[Fantasy literature + brand new practice system + reality of the world view + exercises, spiritual weapons, storage rings, etc. In the book will all explain the principles]
Original title: "I just saw the time traveler being hacked to death"
Current title: "The system always gives me strange spells"
I thought I was the son of destiny who obtained the system, but I didn't expect to see a mellow system on a planet seven thousand light years away.
When I was young, I was very happy to catch up with my beloved Bai Yueguang, but life forced me to live apart in a different place, and I was very unhappy.
I worked very hard in the sea of stars, and unknowingly, hundreds of thousands of years passed by my hard work.
The entire sea of stars is surrounded by earth soul fireworks, where mortal spirits and gods depend on each other.
Thank you for guiding me on the road...
Reader comments
It's okay. At first glance, this kind of plot looks good. But this is a small path, or a crooked path. After all, it is not the right path and will not go far. It feels like a knowing smile, but can you still laugh all the time?
As for the protagonist's attitude towards the two organizations and characters, temporarily called the heroine, senior brother, and deputy leader, it will be interesting to watch for a while, but the feedback brought by this kind of fun will not last long, and it is easy to skip it and become bored.
Later book friends, if you want to read it, just read a few dozen pictures and run away. This is the first time I've read a novel that gave me this feeling
I only read the name, introduction, and the content of the first three chapters. Five stars only represent goodwill, not good or bad. Next, I will write to the author.
Let's talk about the title first, the system gives a strange spell
It's been three chapters. I didn't see the system giving a spell, only a bottle, and the system also had a bad mouth. I looked at the title and came in to see what kind of strange spell it was. Is it three chapters? If so, would it be better to change the title to something like: "I Picked Up the Luck's Trash and Quietly Became a God" or something like that.
Let's talk about the introduction
The introduction did not convey any information to me. I can roughly tell that the system is rubbish, lick the son of luck, the son of luck dies, and find another one. What does this have to do with the title? There is too little information to see the cool points that your novel wants to convey. Write down your cool points, such as:
xx traveled to the world of xx
Accidentally obtained the garbage picking system
But this garbage seems a bit strange?
Xx used heaven grade bottle
xx's heaven-level spell
xx's heavenly wife
Hey, I love picking up trash
Children of Destiny: Why is he so strong?
Write down your cool points and contrasts.
In the first three chapters, in the first chapter, the protagonist commits suicide and travels through time to obtain the system, in the second chapter, the protagonist contacts the Son of Luck and obtains a reward, and in the third chapter, the protagonist uses the reward to take off directly.
In the first chapter, the first person is used, which is very dramatic, and the first person is switched to the third person.
And there is a long redundant plot. Who wants to see how the protagonist is deceived? This way, it can be passed through in one stroke. The protagonist is directly given a crisis. He will be killed tomorrow because of how much money he owes. Then the system solves the crisis and gets a reward bottle to become stronger. In the second chapter, he can directly kill the gangsters. If it is more enjoyable, it should be handed to the reader immediately.
Come on, author, the road is long and difficult, let's search up and down
Good-looking😄 Good-looking means good-looking. It's not enough for me to lose two words, but you insist on asking me to lose five. Am I pretty?
It's very good-looking, except that the main character is a dog licker, so there's nothing wrong with it.
It's a novel with a very novel theme. It's quite interesting, but the realm is a bit blurry. I forget it after reading it. There is no contrast or prominence. Anyway, the protagonist is quite weak. I read it slowly and I like this heroine very much.
Come on, author, I really like reading this, it's more interesting than anything I've seen before.
Even though I can't understand the realm battles, I think they're very awkward. But the character Pig's Foot is described very well. Like the mythical Zhao Gao, but not like him. Anyway, I think this is a very real ordinary person.
Not bad ~ keep going and don't stop
This is a pretty good start
The content is very lighthearted. But [face covering] the protagonist feels like a dog licker.
So good, so good, so good.
It's really interesting, cheers for the author
It's obviously very good-looking, but why does it have such a low rating from readers?
Like fine wine, it has a long aftertaste and endless aftertaste.
It can be good, but sometimes I personally feel that the plot, characters, and dialogue are not very smooth. [Praise]
I have something to say. Compared with those junk novels that are pushed on the home page and have too many words and too many points and old routines, this novel is just written with few points and too few supports. The routines and world view give me a refreshing feeling.
The setting is fun, keep it up
Why no comments? There are only a few lines in the whole book
Is it all about the poem describing the realm?
It's interesting. It's interesting to see that the protagonist will wake up after 30.
Very beautiful, I recommend everyone to watch it
It's funny with a hint of no bottom line, I really admire the author's literary talent [laughing]
Try to write a story that handsome guys and beautiful girls won't think is a waste of time after reading it.
The protagonist gave me the feeling of a little person rising up, and I didn't encounter many undesirable helpers on the way to practice. The protagonist's training skills are also quite weird, especially when he wears customized clothes, which makes him feel ridiculed to the max [crying with laughter].
There is also an old Gou Dao veteran named Wu Qiankun who has a pretty good character.
