Apocalypse Rebirth: I'm Done Slacking Off

I lit up the stars just to write about my own feelings. Overall, the story is good, and the characters are well drawn. However, there are too many typos and omissions, and some words are repeated a lot. I couldn't stand it when I saw the first cold wave coming. It was too uncomfortable to read. I also read the last chapter, and there was another cold wave, earthquake, drought, and acid rain. I didn't read the middle part, so I couldn't connect it. Code words are not easy to write and cherish. I look forward to the author's new work bringing surprises to everyone.

Very good, different. I never thought there was a parallel world

Not bad, please keep up the good work, author [currently working on the manuscript]