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I found this book through book recommendation. I really like this book, especially the first few chapters. The depiction of the protagonist is great. I like the part where the Lighter struggles with his identity (although the Lighter cannot come back). The part about politics is something that many Transformers fans have not touched upon. I am very happy that the author wrote it and it was brilliant! What is a pity is that I feel that the author's description of the Decepticons is a bit weak, but considering the perspective problem, it is understandable. Overall, I still quite like this book, and I will definitely recommend it to others if I have the opportunity!

So pretty! ! It was literally written on my xp! ! It's just not enough to read, and it's another book that outlives the author! (Sad) Looking forward to Ranxi falling off his horse in front of Optimus Prime hehe... Also: You have an ass, I have an ass. Dear author, we are a perfect match! [KISS][KISS][KISS][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart] No! Enough! Look! (Screaming) (Twisted) (Crawling all over the ground) (Crawling in the dark) (Learning to walk like a zombie) (Roaring meaninglessly) (Geezing for air) (Geezing for air) (Geezing for air) (Screaming) (Twisted) (Crawling in the darkness) (Fighting with the orangutan) (Rolling on the ground )(whining)(jumping into the sea)(chasing sharks in the sea to eat)(squirming darkly)(rolling)(crawling violently)(spasmodic)(squirming)(eerie growl)(crawling)(splitting)(walking ashore)(spasmodic)(squirming)(twisted walking)

This book is the best Transformers novel I have ever seen in a foreign persimmon [laughs] Burning Breathing, the author really wrote Burning Breathing lifelikely [Human words: The author just wrote Burning Breathing alive! ] Love this book so much! [Darkness] [Distortion] [Crawling with ferocity] [Low roar] [Being seen] [Panic] [Return to original]🌚👍

I hope the author will continue writing. This is the best novel I have ever read. Many Transformers novels have been discontinued, so I don't want this novel to be discontinued.

The author writes so well, it's super awesome [love][love][love]

Five-star masterpiece, highly recommended So far, I am very satisfied with the author's writing style and the character characteristics he captured. It is really an excellent work. I am very grateful to the author for his love and contribution to the circle. I will keep following it. Come on, author! I'll give you a follow-up review when I have time. A good book can be said to be unique. The plot has ups and downs, but it doesn't deviate from the main line. I couldn't stop reading it. It's like a top-notch dessert, sweet but not greasy, dense and mellow. It can be seen from the lines that the author has a strong foundation. Anyone who knows tfp well can understand it. For example, I mainly play g1 and idw, but I also know about 08, tfp, siege and so on. After reading so many chapters, the content and plot can be completely followed. This is also thanks to the author's strong creative ability. Thank you to the author for allowing me to read such a good book. Having said all this, do you understand what I mean? If you want to read TFtfp's books, come and read them together! ! ! Treasure author! Treasure books! (In tears. Jpg)

Really great! I feel like I have a good relationship with everyone in Burning Breath. I only read about 30 chapters. I thought I could finish them quickly, but it turned out that the number of words in the chapters is quite large. One chapter is worth two chapters? The author's writing is really great, so keep up the good work!

It's really good. I have never been exposed to the original work or this type of fan fiction before. This book has a clear context and outstanding character descriptions. I also like the style, but I didn't know the rating was so low? Did I forget to rate it? I like it very much, so I'll rate it first in case I forget to rate it.

Very nice Qing Shuiwen, now let's discuss hot topics on Cybertron How many biological genes are mixed with the companion of Cybertron leader Optimus Prime? Rough estimate, at least five types (personal answer) Who will they give birth to the little fire? Hey, blindly guessing the breath, after all Zhuzi is not in good health (personal answer) Why is Megatron willing to be Optimus Prime's lieutenant? Because of love~ (personal answer) And, among Optimus Prime, Megatron, Burning Breath, the giant ferocious leader Chong Yunxiao, and the six-faced warrior newly cultivated by Shockwave, who has the highest strength value? Okay, I'm stumped, but I think I have the highest fighting ability and can fight them to the nines. /Confidence One punch from them will knock me down (personal answer)

I really like it. The writing and the plot of the chapters are very well controlled. It's refreshing and it pokes me. The previous book, Sonic Wave, poked me like this. It's definitely going to be popular. Come on, author.

Great! The characters have super distinct personalities, and some details are well controlled (in short, I really like them) Although I don't know who the CP is in the end (hmm), but np is not bad (whisper By the way, the breath-burning baby is for attack, right? Right? (Said super angrily

The storyline is compact and exciting. The author uses imaginative scene creation and wonderful action scenes to bring readers a wonderful adventure. By describing the intricate relationships between characters and the day-to-day struggles, the books reflect the complexity of human nature and the dilemma of choice in a changing situation. In the creation, the author maintained the core elements of the Transformers series, while giving the characters a more in-depth inner world and emotional expression. Readers can see the growth and changes of the characters in the book, as well as the persistence and courage they show in difficult situations. This kind of delicate character description makes it easier to empathize with the characters, adding to the fun and depth of reading. It not only retains the charm of the original work, but also brings new experience and inspiration to readers through re-creation and thinking. It has unique personality and value among fan fiction works.