The current two heroines in this book are the tsundere Bai Fumei and the tea-making cat sister. I feel that the characters are relatively three-dimensional.
Comments are here for now.
Overall, it's very good-looking, and sometimes very funny.
Some of the ideas in the back are a little jumpy, and then the jump disappears. If I can't keep up, sometimes I just skip it and watch it. It's worth watching.
It's okay. At first glance, this kind of plot looks good. But this is a small path, or a crooked path. After all, it is not the right path and will not go far. It feels like a knowing smile, but can you still laugh all the time? As for the protagonist's attitude towards the two organizations and characters, temporarily called the heroine, senior brother, and deputy leader, it will be interesting to watch for a while, but the feedback brought by this kind of fun will not last long, and it is easy to skip it and become bored. Later book friends, if you want to read it, just read a few dozen pictures and run away. This is the first time I've read a novel that gave me this feeling
I only read the name, introduction, and the content of the first three chapters. Five stars only represent goodwill, not good or bad. Next, I will write to the author. Let's talk about the title first, the system gives a strange spell It's been three chapters. I didn't see the system giving a spell, only a bottle, and the system also had a bad mouth. I looked at the title and came in to see what kind of strange spell it was. Is it three chapters? If so, would it be better to change the title to something like: "I Picked Up the Luck's Trash and Quietly Became a God" or something like that. Let's talk about the introduction The introduction did not convey any information to me. I can roughly tell that the system is rubbish, lick the son of luck, the son of luck dies, and find another one. What does this have to do with the title? There is too little information to see the cool points that your novel wants to convey. Write down your cool points, such as: xx traveled to the world of xx Accidentally obtained the garbage picking system But this garbage seems a bit strange? Xx used heaven grade bottle xx's heaven-level spell xx's heavenly wife Hey, I love picking up trash Children of Destiny: Why is he so strong? Write down your cool points and contrasts. In the first three chapters, in the first chapter, the protagonist commits suicide and travels through time to obtain the system, in the second chapter, the protagonist contacts the Son of Luck and obtains a reward, and in the third chapter, the protagonist uses the reward to take off directly. In the first chapter, the first person is used, which is very dramatic, and the first person is switched to the third person. And there is a long redundant plot. Who wants to see how the protagonist is deceived? This way, it can be passed through in one stroke. The protagonist is directly given a crisis. He will be killed tomorrow because of how much money he owes. Then the system solves the crisis and gets a reward bottle to become stronger. In the second chapter, he can directly kill the gangsters. If it is more enjoyable, it should be handed to the reader immediately. Come on, author, the road is long and difficult, let's search up and down
Good-looking😄 Good-looking means good-looking. It's not enough for me to lose two words, but you insist on asking me to lose five. Am I pretty?
It's very good-looking, except that the main character is a dog licker, so there's nothing wrong with it.
It's a novel with a very novel theme. It's quite interesting, but the realm is a bit blurry. I forget it after reading it. There is no contrast or prominence. Anyway, the protagonist is quite weak. I read it slowly and I like this heroine very much.
Come on, author, I really like reading this, it's more interesting than anything I've seen before.
Even though I can't understand the realm battles, I think they're very awkward. But the character Pig's Foot is described very well. Like the mythical Zhao Gao, but not like him. Anyway, I think this is a very real ordinary person.
Not bad ~ keep going and don't stop
This is a pretty good start
The content is very lighthearted. But [face covering] the protagonist feels like a dog licker.
So good, so good, so good.
It's really interesting, cheers for the author
It's obviously very good-looking, but why does it have such a low rating from readers?
Like fine wine, it has a long aftertaste and endless aftertaste.
It can be good, but sometimes I personally feel that the plot, characters, and dialogue are not very smooth. [Praise]
I have something to say. Compared with those junk novels that are pushed on the home page and have too many words and too many points and old routines, this novel is just written with few points and too few supports. The routines and world view give me a refreshing feeling.
The setting is fun, keep it up
Why no comments? There are only a few lines in the whole book
Is it all about the poem describing the realm?
It's interesting. It's interesting to see that the protagonist will wake up after 30.
Very beautiful, I recommend everyone to watch it
It's funny with a hint of no bottom line, I really admire the author's literary talent [laughing]
Try to write a story that handsome guys and beautiful girls won't think is a waste of time after reading it.
The protagonist gave me the feeling of a little person rising up, and I didn't encounter many undesirable helpers on the way to practice. The protagonist's training skills are also quite weird, especially when he wears customized clothes, which makes him feel ridiculed to the max [crying with laughter]. There is also an old Gou Dao veteran named Wu Qiankun who has a pretty good character. The current two heroines in this book are the tsundere Bai Fumei and the tea-making cat sister. I feel that the characters are relatively three-dimensional. Comments are here for now.
Overall, it's very good-looking, and sometimes very funny. Some of the ideas in the back are a little jumpy, and then the jump disappears. If I can't keep up, sometimes I just skip it and watch it. It's worth watching.
Funny and light-hearted, but a bit confusing
It's well written, you can read it.
It's still possible to finish watching it
Okay, it's a very nice book.
Come on author, you write well.