapters, I actually didn't want to read it anymore. The subsequent plots are basically covered in the end. Judging from the plot line alone, this book is still good. You still have to read it patiently. Okay, that's all.

😭Please, brother, good books are rare. The writing is so interesting, but the result is not enough to read. 😭Please, brother, update quickly. You haven't updated it for several hours. The production team don't dare to rest for so long😭

It's good to read, the characters are realistic and flesh-and-blood, and the plot design is reasonable, smooth and powerful. It's a rare and valuable book on Tomato, and it's worth reading.

It's well written, but there are too few key points. Please write this book well and try to write a million words.

This is my first time to reward the author. The writing is really good and the characters are very delicate. What a great book. Goodbye Master, Senior Sister, Yingying, Qingxin, Sister Feiyan, Qingyi, Qingyue, Wuyou, Wuxin, Mengdie, Aunt Qiu, Aunt Yan, Shenyue, Xuexin, Lian Yue. Looking forward to the author's new work [cry][cry][cry]

Especially the part where Bai Yingying is poisoned, although there is a lack of detailed description of the relationship between the two, the part where they confess to each other is very detailed, which made me feel like I was there. This is also the turning point for the male protagonist to start the harem. Another one is Mo Qingxin. Although the emotional changes are quite outrageous, they are acceptable. Others are not so deeply immersive, just like watching a movie. After watching it, you will forget it. The author's writing is not bad, but the time span is too big, ranging from a few months to a few years, and it will be skipped directly. Although it will be mentioned later, it will not have the same feeling as the present continuous tense. Having said that, I still highly recommend it, 5 stars.

It's a very good book, I read it in a week. First: Each heroine has a lot of words to describe, establish the character, and perfect the character line bit by bit. Many books are not as good as this. Second: If you only read most of the first chapters, regardless of the shaping of the "copy" or the foreshadowing, it will be enough. The next thing to say is not good. First: The next 100,000 yuan was indeed completed in a hurry like a deadline, especially the big foreshadowing of the fairy world was covered in almost a few chapters. (I don't know what influenced the author) Although, in today's fast pace, going one after another (there are higher planes in the higher world) is not pleasant. But I think as this article, it is necessary to write about such a big plot promotion in Fairyland. On the contrary, writing this step can make the plot of the protagonist and the heroines more perfect. (Some people will understand a lot if they have watched The Evil God). I believe that if the fairyland plot is written later, this book can definitely get a rating of 9.0 Or more. (It's quite a pity for me.) Second: There was indeed something wrong with the protagonist's creation, which made it necessary. A lot of pen and ink are used to "whitewash" (this word may be a bit ugly). If you really read the entire novel, you can clearly feel the obvious decline in quality near the end. Of course, this cannot be blamed on the author. It is possible that the author only built a framework of 1 million words at that time, and may have written a bit beyond his own framework later, so he had to stop and end in a hurry (after all, I have read that the author's works are basically small in length (more than 300,000 words). It may be difficult to control such a large length (more than 1 million words) for the first time). Finally, I hope the author will work hard and learn from experience. Try to make your next book a hit. [Blowing kiss]

The characters are well-drawn, and you won't hate them. , And it's not boring. It feels like each one has its own characteristics. As long as you are a family, you will be able to express every emotion.

When I read it, it was about 630 chapters, and I have finished them all now. I have read popular novels, and I have also read many unpopular cool novels. To be honest, I am already very selective in reading cool novels, but this one is really good to read. First of all, this book has a clear logic. It is not that you like someone without thinking, nor can you forgive someone with just a few sweet words. The storyline is intertwined. The emotions are also very delicately written, and the main character is not brainless or invincible except for the fact that a lot of people like him. Everyone in the book is making progress, and each character has a distinct personality. The author can also write a few poems, and the character description is also well-founded. Overall, this is the best book I have read on Tomato so far. I hope the author will keep up the good work and not let the book be unfinished or discontinued.

All are good, but one thing is that there are too many heroines. I can and like more heroines, but there are too many heroines. Sometimes I can't remember the name of any heroine [face covering] [face covering], master, senior sister, Aunt Qiu, witch, saint, Shangguan, who else is there... More than ten, I can't even remember, but overall it's pretty good.

Author, I really think you have written this book very well. I hope you can write it longer, because I have read your other books, which are basically completed at about 300,000 words. It is really a bit short. For example, there are some parts of this book that can be expanded on, such as getting along with the senior sister when I was a child, and how the master taught cultivation. These can be written, no However, the pace is too fast. The data of this book is very high. There are 300,000 online readers, not counting those who support books. It can be said to be a very strong book in Tomato. I hope the author can break through himself and maintain 500,000 words on the basis of 300,000 words. The target is 1 million words. The setting is to exceed 1 million words. Come on, author.