Very good, come on! This book is a good place to die, and there is so much excitement here The vastness and tranquility of Toyoi... Please take a good look before leaving. Take a look! When will you update? One page a day is not enough, you will starve readers to death!

I read two chapters at first but didn't get into it. Later I found out that there is actually a very deep truth to it. I quite like this kind of subject matter. I can't say that I didn't get into it. The main reason is that I read too many novels, so I forgot about it after reading it.

It's a beautiful story. It's hard to believe that I would find such an excellent novel on Tomato. It's like swimming in radio waves from another world. The author's writing style and control of the plot show readers a vivid and true history. I have to say that it is a pity that I missed this work at the first time because of the title, but I am very happy that I finally got to know her. Excellent writing style, excellent characters, superb ability to grasp characters and plots, and a wonderful story.

The writing is so touching! Come on, author!

The author's writing is superb. The first 10 or so pictures are really difficult for those who want to read quick and refreshing articles. But if you don't watch it, it will be difficult to understand the story between the protagonists.

What surprised me about this book was the author's thinking on the topic of revolution, coupled with the distinctive personalities of the characters in the book, which made me fascinated by it. I have been reading books for seven or eight years, and it is rare to see this article. It is very good.

This is the first time I have seen a fan novel with such rich characters, and it is also the first novel with a mechanical insect as the protagonist (I really like this kind of extra-human creature). I hope the future plots will continue to be exciting. Good luck, author ξ(✿＞◡❛)

The author's writing is so good! Your ideological and political scores are perfect, right? ! ! ! Regardless of the protagonist's character or setting, it feels like reading a literary work. I feel like I want to draw the entire book online. I have never come across such fan fiction, but the cover almost put me off, so I stayed here through book reviews😋

"Invincible Giant" is very good-looking, which satisfies my enjoyment of writing. The author writes "Invincible Giant" very good-looking. I am not a fan of the original Transformers book, but a fan of the movie. From this book, I also learned about the plot of the original work, and I like it very much! The author writes really well! Full of faintness! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is the second Transformers fanfic I've read that suits my taste. The first one was in jj, but I forgot what it was called and the author hasn't finished updating it. Both of them suit my taste [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's a very good Transformers fanfic. The characters' changes in mentality and the words they speak fit the background of the Transformers world. It feels like the history that really happened in a parallel universe was observed and shared by the author. I thank the author for allowing me to see this wonderful world.

After reading it, I only had one overwhelming feeling: I am your dog! ! ! So cute, cute and handsome. He was a strong and miserable character in the early stage, but he was a greedy little bug in the later stage. In the end, he finally lived a happy life with Zhuzi. It was really sweet.

I finished reading it in 2 days. Although I don't know much about the Transformers anime, I can understand everything the author wrote. It's a bit cruel. Optimus Prime was always chasing Ren Xi in the front. I thought he would be the one at the bottom, but in the middle I thought he was standing on the wrong side. Later, Qingtian assisted again, and then exchanged again. Looking at the previous introduction, two strong players, I understood that they were attacking each other. The writing is really beautiful [like]

Super pretty! The characterization is great! The psychological description, fighting description, atmosphere creation and character relationships are all great! I really like burning my breath.

This breath-burning setting really irritates me! ! Great author, please keep updating! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

I love it so much! There is no shortcut to this kind of little-by-little growth, it all depends on yourself. This kind of independent protagonist is really rare. Come on, author [laughing][laughing][laughing][learned][learned][learned][top post][top post][top post][ask for updates][send my heart][learned] It feels a bit empty, even though it has a good and satisfying ending, maybe it's because the characters are so well created, and it's a bit unfinished. Come on! ! ! ! Waiting for you another one♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥

Love this book! In terms of narrative and character creation, the writing is delicate and vivid. I really like the character of the protagonist Ran Xi, who always has his own ideas, persistence, and growth.

The plot logic and the description of the protagonist are very good, it feels flesh and blood, and the rhythm of the plot is also well controlled. The writing style is actually very strong and does not look like a primary school student. Although it is not like those big authors, it is a debut novel for a fan fiction. It can be seen that the author loves Transformers. Come on! ! !ヽ(๑°3°๑)ﾉ♡The setting is very interesting, and it's even more annoying [laughing evilly][sending my heart]

This book is the best one I have read in the Transformers section of Soft Persimmon. I really like Burn-Breath and Lightworker. The character creation in the early stage was directly like a god. However, after the rebirth, I didn't like Burn-Breath's character. I still like the cold, violent and gentle gladiator Burn-Breath. His personality has changed too much, but overall the quality is still online. Not enough! ! ! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]