[Xuanhuan fantasy + an entirely new cultivation system + a realistic world + the principles behind every cultivation technique, spirit artifact, storage ring, and more are explained]
Original title: My First Sight of a Transmigrator Was Him Getting Hacked to Death
Current title: The System Keeps Giving Me Strange Spells
I thought I was the chosen one when I got a System, but later I found it, round as a ball, on a planet seven thousand light-years away.
When I was young, I was thrilled to win the heart of the girl I loved. But life forced us to live apart, and I was miserable.
I worked hard to make my way in the sea of stars, and before I knew it, hundreds of thousands of years had passed.
The entire sea of stars is engulfed in terrestrial soulflame, where mortals and gods depend on one another.
Thank you for guiding me to take up the road pass...
It's okay. At first glance, this kind of plot looks good. But this is a small path, or a crooked path. After all, it is not the right path and will not go far. It feels like a knowing smile, but can you still laugh all the time? As for the protagonist's attitude towards the two organizations and characters, temporarily called the heroine, senior brother, and deputy leader, it will be interesting to watch for a while, but the feedback brought by this kind of fun will not last long, and it is easy to skip it and become bored. Later book friends, if you want to read it, just read a few dozen pictures and run away. This is the first time I've read a novel that gave me this feeling
I only read the name, introduction, and the content of the first three chapters. Five stars only represent goodwill, not good or bad. Next, I will write to the author. Let's talk about the title first, the system gives a strange spell It's been three chapters. I didn't see the system giving a spell, only a bottle, and the system also had a bad mouth. I looked at the title and came in to see what kind of strange spell it was. Is it three chapters? If so, would it be better to change the title to something like: "I Picked Up the Luck's Trash and Quietly Became a God" or something like that. Let's talk about the introduction The introduction did not convey any information to me. I can roughly tell that the system is rubbish, lick the son of luck, the son of luck dies, and find another one. What does this have to do with the title? There is too little information to see the cool points that your novel wants to convey. Write down your cool points, such as: xx traveled to the world of xx Accidentally obtained the garbage picking system But this garbage seems a bit strange? Xx used heaven grade bottle xx's heaven-level spell xx's heavenly wife Hey, I love picking up trash Children of Destiny: Why is he so strong? Write down your cool points and contrasts. In the first three chapters, in the first chapter, the protagonist commits suicide and travels through time to obtain the system, in the second chapter, the protagonist contacts the Son of Luck and obtains a reward, and in the third chapter, the protagonist uses the reward to take off directly. In the first chapter, the first person is used, which is very dramatic, and the first person is switched to the third person. And there is a long redundant plot. Who wants to see how the protagonist is deceived? This way, it can be passed through in one stroke. The protagonist is directly given a crisis. He will be killed tomorrow because of how much money he owes. Then the system solves the crisis and gets a reward bottle to become stronger. In the second chapter, he can directly kill the gangsters. If it is more enjoyable, it should be handed to the reader immediately. Come on, author, the road is long and difficult, let's search up and down
Good-looking😄 Good-looking means good-looking. It's not enough for me to lose two words, but you insist on asking me to lose five. Am I pretty?
It's very good-looking, except that the main character is a dog licker, so there's nothing wrong with it.
It's a novel with a very novel theme. It's quite interesting, but the realm is a bit blurry. I forget it after reading it. There is no contrast or prominence. Anyway, the protagonist is quite weak. I read it slowly and I like this heroine very much.
Even though I can't understand the realm battles, I think they're very awkward. But the character Pig's Foot is described very well. Like the mythical Zhao Gao, but not like him. Anyway, I think this is a very real ordinary person.
Come on, author, I really like reading this, it's more interesting than anything I've seen before.
This is a pretty good start
The content is very lighthearted. But 🤦 the protagonist feels like a dog licker.
Not bad ~ keep going and don't stop