Beast Control************

Families, today is the first day of the verification period! I also worked hard to code 100,000 words. I hope everyone can support me and give me your opinions. I will try my best to change it [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Blowing kiss] Photos of each pet animal are placed here Family members, after reading the comments, I found that everyone really doesn't like the way Wu Feng writes about girls. Indeed, this is my first novel, so I'm sorry for not mastering it well! ! I hope newbies can just skip it if they don't like it. It won't have much impact on the plot, because at that time I didn't know what to write in order to improve the word count... Now I want to change it, only to find that it affects the whole body and can't be changed... However, the rhythm control and writing skills really need to be improved... I will wait until I can observe and study more works of my colleagues and seniors! ! Then improve yourself I can only try my best to ensure that I won't write such a plot again in the future! ! Please forgive me, everyone! !

Very nice, looking forward to the follow-up

When can I tame the second pet? I'm looking forward to it. Come on, it'll be great.

The plot is exciting and interesting, and it's great to watch! ! !

When writing a book, I never forget that Brother Hei is a true fan at first glance.

Can I write 100,000 words a day?

It's still good, support it

It's not a big problem, but the author likes the word "water" with a lot of white space, and there are more than 30 pictures of the plot where the main character is killed. I feel like a child playing house.

I saw Chapter 101 at 19:48 on August 30, 2024. Generally speaking, it is okay and worth reading [Send heart] [Like] [Please pay attention] Current rating 6.2

It feels pretty good-looking

The front is average, the back is okay, and the future is promising

I have to say that the author's xp is the same as mine [laughing]