It's a very good book. It should be read as a romance novel. The author's emotional line is very well constructed. There are definitely a lot of criticisms for fantasy novels, but this book is one of the few books that I can read in one sitting. Good reviews. I'm almost finished reading it. The male protagonist is the image of a playboy in girls' minds. He's been very good since he was a kid. He likes to make promises too much, and arranges all kinds of unexpected coincidences to break the promises. He creates the kind of affectionate, dedicated, and passionate male protagonist. The changes (5 to 2) are too sad. The ending made me feel a little guilty. I feel like this is a female-channel romance novel with the appearance of a fantasy cultivator. I'm still not used to female-channel romance novels.

Tomato has read a lot of Shura scenes, and this one ranks in the top three in my mind, the best among fantasy. Each heroine has her own characteristics. I think the biggest highlight of this article is that even if these heroines agree with the protagonist's love interest, they will still be jealous and compete for favor. The Shura Fields are all very powerful, and the protagonist has no status. Unlike many harem stories, they are jealous from the beginning and finally agree to share the protagonist with other women. The disadvantage is that the words used in the Shura Field quarrel are repetitive, and the update speed is too slow.

I came into contact with the novel when I was in my third year of high school. I read it in one go and saw the story about Master's amnesia. It was so satisfying. The harem spreads across the three realms of humans, demons, and demons. The author's depiction of emotions is extremely delicate. The witch, Qingyue, Su Qingyi, Master, and Aunt Qiu, every female character is lovable. I remembered this book at the end of the first semester of my freshman year, and found that it was actually finished. Although the pace in the middle and later stages felt a little faster, it was still very good. This book means too much to me. I hope the author will continue to write unsystematic harem fantasy. Of course it would be best if I have a soft rice and a master [Adoration] Also, there are just too many harems. I think if it were over 1 million words, six or seven would be enough. That's not to say that the plots of each harem are not good, the scenes are too much to take care of. If I wrote hundreds of thousands more words, ten harems might be able to handle it. Senior Sister Bai Wei is really Bai Yueguang. It's a pity that the scenes are all at the beginning, and Qingyue seems to have gone offline after being angry. I originally thought that the author could write hundreds of thousands more words, but it ended. I hope that the next book can be about 23 million words. Of course, these are my personal expectations. The author will do what he can, and I will always support the author.

The plot is novel and exciting, I will keep following it, 😍😍

This is a harem novel that can rival Ji Cha's novels! A classic of harem literature, suitable for you who are passionate (as opposed to cold-blooded and ruthless) to read! The biggest feature of this book is the emotional description, pure daily harem writing, and the happy ending of the harem is also my favorite ending! The logic of this article is online, the concept and layout are reasonable, the character settings are in line with reality, and there are no poisonous points in the whole text! The author has great literary talent and strong writing skills. The novel has both funny plots and can make people cry. What flows between the lines is the direct affection and love between the heroine and the hero. Every relationship is a two-way affair. The author uses words and "empathy" to tightly capture the readers' hearts! The characters are richly drawn, and the emotions and psychology of the characters are described delicately. Although there are many female protagonists (in fact, I don't think there are too many), the ink is also divided into priorities. Each female protagonist has a distinct personality, and they are not all blindly agreeing with the male protagonist. They are also jealous, competing for favor, and repelling each other, and even fight. It almost brings several main female protagonists to life. This aspect is the best among the many novels I have read! In harem novels, the most taboo thing is that there are too many female protagonists, such as "keeping the ones behind and forgetting the ones in front", or the heroine being behind in combat power and being forgotten by the author in the later stages of the novel! This article does not have any problems in this regard. All the heroines are active until the finale of this article, and every heroine has a happy ending. This leaves readers with unfulfilled expectations and unable to stop! Finally, I give you a five-star review. I highly recommend it. It is definitely suitable for the "passionate" you to read! At the same time, I wish the author to continue his efforts and create more masterpieces! I also wish the author a successful career and a happy family! Oh, by the way, I have three full batteries every day!

@Callmedream I really love this book. Although there are extras, I am still sad that it is over. I feel uncomfortable for a long time. Many plots can be continued. The completion is a bit hasty, but it does not prevent it from spending a good time with me. In short, I really thank the author and highly recommend the author to write this book. True fans will stay. Sometimes just looking at the names of the original protagonists, they feel very kind. This will be the biggest relief for old readers who have some regrets about this book. Has the author changed the cover of the original book again? [Laughing] I like it very much. Good luck, author, and come back soon [laughing] @call me to dream